menulis Article: i think i need help :S please look!

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posted by 1-2vampire

right. ohkay. my best friend is dying. but in some way i knew it was going to happen. through my poems :S yu may b like urgh heres a fuking fake goodbye but please im not joking! HELP ME! :'(

ohkay, i wrote this poem a hari before my frend started akting weirdly and another a hari before she found out she had pancreas cancer.

poem number one:
Closest of strangers,
Time takes it's toll
Keep close to your loved one before they can fall.
No lebih of the laughter
Only the clock ticks away
Ever so slowly the thread shall fray
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly their smile fades away.

poem number two:
Nearer and nearer death comes along
Through the path where it doesn't belong
Don't waste your time
Keep close and shine
Be there until their Smile is long gone.

:( im not faking, PLEASE tell me what is happening to me. :( i gtg Livane's waking up.

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1-2vampire btw when it ses "time takes its toll" i meant to put "death takes its toll", i got confused

jem_ I think you were using what's called your intuition. Your six sense. Some freaky things happen in this world, I don't know what to tell you... I only thing I can think of to offer comfort is to tell you that you are not the only one. And these "coincidances" are nothing to be afraid of. P.S. Maybe you should take intruction from your poem. Maybe your subconcious, intuition, six sense or whatever you want to call it was picking up on things somehow and you should maybe listen to it. Like "Keep close and shine. Be there until their Smile is long gone." being your friend's sunshine.being there for her and staying with her long after she's to weak to put up a facade of happyness. I hope any of this was some help. I'm very sorry about your friend. :( I wish her well.

1-2vampire thank you. I'm happy to say that she is still alive. The doctors are saying its a miracle that she's lasted this long. They don't know but they think she might pull through. They're not sure, though. (i have more poems ive written buh yuno)

1-2vampire About a day after that comment, she died. I took your advice, jem_, thank you.

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an malaikat in hell

posted by delta117

the summer night was making me sweet thru my trench coat. I was with the other coullge studnets they had made fun of my fear of demons if only they new what my life was then they to would fear the beast but i dot fear them i hate them its commoin like anjing and kucing demons and malaikat evn half malaikat will allways be enemies. we got to the hole were the suicidel children where suposed to have jumped down to kill themselves. "So jack" nathan began "is this what u were so terrified of " and his lackies all laughed under my mantel i felt the hilt of my menyeberang, salib daggers not membaca to defend my name but...

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underworls Chapter 5: Road trips

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Tayce’s p.o.v

“Training time for Lilly” I sneered looking at the small blond. She nodded. “Let me get ready” She said. I shrugged and then turned to go, but was stopped oleh Hayden. “She already trained today” he informed me, I nodded. “I know, but Rebecca wants her to have lebih of it” I told him, he rolled his eyes. “Why is she being such a bitch?” he asked me I laughed. “It’s Rebecca, she sees her as a threat” I told him, he tensed up. The he turned to me. “You’re not being so bad” he said, pointing out that I’m usually a bitch. “She didn’t do anything...

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What is foreshadowing and why is it important?

posted by paulmarktag

I think that the most important lesson I learned from my mentor, penulis Arline Chase, concerned foreshadowing. Here is the acak House Webster’s definition of foreshadow: to tampil atau indicate beforehand. In other words, to provide some hint, clue, atau indication of something that is going to happen.

Why is foreshadowing important? I learned this lesson the hard way. In many of my first short stories—which I recommend as a medium to anyone testing the waters to see if they want to write fiction—I thought that I was being so crafty with my endings. I wrapped up the crime (or whatever) with...

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black moon readers!

posted by joe-edwardfan

i was just bored and i thought thats the same way edward feels towards bella so i just uploaded it! hope u like it!

hey guys!
first of all i wanted to thank anda all for the support over the 21 chaps.
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and i wanted to tell anda that im gonna start a new story!(yay im so happy! im really getting addicted to fanpop)
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so im gonna give anda some names anda should pick one!(each name has a different story there not the same)
and im going to write my new story (the name most of u picked)
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so dont forget to tell me this really is important to me
so here are the names:

1.broken heart...

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OMG OMG OMG i found this written on my arm when i woke up!!!!!

posted by 1-2vampire

Darkest light, brightest sight
Midnight sky, Nyx's day
That navy ribbon shall lead the way
Full moon, Selene's sun
It soon shall be the only one...

heres another one

No red,
No yellow,
No blue,
No white,
Nature is gone,
The bunga are dead,
There be no lebih light,
Black!
Everywhere around.
Scream!
There is no other sound.
All is lost.

And then another:

Fly,
So high,
HIgh as the sky,
Into seeping blackness.
No light is upon us,
And nothing is ever clear.
Diamond bright,
Beauty in there eyes,
The stars are alive.

AND THEN ANOTHER!!!!

Midnight sky,
Burning ice,
No more, no more, no more,
Say it thrice.
Light will be engulfed in a black haze.
We have gone through the Council's faze.

BLOODY HELL!!!!!!
what yu think it means?
yu think its a prophesy?
idk! HELP!!!! i sometimes write poems in my sleep!! i dont memba riting them but they in my handwriting!! TELL ME WHAT IS HAPPENING!!!!

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Broken Dreams Chapter 35

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

Four months. Four agonizing months since I had seen her in the park. Four agonizing months of starting to dial her number, and then stopping myself.

I am listening to the middle aged woman complain about her life. She doesn't even need a therapist.

