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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. oleh no means am I forcing anda to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless anda truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before anda start posting. It can be as little as a bio, atau as big as an entire artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no lebih than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he atau she is in, can pull out another trick out of his atau her hat.
4. If anda absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his atau her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely acak and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when anda have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the selanjutnya hari you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own atau is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the baru saja outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, atau claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If anda must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, atau so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if anda do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot atau stabbed in the heart, then pop up menit later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull atau flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to atau dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to atau dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created oleh you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing atau potential character is a Mary Sue, atau if anda suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, anda can take link. If anda want, anda can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case anda were curious, which anda probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all anda want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, oleh no means do anda have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
"And what exactly are these 'heroes' giving us nthing but destruction for property damage!" the news reported yelled at the camera. Caleb looked at the TV to his sister sitting on their dipan, sofa then the Tv and his sister. She had a placid face while she ate her cereal. "Day why are anda watching the news?" he asked her. "I hate this guy" she answered still watching him. "Then why are anda listening to him?" Caleb shook his head.

"i don't know but he pisses me off" she glared. Sitting down with his roti panggang he grabbed the remote. "okay let's watch some cartoons!" he flipped through channels. "see lets...
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 Dalila
Dalila
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Dalila Summners
Nickname: Dali
Reason atau meaning of name: Dalila means “Gentle” in Egyptian
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Dark brown/black
Height: 5’ 7
Clothing Style: Ancient
Best Physical Feature: Skin

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: I have none
Your Guilty Pleasure: Scratches
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Loud barking dogs
Your Ambition for the Future: To thrive!

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Another 5 menit won’t hurt
What anda Think About the Most: My partner
What anda Think About Before Bed: Finally some rest!
You Think Your Best Quality...
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 Terror
Terror
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Terror
Nickname: Ter
Reason atau meaning of name: Terror means fear
Eye Color: Piercing blue
Hair Style/Color: Platinum blonde
Height: 5’12
Clothing Style: Whatever’s comfortable
Best Physical Feature: I don’t know ( His eyes)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: That’d be telling
Your Guilty Pleasure: Sleep
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: People
Your Ambition for the Future: Living?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: I slept?
What anda Think About the Most: Nothing
What anda Think About Before Bed: Must be tired
You Think Your Best Quality Is: Nothing

LAYER FOUR:...
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 Alix Penn; Joan of Arc
Alix Penn; Joan of Arc
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Alix Penn to others, Joan of Arc to heroes alike
Nickname: Alix, Alice, Jo, atau Joan
Reason atau meaning of name: Alix means “of noble kind”; Penn meaning “Enclosure”
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Long, wavy, light brown/dark blonde
Height: 5’4”
Clothing Style: Modest
Best Physical Feature: Eyes

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: I fear nothing
Your Guilty Pleasure: French Cuisine
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Those who think themselves higher than others
Your Ambition for the Future: To protect

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: What teh to drink?...
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posted by Robin_Love
The moon was high in the sky oleh the time she got home, her slinky black dress already too uncomfortable. She took off her heels and put the gun back in her safe. She sighed as she went to the kitchen, prepping a glass with scotch from her little bar before taking a sip. She walked into her room and put the glass on the bedside table. She slipped off the dress and dressed in a pair of black shorts and a red t-shirt too large for her frame. Seeing a red light on the phone, she played the recorded message.
“Hey Becca, it’s Devin. I know anda wanted to be alone, but Fang and I-”
The recording...
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posted by SilverWings13
The endless halls of the immense cathedral were quiet, but not silent. Wind whispered through cracks in the ancient walls and wooden floors, like ghosts seeping in and out of the hallways. Tall stained glass windows allowed in colorful light during the day. The infirmary’s windows, however, were plain glass, and the moonlight filtered into the room as soft white light between shadows. The only color came from a single, small rose stain-glass window high above the door. Nestled in the center of the purple and emas petals was a tiny angel. The malaikat had its eyes closed and head bowed over the...
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Pandora Elizabeth Diana Rouge
Code Name: Eclipse
Nickname: Phoebe
Reason atau meaning of name: Pandora in Greek means 'all gifts'. She donned the name, Phoebe, first for safety reasons, however, Pandora is quite old fashioned. She came to use the name Eclipse as a metaphor, her darkness covers her light. Her family is of French heritage hence Rouge, which is red in French.
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Straight, medium length, dark raven colour.
Height: 5’6
Clothing Style: Edgy, combat ready. Likes her bodysuits
Best Physical Feature: My families eyes.

