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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. oleh no means am I forcing anda to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless anda truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before anda start posting. It can be as little as a bio, atau as big as an entire artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no lebih than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he atau she is in, can pull out another trick out of his atau her hat.
4. If anda absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his atau her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely acak and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when anda have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the selanjutnya hari you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own atau is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the baru saja outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, atau claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If anda must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, atau so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if anda do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot atau stabbed in the heart, then pop up menit later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull atau flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to atau dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to atau dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created oleh you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing atau potential character is a Mary Sue, atau if anda suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, anda can take link. If anda want, anda can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case anda were curious, which anda probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all anda want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, oleh no means do anda have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by FangYJ
OOC: Never really explained Fang's mothers death...But I also wanted the post something about 9/11....so yeah..

World Trade Center, North tower
8:40 A.M. 


Brendan sat in the daycare room of the North tower in the World Trade Center. Crystal was across him, playing with some other girls around her age. The sky was blue, it was a beautiful, warm September day, until tragedy struck. All the kids screamed and looked up, as there was crash and a loud explosion. 
"Get the kids out!"
"I'm sure it was just!"
"Get them out! Now!" 
Crystal scurried up and clung to her mothers leg, 
"Let go sweetheart, mommy...
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posted by MeridianYJ
 'stume
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Name: Meridian RoCarren

ID: Meridian

Nicknames: Meri, Dee, Iya, Reeree

Age: 16 (immortal)

Appearance: Normal height, white skin and hair, feminine body structure, eyes are almost a clear silver, Hair grows quickly so her hair length depends on the situation atau her mood

Powers: Telepathy (Rivals Megan's), telekinesis, invulnerable to everything except fire, Controls the darkness and shadows, Always carries a gun and a sword with her. Her telepathy can also be used to inflict illusions, pain, and other things..(she can crush a mortal from the inside out)

Bio: Once a princess of a hidden, yet very powerful...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Props for those who can figure out where the last name and picture came from.

Name: Dawson Ryan. (Original Right? XD)

Alias:Ryu

Occupation: NINJA/Hero.

Age: 17

Powers/Skills: Uhm...I'm just going with karate, and other sorts of things.

Weapons: Swords and daggers, throwing stars, nun-chucks (did I spell that right?), smoke bombs, knock out gas, and all that good stuff.

Past: Dawson grew in a normal family life, great mother and father. Until a book coming soaring into his window, and onto his lap. Dawson, as curious as he is, opened the book. Inside the book laid a note that read, "your are the ninja."...
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posted by Demon_YJ
OOC: Just a little one-shot I did in Chemistry class, about Demon and stuff, thought anda might enjoy. ;)

So it’s her fault. It’s her fault that she can’t move, that she can’t breathe, that the liquid spilling onto the floor is blood and that her jantung isn’t beating and yet she’s still here.
It’s her fault that she’s left everyone behind, that her brother is frustrated and in anguish because he wasn’t supposed to lose two people this time, and he for sure wasn’t supposed to lose her, but she isn’t lost.
It’s her fault that she ran into him, that he brought up memories she...
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Come little children, I’ll take thee away.
Into a land of enchantment
Come little children, the times come to play
Here in my garden of shadows.


It’s cold. I shiver in my small bunk. My muscles ach, and that pisau wound is really bothering me. I shift in my tempat tidur staring at the wall, where I scratched in small lines. Every line for a person’s life I’ve taken. Shadowa says I’m doing well, but I have to stop hesitating….like Delta. But I don’t want to, I see the way she looks when she completes a kill, her eyes turn silted and she gets a wide smirk. That look scares me; I don’t want...
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posted by The_Writer
hey guys, The_Writer here.

Just wanted to let anda know I can't publikasi daily episodes anymore. (Brother fussed, I got grounded. Loving the logic).

Anyway, here is a daftar of what to watch from here on out (Static is on YouTube, YJ is on the internet.

Aug. 28:
Static 21
YJ 3

Aug. 29:
Static 23
YJ 4

Aug. 30:
Static 24
YJ 5

Aug. 31:
Static 25
YJ 6

Sept. 1:
Static 26
YJ 7

Sept. 2:
Static 27
YJ 8

Sept. 3:
Static 28
YJ 8

Sept. 4:
Static 29
YJ 9

Sept 5:
Static 30
YJ 10

Sept 6:
Static 31
YJ 11

Sept 7:
Static 32
YJ 12


Figure it out from there. :)


Sept 28:
Static 52
YJI 7

Sept 29:
YOUNG JUSTICE INVASION EPISODE EIGHT!!!!!!!!!!
posted by Mclovin_69
 Ryan
Ryan
Name: Ryan Verbeck

Hero name: Red Clock

Age: 17

Personality: Ryan is very nice and hates to see people upset and always needs to help and make them feel better, he often gets along lebih with the female side.

