menulis Article: i think i need help :S please look!

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posted by 1-2vampire

right. ohkay. my best friend is dying. but in some way i knew it was going to happen. through my poems :S yu may b like urgh heres a fuking fake goodbye but please im not joking! HELP ME! :'(

ohkay, i wrote this poem a hari before my frend started akting weirdly and another a hari before she found out she had pancreas cancer.

poem number one:
Closest of strangers,
Time takes it's toll
Keep close to your loved one before they can fall.
No lebih of the laughter
Only the clock ticks away
Ever so slowly the thread shall fray
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly their smile fades away.

poem number two:
Nearer and nearer death comes along
Through the path where it doesn't belong
Don't waste your time
Keep close and shine
Be there until their Smile is long gone.

:( im not faking, PLEASE tell me what is happening to me. :( i gtg Livane's waking up.

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1-2vampire btw when it ses "time takes its toll" i meant to put "death takes its toll", i got confused

jem_ I think you were using what's called your intuition. Your six sense. Some freaky things happen in this world, I don't know what to tell you... I only thing I can think of to offer comfort is to tell you that you are not the only one. And these "coincidances" are nothing to be afraid of. P.S. Maybe you should take intruction from your poem. Maybe your subconcious, intuition, six sense or whatever you want to call it was picking up on things somehow and you should maybe listen to it. Like "Keep close and shine. Be there until their Smile is long gone." being your friend's sunshine.being there for her and staying with her long after she's to weak to put up a facade of happyness. I hope any of this was some help. I'm very sorry about your friend. :( I wish her well.

1-2vampire thank you. I'm happy to say that she is still alive. The doctors are saying its a miracle that she's lasted this long. They don't know but they think she might pull through. They're not sure, though. (i have more poems ive written buh yuno)

1-2vampire About a day after that comment, she died. I took your advice, jem_, thank you.

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poem, capture my jantung

posted by whitelion

love, a word that can bring much joy atau much pain
it can put the jantung at ease atau under strain
and as that word to each other we spoke
it made our hearts complete and not broke

a feeling unlike any other i felt
as anda heavenly eyes made my jantung melt
anda were always the one, i could tell
cause from the moment i saw anda in cinta i fell

the words to describe anda a poet can never posses
anda were always the one that was hard to impress
anda wanted lebih than poetry and bunga could give
because only on true cinta your jantung could live

to capture my jantung for anda it only took
one moment one smile and one unforgettable look

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My Best Authors of All Time (In My Opinion)

posted by sapherequeen

Edgar Allen Poe - #1

Okay, so this is a countdown of my most favorit authors of all time. It goes from igood #10 to magnficient #1.

I am also so happy for myself because this is technically my first work of menulis that I will soon publish.....

Alright, here it is;

1. Edgar Allen Poe - He has had a rough life filled with death, grief, abandonment, and misery, and his ways to cope with these difficult emotions were his magnificent stories and peoms that we enjoy to this day. Also, he and I can relate...
2. Stephen King - He has this enigmatic personality that makes anda wonder and puzzle, and he's a bit of an oddball...

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In cinta With My Best Friend

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Lets write something...

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Opposites

posted by harold

The penulis considered. Then the penulis wrote:

Two opposites sat on a park bench

The penulis deleted

eating their curds and whey

as soon as it was typed, and replaced it with

and one wanted the other to leave.

The critic noted "That's really not very specific, is it? Two 'opposites'? Come on, you're going to have to be lebih specific than that."

The penulis considered. Then the penulis wrote:

The Republican sat down selanjutnya to the Democrat on the park bench

and nodded, satisfied. The critic clucked his tongue. "Welll...it's not exactly original, is it? And how different are they, really? Honestly, anda couldn't...

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populer oleh a Landslide Chapter 1

posted by lollipopszx3

As I stood there waiting at the jalan, street corner I thought about how much I was going to kill Fawn. She's making me wait oleh the jalan, street corner drenched in rain while she was probably getting a ride from her father.

I then saw her father's car turn up around the corner. Fawn, with her colourful Jansport bag came out... with an umbrella. I ran up to her and mencuri the umbrella.

"Hey gothie! Come back here!" She yelled. I laughed as I ran away. She loved to call me gothie. I wore black make-up, black clothing, and I loved skulls. But that doesn't make me goth!

If I'm not a goth, my own person, then...

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menulis

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black moon chapter7

posted by joe-edwardfan

(end of chapter 6)
Bella pov
The pain was was to much, I couldn’t understand what was happening , my neck was burning , the burning took over my body it changed menit oleh minuet it grew it rose I wanted to scream this pain out but that probable isn’t a good option ppl will think I'm weak! I clenched my teeth together wishing I never existed suddenly the burning changed! it left my neck! I was relived that the pain had lessen but a new pain started in my chest my jantung was was ripping its way out of my chest the sound of my jantung filled my ears it was getting on my nerves the sound continued...

