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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. oleh no means am I forcing anda to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless anda truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before anda start posting. It can be as little as a bio, atau as big as an entire artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no lebih than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he atau she is in, can pull out another trick out of his atau her hat.
4. If anda absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his atau her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely acak and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when anda have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the selanjutnya hari you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own atau is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the baru saja outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, atau claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If anda must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, atau so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if anda do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot atau stabbed in the heart, then pop up menit later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull atau flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to atau dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to atau dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created oleh you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing atau potential character is a Mary Sue, atau if anda suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, anda can take link. If anda want, anda can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case anda were curious, which anda probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all anda want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, oleh no means do anda have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
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((BECAUSE SAD SHIT MAKES ME SAD..))

"Can I come?"
"No..."
"Please!!!!!"
"Uhg B-"
"PLEASE..."
"This won't be a good idea.."
"Since when is anything we do a good idea..."
"Fine.. anda can come."


~

Blood flooded from her mouth as he held her close. He was willing to be the barrier between the girl and the silver bullets whizzing past them. So far he was doing good, suffering only minor scratches from the brush he was plowing through.

But the girl? She suffered a shot to the shoulder and stomach. The skin was bubbling up like a burn and her coughs were becoming lebih faint as the red liquid, she needed to...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 Honesty
Honesty
Code name: Weapon 010:
Nickname:Honesty
Powers:Telepathic; controls a beetle-like animal (which is called beetle) once implanted into someone whether person atau animal he can control then. He can also materialize himself into thousand of beetles and can create clones of himself with the beetles.
Appearance: Blonde hair and red eyes. Usually wears a black hoodie cloak.
Age:
Attitude: frank, hostile and devious.
Relations: Twin brother to Jaivus.
History&Past: Honesty was separated from his birth parents and his twin brother Jaivus at birth. He is the eldest between the twin. When He was separated...
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posted by Mclovin_69
She sat on the dipan, sofa membaca a book, but really she wasn't membaca atau thinking of the words on the pages in front of her. She was really confused and at a loss of why Bentley was akting weird around her as if he were hiding something. She was worried lebih than confused, she worried she had done something wrong. Had she been too resistant atau unsure of trusting him?.

She let out a deep sigh placing the book down on the coffee meja and laying there staring up at the ceiling in wonder.

Her phone buzzed on the meja selanjutnya to the book she had just placed down, picking it up she saw that the text...
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"so anda think anda can beat me, it's a joke" stated Ajax looking at him from the opposite side of the capsule
"Why are anda even doing this?, I mean hurting me is one thing but hurting others like Mafia oleh saying your going to kill me is just wrong" spoke Alex not bothering to look back at him
"details, if I can't physically take anda on but I can mentally.
you know anda can't kill me because I'm the deepest hidden part of you, yet I can kill anda because your Web also, meaning your not really me"
he states yet another fact
"Yeah yeah, ultimate doom and all that but really anda know I will try and...
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posted by killer24
 Even malaikat lose their way
Even angels lose their way
25/June/2013
11:00 pm
England
Abandoned warehouse


Walking around the abandoned warehouse sighing for the tenth time searching every nook and cranny (expression)
"Nothing there is only nothing!!" He yells and he hits a dinding smashing a hole through it before sighing again and pulling his fist out and falling to his knees then looking at the other holes
"They berkata they checked and looked into everything and found nothing, it's like I never existed before I was found here, but no one just appears out of thin air!!" He yells as he hits the floor and doesn't stop until he looks at his hand, looking...
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Name: Cadmus "Mafia" Allendral
Age: 16 years old
Height: 5'7
Hair: Red
Eyes: Any color she wishes but her natural color is Gold
Nationality: Russian; currently residing in the United States
Father: Erik Allendral (deceased)
Mother: Taisia Allendral Mavoc (deceased)
Affiliations: Russian Mafia; Young Justice; Intergang

Powers: Can cause inanimate objects to become the binatang of her choice, snakes being her preference. Immunity to all poisons. Shapeshift into a large snake. She can speak to all animals. She can phase through solid objects such as walls and bullets, but it takes much concentration. She...
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(( this is just to ploloug micht be shirt, but there will be lebih parts coming))

Twan walkd truw Gotham on the way to Xerran's house, when he was alomst there he saw and explotion and his brother being trowe out of a first floor whindo oleh the power of the explotion.

Xerran! he yelt as he ran to his brother, xerran's bulu blacken like charcole oleh the explotion, bleeding alover frome littel wounds coused oleh scrapnal.
Twan lookd aside fore a momend seeng a part left over frome the bom. Peinwien *he growed* thad fat bird when to far, this time.
he lookes at his brother.
But first this.
He swung xerran...
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posted by Robin_Love
It was too funny to keep to myself!!!! XD And it is based off of a different fanfic from someone else on fanfiction.net so yeah! ENJOY~!





“I'm going to put this simply for both of you. Hurt my son”-there was a pointed look at Ciel-“or my daughter,”-a pointed look at Shane this time “and I will break you. Understand?”
Both nodded their heads swiftly. With an almost evil smile, Fang stood up.
“Glad to talk with you.”
The other boys started to slowly back out of the room.
“Before anda go, my wife wished to speak with anda both. I believe she's in the kitchen.”
Again, both boys nodded....
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Reprecussions

WARNING: The following fanfiction has been rated "M" for mature audiences only. This book does/may contain suggested rape, violence, cruel and unusual treatment of people, sexual references, drug use, adult language, and disturbing scenes that may not be suitable to younger viewers.

You have been warned.

The Watchtower

June 18, 02:09 EST

Sam held the ice-pack to his jaw. A few cuts on his face were all that was left of his fight with Batman. He leaned back in his chair, glaring at anyone stupid enough to look at him. batman was still arguing.

"His actions were brash, stupid, reckless...
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One tahun Later: (Many are now 22, 24, 25, 26)
Clark zoomed to the cave, and dropped the Daily Planet paper on the floor in the middle of a training. Black Canary glared at Superman, she didn't need to be there at the training anymore, but today she was doing a review on all they had learned on their own. And she didn't like being interrupted, especially oleh a newspaper. Nightwing blocked Lagoon Boy’s attack and then picked up the paper and read out loud, “ Ex Heroine Obscurity has Been Released from Belle Reve.” The room was quite for a moment when Superboy asked, “She was released?...
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posted by Connor_Veritas
I gew up in Ireland. Growing up was hard. Taught ta fight n' shoot guns at a young age was fun but it kinda scared people away. Never even get ta make any friends. Then there's learnin' up ta seven languages. My mother insisten on it. I learned them all, but whats te point if I never even had the chance te live like a normal kid.

I was raised te believe in god. Religion and belifs was all my ma and pa taught me. That's how it all started with te whole 'killing the eveil te send them ta hell' family business. But of course te rule is we don't kill women and children.

I have a fraternal twin, Murphy....
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