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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. oleh no means am I forcing anda to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless anda truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before anda start posting. It can be as little as a bio, atau as big as an entire artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no lebih than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he atau she is in, can pull out another trick out of his atau her hat.
4. If anda absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his atau her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely acak and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when anda have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the selanjutnya hari you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own atau is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the baru saja outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, atau claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If anda must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, atau so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if anda do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot atau stabbed in the heart, then pop up menit later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull atau flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to atau dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to atau dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created oleh you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing atau potential character is a Mary Sue, atau if anda suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, anda can take link. If anda want, anda can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case anda were curious, which anda probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all anda want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, oleh no means do anda have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
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What Could Have Been...

(AN: Yah, here's my halloween Special. I thought it was different than what other people would expect from me. Besides, I need to do something happy. Cheers!)

--SLIGHT SPOILER ALERT-- 



New York City
October 31st, 18:03 EST
2035 A.D.
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"Mom?" 

"Yes honey?"

"Are anda coming trick-or-treating?" 

Holly glanced back through the bedroom at Sam who shook his head before pointing to his watch.

"No, I'm sorry Lily. I'd cinta to come but daddy and I have a very...important errand to run." 

"Okay..." The light haired girl frowned. Her hair was somewhere...
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"Is this cool atau what?!" the teen exclaimed lebih than asked. His companion merely grunted a reply barely audible over the cheering crowd.

"Oh come on! How can anda not like him?!"

"Do I really need to tell anda again, Parker?"

"Yes."

"He's an eccentric, playboy billionaire who goes out at night and--"

"And?" Peter asked, smirk plastered to his face.

Sam grinned. "Ah, you're right." He frowned again. "I still don't like him."

"Whatever." Peter said, waving his hand absentmindedly.

"And now, ladies and gentlemen, Samuel Grant!"

The crowd burst into fresh cheers as Sam walked on-stage and shook the billionaire's hand. "Pleasure to meet anda Mr. Stark."

"He's a natural actor." Peter shrugged.
posted by XxKFforeverXx
Once again, they all tie in Sifts past.

Name: TaLaura Groff
Alias Arella
Occupation: Hero
age: 16
Powers:
•Sensing danger
•Teleportation
•Pocket space–the ability to hold and remove objects so that only the user can retrieve them
• Luck manipulation
Past: TaLuara grew up in a community of crime, though she never was involved in it, her parents thrived to be villains. She ignored the fact she was alone and pushed on.
Other: –shy, but sweet
-If anda push her, she’ll use your luck against you.
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Civvies
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
The winds off of Fangs wings blew the sand around, erasing the remainders of where he once stood.
“Stay here. I’m going after him” Max unfolded her wings and followed Fang, she could see the black speck in front of her, Max picked up speed, following close on Fang’s trail.
“Fang, slow down!” Max screamed to the puncak, atas of her lungs, while Fang ignored her distant screams, he spaced himself out of reality, ignoring the fact he was flying at a puncak, atas speed of 800 MPH, and Max was struggling to keep up with his pace,
“Fang!” Max let out a ear piercing scream. Fang suddenly came back to reality...
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posted by AislingYJ
So this is the prologue to Broken Wings, the story I diposting the forum about. Just so anda know, this takes place in 20 years. Yeah.
12:03 AM
She was in the shadows, laying flat on her stomach with the gun at her side, trying to blend in with the roof of the stone building. Luckily the night was dark, only a tiny sliver of a moon hung in the sky, so she didn’t have to worry. Not yet.
Her finger was poised near the trigger of the gun, and part of her wanted to press it, just out of sheer boredom. But she didn’t. When were they going to come? Part of her wanted to go out and look for them, but...
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posted by Kenzie_KarmaYJ
OOC: The beginning of the third and final fic in Kenzie's little trilogy. Enjoy!