Powers: he has the power to tampil others things that happened the days back until he was born, he can also open portals ( but that involves a lot of his power so he cant usually do it often) to other times atau tampil others pasts in mental links.

Gender: Male

Skills: he has some skills in hand to hand combat but hates using guns atau swords.

Appearance: for Ryan his hair is dyed black and usually has...
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posted by Robin_Love
I had too much fun with this! Just so anda know, when she gets to a certain level of excitement, Cat will shout things in acak languages, even gibberish.



A little black kitten wandered into the lounge room. It hopped up on the sofa and curled into a little fluffy ball on someone's lap. Blade looked down at the little ball of bulu in her lap. Blade Howard was not one to be soft. But the sight of the cat melted her. She picked it up and looked into it's purple gaze.
“Hey little kitty! Aren't anda adorable?!”
The cat let out a soft “mew” and started to purr. Blade cuddled it, stroking the...
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posted by Mclovin_69
District 12:

She glanced at the clock that read 11:32 am and picked up her brown leather bag and put her long blonde hair in a pony tail, she opened the door and squinted her eyes at the blare of the sun. She closed the door behind her and her eyes adjusted and she made her way through town to the lebih wooded part of her district and made it to the boundries voltage fence, Artemis picked up a pebble and tossed it at the wires and it just bounced through, a smirk spread across her face, the fence was never on. She slid through the fence and kept walking and making it to a rotted log and knelt...
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Daily Episode

hari Thirty-Six:


Static Shock Episode Seventeen: "Static Shaq"
Link: link

Summary:
Static is hunted out oleh the Ruff Pack, who nearly discover his secret identity. This episode guest-stars Shaquille O'Neal as himself. 

 

   


Static Shock has a lot of famous African Americans guest bintang on the show, with Lil Romeo even doing the themesong for seasons 3 and 4. But for a monster introduction, anda had to bring in a monster of a guy. So, Ladies & Gentlemen: Shaquille O' Neille!!!

(SOOOOOOO SORRY IM LATE!!!!!)




Check out my SUPER IMPORTANT UPDATE:

Link: link
((Tooo LAAZZY to switch accounts!
New Series! I SHALL FINISH! ))


Her footsteps echoed as she walked down the lonely street. She'd had enough of The Cave for now, right now she just needed to escape from the fighting, kissing, sex. She was fucking sick of it.

She climbed up a api escape and proceeded to the roof. Her mind wandered.. as her body stayed stationary. The cool breeze flowed through her short hair and sent chills down her spine.

Blade walked over to the edge and looked at the cement grave thirty stories down. All the shit she's been through, her sister: dead, her mom: dead, her dad:...
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posted by Robin_Love
As requested.


She paced back and forth in the small width of her room. The other occupant followed her and just listened.
“Nonononononono! Why did this happen to me?! NOT okay! Stupid gum. Stupid people. Stupid world!”
“It's not ending just because-”
“Shush!”
The other sighed, still watching.
“It wasn't just anything. It was a symbol. I didn't want to part with it!!!”
“Becca, you're being ridiculous.”
“Yes. But I don't care!”
“Any other things anda want to rant about?”
Becca glared at the other in her room.
“No.”
“Then we should train.”
“But-”
“NO buts!”
“Fine....
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posted by Mclovin_69
 Bloodcrawler
Bloodcrawler
Name: Bloodcrawler

Species: Unknown ( was created in lab oleh unnown resource)

Powers: Bloodcrawler is a goo material that can change and get into small places, he can make quick get aways if he goes through sewer drains atau any other drains. He doesnt always take a host but when he does he becomes lebih powerful and he wishes to make Bloodmist his host forever. He can also morph sticky goo and ayunan from buildings and crawl on walls and buildings.

