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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. oleh no means am I forcing anda to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless anda truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before anda start posting. It can be as little as a bio, atau as big as an entire artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no lebih than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he atau she is in, can pull out another trick out of his atau her hat.
4. If anda absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his atau her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely acak and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when anda have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the selanjutnya hari you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own atau is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the baru saja outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, atau claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If anda must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, atau so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if anda do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot atau stabbed in the heart, then pop up menit later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull atau flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to atau dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to atau dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created oleh you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing atau potential character is a Mary Sue, atau if anda suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, anda can take link. If anda want, anda can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case anda were curious, which anda probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all anda want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, oleh no means do anda have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by SilverWings13
The sun had set and the lights replaced its rays. Yellow, red, blue, green lit up the night, causing the twinkling stars the young man was so acquainted with to sink away. Along with them went the average civilians of the city, and out came the nocturnal creatures of the night.
Declan ducked into an alley as a police car sped past, sirens wailing. He sighed as it passed and disappeared around the corner, the siren fading away. He laid his head back against the brick dinding and closed his tired eyes. The click of approaching heels made him snap back to attention and instinctively turned invisible....
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Tyler looked up, from the sleeping Becca in his arms, to a blonde boy with peircing blue eyes. A quick glance around the room reviled that everyone-Aryess, Willow, Lyss, and Vaxley -was asleep. "Shit.." Ty muttered gazing back at the the monster, who's stare made him shiver.

"Hey, Ter-" the firecaster started.
"I need Becca." Terror stated sternly. Defince struck Ty.
"Sorry, b-"
"Now." Blue eyes were narrowed and his lips were pursed in a small frown.
"Do anda ever smile, Terror?"
The remark left the blonde unphased; a small curve pulled at his lips but quickly vanished as he took a step forward...
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posted by Blitz359
Yeah, I wrote part of this at 2 AM. Sue me. :P

"Hit the deck!"

The 4 teens leap behind a fallen pohon as the dinding of the factory blew apart to smithereens. Rubble flies all over, but as the dust clears, the group dash into the newly created entrance and head for the nearest flight of stairs.

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Peering through the leaves of the bush, Richi could see a part of the factory's large amount of security patrolling around the perimeter. Watchtowers with spotlights circled around the darkness surrounding the factory, and the beeps of sentries echoed into the blonde's ears.

"What, is this...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
"I'll be fine anda guys can go now." Ashley told the girls, as they walked into the kitchen.
"Actually Canary told us to keep an eye on anda till your brother comes home." Aryess said, taking a kursi at the counter. Ashley open the refrigerator and took out a bowl of ice cream.
"You guys want any?" Ashley asked, waving a spoon at them both with a smirk on her face.
"Sure."
Ashley returned to the refrigerator and took out two lebih bowls of ice cream. She give both girls a spoon each and handed them the ice cream when she hear someone call Akash's name.
Melody walked in the dapur with a shoulder bag...
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posted by Blitz359
 Meh. Found on internet. Thought I should share.
Meh. Found on internet. Thought I should share.
So yeah, I'm not dead. Been really busy.

The phone rang for what seemed like the millionth time. Its ringtone sang out in the darkness of the room, and the phone clattered against the dusty wooden top table, meja as it vibrated.
Hey, it's Richi. The phone sounded out as the call went to voicemail. I'm not available right now, but leave a message and I'll get back to anda ASAP.

"Rich!" the voice yelled as the message was recorded. "I know anda can hear me! Where are you?! Why haven't anda called back?! Please, the three of us are worried. Come back already. We're sorry."

