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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. oleh no means am I forcing anda to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless anda truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before anda start posting. It can be as little as a bio, atau as big as an entire artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no lebih than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he atau she is in, can pull out another trick out of his atau her hat.
4. If anda absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his atau her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely acak and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when anda have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the selanjutnya hari you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own atau is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the baru saja outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, atau claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If anda must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, atau so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if anda do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot atau stabbed in the heart, then pop up menit later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull atau flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to atau dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to atau dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created oleh you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing atau potential character is a Mary Sue, atau if anda suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, anda can take link. If anda want, anda can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case anda were curious, which anda probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all anda want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, oleh no means do anda have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
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posted by SilverWings13
Blaze yanked the steering wheel to the left, causing the truck to swerved a full 360. He ducked as the gun api reached him. The windows shattered and glass sprayed across the empty seats of the Jeep.
Blaze slammed the door shut and crouched behind the truck, a steel shield. The gunfire ceased a moment as the men reloaded from behind their barricade of overturned cop cars. 
"Ruse!" he shouted, tightening the red bandana that served as his mask. The telepath sprinted from his cover of the alley and skidded to his friend's side. "About damn time," Ruse muttered, breathing heavily. 
"Traffic,"...
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posted by Blitz359
"Your mission here is quite simple," began Cole. "Simply exterminate the head chairman that controls the factory near this location. anda need to do this with stealth and with haste; if anda are spotted, it is in your own hands to escape." Richi looked at Cole with disbelief. "So anda expect us to sneak into this factory, assassinate the man who controls the building, and then sneak back out before anyone sees us?"

Cole looked at the blonde with a face plastered with mockery. "And here I thought anda had at least above-par intelligence. Seems like I was wrong if anda need your instructions told to...
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posted by Robin_Love
“We need to know what's going on!” Alek exclaimed.
“Yeah but Tara won't tell us,” Silver rationalized.
“But there is one who might know,” Ciel interrupted.
“Yeah. Except she's completely dropped off the face of the Earth! Not even batman could locate her!”
“Silver's right. We have no way of knowing where she is! “
Fang, who had been leaning against the wall, held up two fingers as if to “I have your solution.” They looked over at him at the sudden gesture.
“You three forget I'm married to her confident.”
“Devin knows where she is?”
Fang nodded.
“And anda knew the whole...
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ARNING:

This Fanfiction has been rated "M" for Mature. Reader's Discretion is advised. Extreme Violence, adult language & content, sexual content, debatable actions oleh characters, public trauma, extreme cussing, and other questionable events will occur. It is highly suggested that viewers younger than fifteen do not read this. It is also the author's suggestion that if anyone of any age feels offended oleh any of the content mentioned above, that they do not read it.

NOTE:

This fanfiction was originally delayed two weeks due to the tragic shootings in Aurora, Colorado. Events in this fanfiction...
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The men on the fallen one's left and right both collapsed as well. Declan caught a glimpse if silver as a throwing pisau embedded in one's chest. He followed the arch up to one of the upper balconies.
There stood a feminine figure completely clad in solid black. A biarawan, penutup cerobong asap was pulled up to hide the lower half of her face; her fair hair was pulled back in a long braid. She had one boot up on the railing, taking aim as she launched her blades at the intruders.
The doors of the ballroom were suddenly opened and guests starting rushing out in a desperate wave toward freedom and safety.
"Nic," Declan...
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"You're awake?"
Aryess nodded without taking her eye of the view through the floor-to-ceiling tinted windows of the sky scraper.
The man walked up and stood beside his sister, examining her out of the corner of his eye.
The teen wore loose sweat-pants and a black tank-top. She had tied her hair back in a braid, allowing full view of her storm grey irises, dark as the clouds were gathering outside. Her face was drawn and paler than usual and every muscle was tensed.
"No offense, but anda look like crap," Declan stated.
"I feel like crap," she admitted. "Where's my suit?"
"Getting repaired. The entire...
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Cast:
Blade-Sheriff Sparks
Terror-Sheriff #2 :D
Wildside Lovers- Tyler/South/Ty and Becca
Mean Billy Green-Phoebe
Sheriff's Posse- Mercy
Fin
Fang
Silver
Bentley.

Oh BTW this placed a little farther back in time so that explains why they use horses..:/ the italic-ed words are the lyrics.. i tried to include some of the song in the dialogue.. but it doesn't mean the people are bernyanyi it! it's just the lyrics..


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Well this is how it starts
Two pasangan in the dark,
On the run, from the one,
That they call Sheriff Sparks,
Six guns oleh their sides,
And bullets round their waist,...
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posted by BloodyMascara_
 Harmonian
Harmonian
Harmonian.








Name: Ciel Norrian.

Alias: Harmonian.

Appearance: 6'0 tall, purple eyes, white hair.

Gender: Male.

Civies: Usually a white t-shirt and jeans will due, an occational jaket aswell.

Hero-Suit: Blue tailcoat, a top-hat and black jeans.

Weapons: He carries around a spoon. And a pocket pisau he carries around in civies. And a (A spoon XP) And with his power, (see powers) can make a weapon.

Skills: Fair bernyanyi voice, extreemly agile.

Powers: When he sings a special chorus, he can create atau repair items such as..... a kalung made of pearls, he sings "Build it up with silver and pearl, silver...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Since I kind of deleted Nudge.....

Name: Jessica “Jess” Crane
Age: 15
Alias: Sift
Occupation: Hero
Powers: Escape artist
Able to generate force fields
Sift is skilled in hand-to-hand combat. In addition to being a master of derek, crane style Kung-Fu, which she utilizes in a self-created style of combat known as "violent dancing" which also uses drunken boxing and makes use of her long arms and legs.
Sift greatly understands the power and uses of fear. With this knowledge, she knows how to use words to affect a person's actions, once managing to drive two men to suicide with nothing but words. She also...
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posted by Skittles98
Kurt pulled the gauze out and gingerly wrapped it around my wound. I bit my lip as pain shot through my arm.
"Why did they want you?" Wanda asked
"I was bait. Bait for a certain father that never cared for me" I spat. Laura, Wanda and Laurna all snarled in unison.
"You misunderstand, mon Cheri. I do care for my daughter" Remy said, coming up to us.
"Gambit" I snarled
"Bon soir, mon ami" he grinned. I slapped him across the face.
"You're the reason I'm in this mess in the first place!" I shrieked
“And I am sorry anda had to get involved with our family rivalry” he said
“No you’re not. You’re...
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posted by GlitterPuff
March 22nd, 2014

Rene was walking down the street, on her way to the Zeta tunnel in her area. She wore her normal casual clothing: Jeans, sneakers, and a silly t-shirt a thirteen-year-old would wear. The red head snuck into an alley way and walked over to the phone boot. She opened the door and went through, a small light shinning as she walked though.

As soon as she came inside the cave, she quickly scurried to her secret locker in the training room. As she came in, she tapped on the dinding in a few spots and a small door opened, revealing potions, books, weapons, and scrolls. The red head quickly...
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