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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. oleh no means am I forcing anda to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless anda truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before anda start posting. It can be as little as a bio, atau as big as an entire artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no lebih than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he atau she is in, can pull out another trick out of his atau her hat.
4. If anda absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his atau her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely acak and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when anda have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the selanjutnya hari you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own atau is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the baru saja outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, atau claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If anda must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, atau so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if anda do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot atau stabbed in the heart, then pop up menit later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull atau flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to atau dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to atau dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created oleh you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing atau potential character is a Mary Sue, atau if anda suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, anda can take link. If anda want, anda can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case anda were curious, which anda probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all anda want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, oleh no means do anda have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by ShadowYJ
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Name: Shadow

Secret Identity: Dana Kylie Gracias (Unknown to the team)

Other Aliases: Phantom Ninja, Wild Cat, Ninja-Girl

Age: 13

Appearance: Thick black wavy hair chest length, cokelat brown eyes, tanned skin, slender but muscular for a girl. In-spite of the built she is petite and looks small for her years in both looks and maturity.

Personality: Since her birthday is on April 30th, she is a Taurus, which de-fore makes her stubborn, honest, and a natural born leader. She is also immature, funny, mischievous, cheeky, intelligent, creative, and very child-like. She can be acak at some times...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
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 Villain
Villain
I know, I have a quite a few, but this one, is a REALLY important key to Sifts past.

Name: Blake Douglas
Alias: Kid Devil
Age: 16
Occupation: Villain
Powers: Blood bending, acrobatics, hand-to-hand combat
Past:Blake was introduced to crime at the age of 4, when his parents gave into robbing for money. At age 7 Blake joined Riddler in his fight against Batman, at age 9 Blade watched and helped his new teammate Jessica, train. Now, at age 16, Blake hopes for the hari that Jess returns to villainous side of humanity.
Other: Riddlers first apprentice
-Keeps a pisau in his boot
-Dated Jess before she left.
-DON'T ask him about his Alias...it's a bad idea.
 Civvies
Civvies
 Jess and Blake
Jess and Blake
Artemis panicked as she hung up the phone. If anda Luke found her like this he'd be mad...She helped her unconscious mother out of the closet to her bed. She made her way to the dapur where, where they kept the first-aid kit. She began rushing to clean up the small, but numerous cuts. Several bruises were exposed on her selanjutnya and midriff, from being chocked and kicked at.
Someone knocked on the door. Artemis looked up. "crap..." She muttered to herself. And before she could respond the door opened and Luke walked in.
"Arty. anda ha-" Luke stopped, looking at her. Noticing all her injuries....
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posted by Robin_Love
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 Just cause I found it
Just cause I found it
The sound was haunting, alluring. It overruled her senses, driving her into some sweet perfection and causing her to crave it. It was dangerous, unknowing. And it seduced her. Her eyes opened, looking into light purple. Hypnotizing purple. A hand stroked her cheek lightly. The lebih she stared, the lebih she couldn't pull her gaze away.
“Glad anda could gabung me. I wouldn't want to be called a liar. Are anda ready?”
She nodded, not looking away. He removed his hand from her cheek and helped her up. She kept her eyes on him as he lead her into a different room. He turned to her.
“Get dressed....
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Source: none belong to me.
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posted by Robin_Love
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 When his hair was brown
When his hair was brown
Name: Aidan Wolffe
Alias: Frost
Powers: ice, snow, weather manipulation, intangibility, skilled with a staff
Occupation: “Guardian”; Hero
Weakness/Limits: He can only be intangible for a short time; he can only make it snowy atau rainy with his weather manipulation (so he can make a blizzard); he has a to his ice-make magic.
History: Aidan has been mistaken as Jack Frost since his powers arrived. He was only 9 when it happened and, in fear of being shunned oleh his parents and friends, he ran away. However, it wasn't long before he realized that some problems were worse than his fears. He...
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Source: Google?
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posted by Robin_Love
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When he awoke for the detik time, he thought of a million things, coherency streaming his mind and starting the engines of his very unique brain. Out of the millions and millions of streaming thoughts, he pulled out three and processed them:
Where the heck was he?
Why was there loud knocking at “his” door so early?
Where had his snuggle buddy from last night wandered off to?
This third pertanyaan brought up a million others that he was less than happy to deal with at the minute. He rubbed his eyes and yawned, stretching his arms out as he called entrance; anything to get the noise causing his...
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posted by Robin_Love
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Okay. So this was a challenge I took up. Please don't be offended oleh anything. I'm menulis from how I feel the characters would react. And this never really happens. Consider it like an AU. Also, I apologize for the weird ending. I've never done this particular scene before. Enjoy!



She honestly had no idea how this had happened. She had quietly been sitting on the couch, minding her own business, when one of her teammates (she honestly didn't care who it had been) suggested they play a game. Out of no where, a horde of people seemingly materialized, and she knew that three she saw weren't even...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
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Honesty had subjected the Hexagons to him; he commanded, they obeyed. Snowflake and the others were not succeeding at getting their comrades back to their original selves. But soon the meja started to turn.

Snowflake came close swinging her sword at Honesty, but to her sudden surprise someone grabbed her oleh the hair and threw her in the dinding that once chained her comrades. She crashed through the wall, rolling onto the floor of the room behind it. She struggle to her feet as Jaivus stepped in behind her with sapphire glowing eyes and chest.
"Ashley dates this guy?" She asked herself rhetorically....
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added by Robin_Love
Source: (C) to artist
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posted by Robin_Love
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Name: Jessie

Likes: Gardening

Best Friend: Joan

Loves: Animals

Dislikes: Poaching

Worst Habit: Sleeping at her desk

Personal Secret: Vegetarian
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
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LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Tristan West!
Reason atau meaning of name: Urban dictionary says I'm most amazing-est guy there ever is.
Eye Color: Greeeeen.
Hair Style/Color: I'm a ginger.
Height: Like... 5'6, 5'7?
Clothing Style: It varies, usually what ever makes me most comfortable... like t-shirts.
Best Physical Feature: Freckles?

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: The speed force really trips me out man.
Your Guilty Pleasure: Eating like 4 tubs of ice cream at once. Massive ones.
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Super super slow people. Like, penyu, kura-kura speed.
Your Ambition for the Future: I haven't diberikan it...
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posted by SilverWings13
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 Perhaps in need of a trim
Perhaps in need of a trim
I hope I did this correctly :P

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Leon "Aleksander" Alexievich Romanov I
Reason atau meaning of name: My mother christined me Leon, but I was unaware until I was an adult and grown comfortable with going oleh the name I had chosen for myself, Aleksander... *mutters* And my father was Alexie Romanov.
Eye Color: Pale morning sky
Hair Style/Color: White as a dove's, perhaps in need of a trim
Height: 6'5" ((MY BABY GIANT))
Clothing Style: light colored dress shirts and jeans... No ties. Ever.
Best Physical Feature: Being taller than many can be fun? ((Dat jaw line tho))

LAYER TWO:...
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posted by Robin_Love
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LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Becca. No need for more.
Reason atau meaning of name: It's just a short version of my real name..
Eye Color: Brown. Like...dark almost black..
Hair Style/Color: Black. (Like her soul!) Hey!
Height: Um I'm about 5'9”
Clothing Style: Depends on the mood
Best Physical Feature: My what? (Her legs. She has dancer legs)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Thunderstorms
Your Guilty Pleasure: Beating up the bad guys
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Idiots. (Uhh...)
Your Ambition for the Future: To live?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Why am I up?
What anda Think About the Most:...
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