Message recorded. anda have 30...
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posted by SilverWings13
There was too much water. Surrounding her, soaking her. In her mouth, in her nose. Don't breath, don't breath. She tried not to follow the instinct to menelan a breath, but somehow the liquid forced its way inside. Too much water filling her lungs.
Too much red. The water was painted in it. There was a certain glow coming from some artificial source, but also a swirl of a seperate contamination. Too tired, too much blood escaping from the slash in her leg. Aryess had failed the mission of keeping the perahu safe. The bomb had exploded, blowing a hole in the hull. The water heater had barely protected...
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posted by SilverWings13
Billionaires, business men, women dressed in lovely dresses. Champagne glasses, sparkling lights, and of course, the treasures of the evening. The precious jewelry and glittering gems. They were the most expensive objects in the room, even lebih than the yacht the auction was taking place on. And for that reason, the blonde and her partner had been assigned tonight's security detail. It also helped that their teammate's father owned the ship and was hosting the event.
Her stormy grey eyes rested on the glistening blue brooch. An aquamarine rose ready to become the prize of the lucky bidder tonight....
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posted by Gunfire
 Natasha
Natasha
Name: Natasha
Age: 17
Gender: famale
Clotes: she always wereas milaty gear, atau a unifom, unless she needs to sneak somwere in.
Apareance: long hiar, color of it can difre frome were she is ansingd and wat her mison is, narmal body.
Personalaty: paronoid, does not trust easy, hates pepol using weald to opres others, always helps her comrades.
Skilles: sniper, exeled marxman, tactisan, field commander, knowes all kinds of martial ards, abel to use al kinds of wapons, extrodanry soldier.
wapons: an AK 74, a Dragonov, pistols, grenades, knives.

background:
(( i am lazy so i just put it this way))
- she...
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"Shit, shit shit!" he thought as he threw the batter into the pan and looked at the clock. "Only an hour!?" He hissed, shoving the heart-shaped raw cake into the oven. Tyler turned to the dapur and stared in horror. Flour powered every cranny of the room, egg shells cluttered the floor, the sugar bag was tumped over, so was the cooking oil but it was spilling on the floor. The api caster groaned. He still had to dethorn the dazzling red roses, clean, mandi, shower and get dressed!


In a hurry he sped over to the mawar and stared at them, a million thorns decorated each of the twelve flowers. How...
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His eye's narrowed into her's. A lively api was sparked once again, and it settled right in her eyes lapping around.

It only ignited when rage pulsed through her veins, and Mrs.Blade has a lot rage.

The two were at a stand still, who would make the selanjutnya move, he spoke with poison dripping off his words,"Ahh, and yet you're right once again, let me correct myself for all I do in your eyes are wrong."

Her lips curved into a frown even more,"How dare you! Assume I think I'm right all the time! I do not! You're the one who knows everything! Mr.I-Can't-Even-Tell-My-Wife-My-Real-Name!"

Ice met fire,"You...
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The judul says it all.
And no, I'm not leaving. That's not to say that I'm not pissed off at all anda people. And I'm warning anda now, anda might hate this. anda might get offended, anda might hate me, but I don't give a flying Grayson about that. anda guys have taught me just how stupid online drama is, and just how important it is NOT to let yourself get affected oleh it. So flame me all anda want. I just need to rant.
Seriously, when did all this shit start happening? First our lovely Esmerelda decides to "leave forever" (anyone wanna count the number of times he's berkata that? Good. I didn't think...
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posted by BloodyMascara_
So,



*Shrugs* Cheer, cry, be happy, sad, angry, dunno.
Too much drama, feelings feelings feelings, this is all gonna be fluff, so if anda need the point of this article, skip to the bottom.

cinta anda guys, really do, but this drama is toooooo much.

So, me and my OC's are going on a... vacation.

anda can still post on my wall, IM, kotak masuk me, ect.

Just takin' a break from the club.

And if I'm a depressed emo faggot to you, not your fault. Stuff has happened, I should be fine in a bit.

Anyways,

Fly on~
-Raven, gone.
 Depends.
Depends.
posted by Mclovin_69
He store at the screen in front of him deep in thought as he looked at the young couple walk through the eighty first level, they were getting close, too close for his comfort. “ I thought anda berkata anda separated them…” he muttered sitting in his chair, the familiar man behind him looked down “ she escaped im sorry I failed anda master “ he muttered, “ sorry? Im done with that word! anda have failed me too many times! “ he shouted making the man behind him flinch slightly. He had a low growl and rasp in his tone “ I guess its time I do this myself since anda are so incapable….”...
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posted by AugmentBoyYJ
 Felicity
Felicity
Name: Felicity Hunter

Hero Name: Kindle

Age: 15

Appearance: she has long straight blackish brown hair with deep maroon brownish eyes. Hair is usually up in a ponytail atau bun.