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When Writing....

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A CURSED STORY CHAP:7 POWERS

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 7: powers
My head hurt to much I just wished to die I think it was worse than the venom that spread in a humans body to change it to a vampire as my old vamp friend Kayla told me how painful it was for her. i wanted to scream and make the pain less oleh screaming it out but my mouth didn’t obey me I tried to pindah my hands, legs but they wouldn’t pindah to it was like I was paralyzed my breathing got harder I needed lebih air then someone touched my forehead and brushed my cheeks going down to my breasts…. thats what Damien always does! What's happening? is he doing this to me he likes...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 36

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

He didn't seem... mad. Like he should have been. Like he had every right to be.

He stopped maybe a meter away from me. I glanced up, and saw the same look of indecision I had seen on his face the first day.

I had no idea what I was supposed to do. My life is not a perfect little story where happy endings are mandatory.

I didn't expect myself to sink to the floor against the dinding and begin crying. There just weren't words to say what I wanted to.

I didn't expect him to sit in front of me and put his hands on my shoulders. He forced me to to look up at him, and he said, "Tell me."

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Gods 2: Chapter 4: Red light

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

I was woken up oleh a loud humming, like someone was bernyanyi selanjutnya to me. I opened an eyes looked to my right to see my mother smiling and folding clothes. “Morning” She sang, I rolled over to my other side. “Time to get up sweetie, it’s nearly 10” She sang and then continued to hum. I turned back over and noticed what she was folding. “Why are anda folding my clothes?” I asked, she smiled and sat down selanjutnya to me. “It’s time to go back home, now get up and start helping me pack your stuff” She berkata walking out of my room. I turned to my calendar and was amazed oleh the circled...

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Soon To Be Free- A Poem oleh Me

posted by axlluver43

A place I once trusted
A place I once believed in
A place I once loved
A place I once missed
Is coved under a masquerade
Of misery and pain
The blue in the sky is now a shade
I feel like all this time was a game
A game of sham
A game of backstabbing
A game of war
A game of fate
I feel trapped in a box
Crammed in and lonely
With nothing but locks
With no key so that it can hold me
A box of lies
A box of fear
A box of loneliness
A box of weakness
I always have a word on mind
Just a few words long
To me it seems so thoughtful and kind
To me free it isn't a dance atau song
Free as the wind
Free as a bird
Free as an malaikat
Free as a shooting bintang
The feeling will come to me
But not right now
I hope my soul can soon be free
So then I can take my final bow

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It wasn't me (Short story)

posted by TDIlover226

I watched from around the corner as the little puppy, so curious with it's ways, was snooping around seeing what was in this big old house. He sniffed around, ears drooping to the floor, sliding in a cepat, swift path. That little puppy, I had just gotten from the pound, I still couldn't think of a name for the curious puppy. Just as I thought to leave, something about the pup caught my eye, he had stopped in his tracks, staring at something that I couldn't see. That was when I knew exsactly what he was staring at, my old cat. Sapphire was her name, she was a grumpy old cat, I wasn't sure what to...

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Lets write something...

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Lets write something...

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The dairies of a wounded man- Chapter 2:Part1

posted by sahour95

She wanted to know what else he thought about her, and refused to stop membaca no matter how painful its effect would be.
He berkata anda are in med school. That made me happy since I was there too, though against my welling. I thought that anda are passionate and caring, that anda are loving and want to help everyone. I didn’t even know anda and I drew anda in my mind like an malaikat the same way anda looked to me. I forgot in that menit all what my father told me, and all what I learned about not being fooled with appearances, though I was, all my life, very careful with choosing my friends. But...

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I Ran (short story)

posted by ToEkNeE

I woke up as usual. But there was something about today that was going to change. Unusual. I stumbled out of bed, opening my eyes to darkness. I wouldn't need to expect sunlight just yet. I clumsily found my way to the bathroom to take my shower.
For some reason, I wanted extremely hot water. Usually, I would have tepid water on, but this time, the water was blazing. The water beat my back with an intensity far beyond a human could ever intake. It was like hail was being shot at my skin, with a beat to it. The burning was far worse. When every droplet hit my skin, there would suddenly be a sharp...

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jantung of the soilder

posted by delta117

i awoke pain everywhere it felt like my skin was melting but yet i did not scream traing kicked in and i found my black armoar to any normal sentient bieng it would be like an anchor but i am not normal am i after that i grabbed my weapons the first was a set of 2 curved assian knifes curved and made for my hands detik standard ar senapan it had no scope only sights all i needed to kill at 100 yards third a shotgun normal used in swat teams tactical 12 guage shot gun pompa action forth 44mm glock i holousterd it and my knifes my knifes at arm length pistol on my hip then an explosion rocked my...

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a thoughtfull pen

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