Past: the mystery employer atau "big man" who was trying to create a new villian to destroy bloodmist it went completely wrong and exploded into this substance...
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posted by BloodyMascara_
Mel shot up from her bed, panting, tired. She hadnt slept peacefully since she came from the future. She swung her legs over the tempat tidur side, and stood up. She got dressed, and looked in the mirror, and stared at her once happy, and warm eyes. That were now filled with sorrow, and sleepiness. She sighed, and walked out of her room, breaking cerfew oleh walking out zeta, but a firm hand grabbed her arm, she almost screamed, but her mouth was covered oleh a hand. Batman's....
"Where do anda think your going?" He asked quietly. She looked up at him, fearfully.
"I-I cant sleep...." She stuttered. Fang watched...
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posted by Obscurity98
I cant take it anymore,
anda gotta stop this now,
Dont do it for me do it for her,
Stop atau i'll knock down ur door.

We both know its wrong,
I'll be oleh your side the whole way,
Save your self,
Dont end your life today.

I know what Death is like,
And i know it dont feel good,
So just stop the hiding,
take off your hood.

Life is somthing i took for granted,
Dont make my same mistake,
Live the life anda want,
Dont live it like its fake.

I dont want to see anda walk down that path,
into the darkness anda must not follow me,
Stop and make your change
Dont suffer more, and go ,
be free.

Some of us know what this is for! RPing thingy..
posted by ShadowYJ
Name: Shadow

Secret Identity: Dana Kylie Gracias (Unknown to the team)

Other Aliases: Phantom Ninja, Wild Cat, Ninja-Girl

Age: 13

Appearance: Thick black wavy hair chest length, cokelat brown eyes, tanned skin, slender but muscular for a girl. In-spite of the built she is petite and looks small for her years in both looks and maturity.

Personality: Since her birthday is on April 30th, she is a Taurus, which de-fore makes her stubborn, honest, and a natural born leader. She is also immature, funny, mischievous, cheeky, intelligent, creative, and very child-like. She can be acak at some times...
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posted by KatRox1
Com'on... We all gotta have that one OC that hits kinda close to home! And I honestly now don't give a crap about over-crowding... Cuz at no time have I ever seen ALL of the OC's on at the same time! Luv ya guys!


Name: Ana Montoya

Hero Name: Spirit

Power(s): Able to sense paranormal activity and see auras on certain people

Age: 14

Appearance: curly blonde hair with bangs, blueish eyes, 5’6”, thin build

Personality: Sometimes drawn-back, but can be very friendly and energetic around the people she knows best, feels like no one really understands her and that’s she’s a freak, tries not to show...
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1) Harley is now the Demon Princess in Hell for her actions

2) Harley died oleh plunging a kryptonite needle into her heart, though she was to use it for blood samples.

3) Skylar was there when it happened, now he keeps her necklace

4) Harley has new found powers anda can find it in either -Harley Anew atau MY BIO

5) I whill come back onto this account for Posting only, RPing will be on HarleyYJ account.

6) I will Post artciles on her Death and what happens in between.

7) Perfect Creation will not have to much of an effect on Harley, as the Death and Demon thing will.

8) Soming back to this account and...
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posted by CoaxochYJ
 Raptor.
Raptor.
Mel needed an enemy. SO HERE!

Raptor.


ID: itik jantan, drake Creaon.

Appearance: 6'0, hot berwarna merah muda, merah muda hair thats in his face, blue eyes.

Enemy Of: Melissa Adams.

History: After being stuck in a broken home, he chose to start a new life, starting with a new girlfriend. Mel was the unlucky girl he saw attractive. He forced her to be his girlfriend, she escaped right before he could rape her. He hunts her down, even 13 years before his time.....

Powers: Is able to change his appearance into other people. Drains other peoples energy and uses it for himself. Can channel the energy into orbs and chuck em at people.

'Stume: N/A

Pwease dont kill me......
 Raptor.
Raptor.
posted by CoaxochYJ
I AM LAZY! SO WHAT!? I JUST GOT CRP CERTIFIED! CUT ME SOME FLIPPIN SLACK!

Mel screamed from her room, Fang knocked on the door.
"Mel?" He asked.
"WHAT IS IT!?" She screamed. Fang opened the door and walked in. He raised an eyebrow.
"Its...... a pancake...." He berkata as he took it off her face. Mel stared at it. She had no idea why she screamed.
"A-a pancake?" She stuttered.
"Wow. Either your running a severe fever, atau this thing is still warm...." He shivered and droppped it back onto her bed. She stared at it. She did a lot of staring these days.
"How the hell did a pancake get into my face?" She...
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