Kenzie grinned in delight, watching Delta furiously charge towards Robin and scissor kick him. He retaliated, grabbing her legs and flipping her to the ground. Kenzie gave a small laugh and the teens gave her simultaneous smiles before going back to their training. She shifted her attention to Bentley, Aisling, Belle, and Russel, her momentary visitor. The four sulked in the corner. It was a habit for the particular group. Kenzie got up from her place and, carefully avoiding the sparring siblings, she made her way...
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posted by SilverWings13
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: anastasia Alexovna Aldric (née Romanova)
Reason atau meaning of name: anastasia was her aunt's name, means "resurrection"; her middle name is a derivative of her father's name, Alexei; born Romanova, but recently married; Aldric means "wise ruler"
Eye Color: forest green
Hair Style/Color: auburn; curly; usually intricately braided
Height: 5' 2" ((v smol))
Clothing Style: comfortable. Simple jeans and a long sleeve t-shirt if she's not going to meet anyone.
Best Physical Feature: my...hair? ((It's wild, but soooo soft))

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: disappointing the...
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sorry not sorry i really cinta my elves
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Since she's had so much happen in her life, I feel like this is her song.
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Fletcher stepped out onto the docking, his hands immediately unbuttoning the dark buttons on his peacoat to get away from the sweltering heat. "Christ.." he mumbled and paused at the black sport car that awaited for him. He opened the bagasi, batang and tossed in the suitcase, his bag following afterwards. He hesitated to get into the car but slid into the backseat, side-eyeing the girl that sat across from him. "They send anda to fetch after their rogue son?" He chuckled and crossed his arms. "Your father is very sick, Fletch, a lot has changed in the three years you've been gone." She leaned back in...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Kori made her way across the room, stopping to stare at the screen that Nightwing stood in front of. A red hooded figure ran across the screen, the image playing over and over again as if he was searching for something. She ran over and ducked under his arms before popping up. "Is that Jason Todd?" Dick moved back a few steps at the sudden outburst. He quickly grabbed Kori oleh the waist and flipped the monitor off, sighing out in relief when she groaned. "Dick!" Kori drug out his name and then crossed her arms, pouting before looking back at the screen. "I will not be responsible for fueling...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Lilith
Lilith
anda don't have to like her. Whole point is kinda not to XD

LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Name: Lilith Callista
Reason atau meaning of name: Night Monster/Storm Goddess, most beautiful
Eye Color: Violet
Hair Style/Color: White
Height: Does height matter? (5’6”)
Clothing Style: Fashion Forward

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: I have none
Your Guilty Pleasure: Boys~
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Girlfriends/wives
Your Ambition for the Future: I have none

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Where am I?
What anda Think About the Most: My Fiance
What anda Think About Before Bed: If I’m satisfied
You Think...
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posted by godmor
(Afther membaca the blade bio update, i got the idea to redo this bio, template whit tanks to Discord)

General

Full Name: Twan Shepard A.K.A. Gunfire
Reason for name: Beceas his parends gave him the name, and gunfire beceas thad is were he is most known fore.
Nickname: Kiddo, old man Boss, Mister Shepard
Reason for nickname: Kiddo is wat Harley Quinn calls him beceas she took care of him early on in Arkham Asylem and acted kind of motherly over him, and the nickname stuck, she is also the only person alowd to call him Kiddo, he gets mad if anyone els does it, Old Man is wat Tess calls him often...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Name: Adrian Rudder (Not known except for two people)
Age: 20
Alias: Snake
Power/skills/: At the moment, Snake is know for his ability to train almost all snakes and speak for them, along with distributing venom from his fang like canines. As for his skills, Snake is trained in hand-to-hand combat.
Appearance: Snake stands at 5'9 and has a very slender build. His eyes are a like a snake's eyes, a bright yellow that contrasts against his silvery-gray hair. Snake is quite pale, only having a few rough patches of scales scattered along his body, the most prominent one on his cheek. As for clothing,...
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So.....my Outsiders team needed a theme and this is it! Plus, I cinta THIS SONG SO MUCH!!!!!! XD
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