Powers/Skills: she has the ability to work with any sort of metal, she often can create many inventions atau gadgets and start gears atau open metal atau electronic doors with the point of her finger, she can crush metal oleh touch atau from afar etc. She has the ability to fly a helicopter to get others to places they need to be. She can tap into radio communication.

Relations: she was one of Willows best friends growing up until she...
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Name: Damian Hellsing

Nickname: D

Alias: None

Occupation: Vampire Hunter

Race: Vampire

Age: 160 years old, but, in what he calls, "human years" he's 18.

Personality: He's looks at humans as nothing lesser than him. He will not take a human's life unless forced to, atau if they're just being stubborn. *COUGH COUGH* What?
He's kinda a tease, but is lebih often serious. He does have a soft spot for some people but usually does not tampil it, of course.

Appearance: He has lengthy black hair with burning red eyes. His skin, unlike what most stereotypes believe, is not super pale, it's a light color with a hint...
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posted by Blitz359
They left as the sun set in the horizon. Careful not to wake the others, Richi, Aryess, Nic, and Alek quietly left the hotel to finish the long adventure. Traveling across half of the city, none of them spoke a word the whole way through. Finally reaching the Itexicon building, Nic led them into the building from the rooftop. "You'd think they'd have better security..." muttered Richi, obviously suspicious of how easy it was to enter. After finding the stairs down, the 4 carefully climbed down the steps, floor oleh floor, until they stopped at the 10th floor, where the stairs were barricaded....
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posted by Robin_Love
 Sleeping Devin ^-^
Sleeping Devin ^-^
Hello everyone! This is your daily dose of crazy via artikel from anda leader, R_L!!!! I hope anda all enjoy this! Today, I'm interviewing everyone's favorit Angel; Devin Grayson-Addams. Say hello Devin~!

Greetings fellow heroes.

Take me to your leader!

DYLAN!!!! GET OUT OF MY INTERVEIW!!!!!!!

Oh dear.

Anyway, Devin anda are here to answer pertanyaan some of your fan asked! Are anda ready?

I will be as honest as I can.

Good! This first pertanyaan is from SilverWings13. Silver asks, “If anda could dye your wings ANY color, what color would it be?”

Hmmm....good question. Most people assume my favorite...
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posted by Gunfire
 Zack's Hero/cyberspace costume
Zack's Hero/cyberspace costume
Name: Techno
ID: Zack
age: 17
Apearnce: black spiky hiar, whit dark bleaw hears truw it thad ligt up whne he uses his powers ( a side efect frome the experimend), a bit slender, bluuw eyes (same reson as hiar).
Civies: sneakers, jeans, balck whit dark bleuw shirt.
Hero/cyberspace costume: see pic (he mosly wears this)
Personalety: a bit shy, protective, loves technolagie and electronics, mosly calm.
Powers: can control al electronicks, can get into al electroninc, can bring electronincs to live, cane make litenting.
Skilles: can hack anyting, can repair, most electroniks, knowes hand to hand combat....
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My evilness continues!!! *runs and hides* If anda haven’t read it already, the prologue is link (it’s really short but pretty damn important).

2 weeks earlier.
A bow clattered to the hardwood floor, skidding to a stop in a patch of golden afternoon sunlight that reflected a blinding glare off of the metal. “No!” the dark-haired girl groaned, digging her fingers into her scalp in frustration. “How many times have I told you, that’s not how anda hold it!”
Aisling didn’t respond, but shoved her hands in her pockets and crossed the training room to pick up her bow. Fin jogged over,...
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posted by WingsOfDeath
Couple years in the future, I'm not telling when...

"Their beautiful..." The malaikat looked down at her newborns.
"Yeah." Fang smiled.
"Get the kids out of here. Now." Tara burst into their room, guns drawn.
"What? Why!?" Pure terror in the Angel's voice.
"No time, just go!"
Fang picked up his wife, and snapped out his wings. Tara fired at the blur that crashed in the door, only to miss.
"NO!" Devin screeched, the young baby being snatched from her. The other child was snatched oleh the same blur. Tara restrained Devin from flying after her children, while Fang blurred after the assailant.
"LET ME GO!"...
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