LAYER TWO:...
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I am so obsessed with this song. It’s about choosing a life for yourself that others judge anda for, even though it’s the right thing for you. It has a sense of isolation that gives me major Marcus Antoni vibes.
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 Ara
Ara
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Arabella Conley
Nickname: Ara
Reason atau meaning of name: Ara meaning water; Conley meaning Fire
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: long, blonde
Height: 5’5”
Clothing Style: Modern
Best Physical Feature: Eyes

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Loosing my mobility
Your Guilty Pleasure: Donuts
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Snobs
Your Ambition for the Future: To be big

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Time for greens!
What anda Think About the Most: Dance
What anda Think About Before Bed: Time to rest!
You Think Your Best Quality Is: My confidence

LAYER FOUR: WHAT’S...
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rubah betina
Vixen
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Carly
Nickname: Carls
Reason atau meaning of name: Small Champion in Gaelic
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Red, straight and long
Height: 5’1
Clothing Style: Simple
Best Physical Feature: My eyes

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: People
Your Guilty Pleasure: Noodles
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Smelly people
Your Ambition for the Future: Make her proud

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Where am I?
What anda Think About the Most: My past
What anda Think About Before Bed: What happened that hari
You Think Your Best Quality Is: My passion

LAYER FOUR: WHAT’S BETTER?...
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posted by SilverWings13
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Marcus Antoni Wilhemovich Rurik
Nickname: Marcus, Saint, Marky Mark (reserved oleh Cal only)
Reason atau meaning of name: named after Marcus Antonius, the Roman politician and general under Cesar who played a critical role in the transformation of the Roman Republic into the autocratic Roman Empire; Saint because of his allegiance to the Knights Templar
Eye Color: cobalt
Hair Style/Color: almost black, curly
Height: 6' 0"
Clothing Style: always in style, on the expensive side
Best Physical Feature: them cheekbones could cut someone

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: ......
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posted by Robin_Love
Darkness had overcome the city, another moonless night. He stumbled down the street, leaning on the dinding when his feet couldn’t hold him alone. His clothes were bathed in the night, black as they were. His eyes were clouded over and he stopped to catch his breath. The few people left on the streets glanced at him as they passed. It was odd for someone so young to have so many issues. He took a long drink from the cup in his hands before throwing it away with a huff.
He continued on his way, hunched over as he made his way home. halaman awal was an optimistic term for the abandoned shack he had found....
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 Princess Callista Ashari Aldric
Princess Callista Ashari Aldric
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Callista Ashari Aldric
Nickname: Calli
Reason atau meaning of name: One who is most beautiful; voracious and soft spoken; Wise ruler
Eye Color: purple
Hair Style/Color: Red, to shoulders
Height: 4’ 11
Clothing Style: Medieval
Best Physical Feature: Smile

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Being alone
Your Guilty Pleasure: Rose petals and cream
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Abusive knights
Your Ambition for the Future: To be loved

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: What hari is it?
What anda Think About the Most: My brothers
What anda Think About Before Bed: My heart...
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 Callista Aldric
Callista Aldric
Might become a multipart series. IDK yet.


He walked deep into a forest, looking around. Where was he? What had happened? He couldn’t remember. But the further he walked, the thinner the trees got till he was eventually in a meadow. And the sun was shining brightly, dazzling the river water in rays of light. He went closer to the water, dipping his toes in the chill. He sighed softly. How long had it been since he was this relaxed? He couldn’t remember. He pushed the red hair out of his face as he walked back into the meadow. Then he stopped. There was a girl picking wildflowers. She looked...
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 Kai Conley
Kai Conley
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name:Kai Conley
Nickname: None
Reason atau meaning of name: api
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Style/Color: Blonde, wild
Height: 5’10”
Clothing Style: Modern?
Best Physical Feature: Everything ;)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Dying without living
Your Guilty Pleasure: Video Games
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Fakes
Your Ambition for the Future: To live

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: I’m not ready for this
What anda Think About the Most: Fire
What anda Think About Before Bed: Finally over
You Think Your Best Quality Is: I don’t judge

LAYER FOUR: WHAT’S BETTER?
Single...
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