I will the clock to pindah faster. My office is dark, modern, and devoid of warmth. Ironically, it fits me.

Thankfully, the session is over. I tell Amamda that she's made progress, selanjutnya week, and it's been a pleasure. Notice the lie. I glance down at the meja tulis, meja calender, and look up 2:30.

I don't get a chance to see who is scheduled next, because...

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Chapter 4: Edwards’s pov

posted by joe-edwardfan

end of chap3
The bel, bell rang then I saw Edward waiting for me in front of the office
-there u are I thought anda were going to ditch me
-whenever I make a promise I will always keep it!
Specially the one that includes: killing Damien and his mother
-so who was he?
He asked a little angry
-no one
I sighed
-I won’t push it if u don’t want to talk about it
-that's a good idea
We reached the biology class I sat beside the window again and edward sat beside me like jasper
The teacher came in the class and told everyone to welcome edward and blah blah blah
In the biology class I wasn’t as tired as before so...

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"Benny" - Chapter Three

posted by marissa

"After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal."

Chapter Three:

Alan:

When Alan got onto the bus, he spotted Benny immediately and sat down selanjutnya to him.

Alan took the bus every Tuesday and Thursday to visit his mother. He’d met Benny two weeks yang lalu and the two talked every time Alan was on the bus, and Alan ate up every word that Benny said.

He had been skeptical at first, but it didn’t take long for Alan to honestly believe he was talking to God when he rode the bus. After a while, the insanity of the situation wore off and it seemed completely normal.

“Hello Alan,”...

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Fallout: Kind of a Drabble.

posted by Sweet_Pants

He was yelling again.

    I’d close my eyes, letting his voice fade over my ears, pleading my breath to go even. My ears traveled out, hearing anything but my father’s yelling, anything but his harsh insults, anything but his mocking...

    Tick, tick, the clock was ticking. It was an malaikat clock, hanging over my head, hanging over the computer I was sitting in front of.

    He was saying something about towels, towels left on the floor in the bathroom...

    “...left towels all over the damn floors...someone...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 26

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

"Why did anda leave?"

I wish I could tell him why. But seeing him again din't ease the pain. Not one bit. The agony only multiplied. All of the feelings I had suppressed were clamouring to be acknowledged.

Ashleigh peeked out from her curtain of hair, and made eye contact with him.

My jantung skipped a beat. She was his child too, I knew that, but he maybe he wouldn't want anything to do with her atau me. He probably hated me.

Ansking the pertanyaan I had feared the most, he said, "Is this her?"

I looked at the ground.

"I can't do this again," the words hurt me to say them, but I could never force...

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The Night Sky Hunting

posted by Lorelei-Essence

Chapter Two

A bulan later…

“Hungry?” Xavier asked.
“Starving.” I replied. Xavier went into the fridge and pulled out a tan plastic bowl and a smaller turquoise bowl. He placed the bowl of fresh buah-buahan in front of me and the small bowl of plain yogurt. He handed me a fork.
“Enjoy.” He said. Xavier kissed me on my forehead.
“Thank you.” I said.
I began to eat when I heard a moan. Xavier looked down at his shoes.
“Um…after breakfast do anda want to go for a walk?” Xavier asked.
“Xavier, what’s that sound?” I asked.
“It’s…Madison.” He choked out.
“Doing what?” I asked....

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Cold Toes: A Wedding Novel

posted by genyva

Genyva Salters
Cold Toes

Prologue
June 30, 2004
11:45 Open Door Eating

It’s the worst hari in the world for a lunch date. I look like hell my light brown hair was frizzing like a poodle. Damn this humid summer, only in Texas the humidity 90% all the time. And this place is like a hut; all the hot air coming from the windows is blowing out the A/C. How is any one able to enjoy lunch when they are drinking the air?

I looked over to Ethan, who was making his way towards the table. We had been together so long in this little town. I cinta it to death but I think its time to pindah out. Greene, Texas...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 21

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

Nine hours.

I was exhausted after it.

Rion came into the hospital room. He took my hand, and told me softly that I had a little girl.

"Rion, there is no way I will ever be able to tell anda just how thankful I am that I have you," I sighed, before I drifted into a deep black mist.

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I held my little girl close to me. I was filled with an indescribable cinta for this small creature, who I had worked so hard to bring here. Who I already loved.

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Around a tahun after that, I became a guardian ad litem....

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the vampire diary

posted by twilight0girl

isaac

this bulan is going to be terrible.
i live in barrow alaska.this is thier bulan of complete,totall darkness.also,this is when the vampire come out to feed on the helpless men,women,and children.but instead of shaking in pure fear,i'll go out and see how they act.but i'm also going out because my two brothers,isaac and marcus,are vampire too.

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4 days later

i've never walked around outside during this time of month.i can hear the screaming coming from every direction.i havent seen any va,pires nor my two brothers.when i started to walke away...

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We Are Wrong...

posted by BeSafe

I chanced a glance at you
from across the crowded room
and that was when I noticed
anda were looking at me too

we both know this shouldn't happen
its a road we've been down before
and the only way it ever ends
is with anda walking out the door

so I wish someone would explain to me
why I'm still rooted in place
staring in the direction
of just another lonely face

my mind is screaming at me to run
while my jantung asks me to stay
for a moment I dont know what to do
and if its a price I'm willing to pay

we both know this is wrong
the cinta that we share
but we also know that wont stop us
because to find this kind of cinta is rare

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A acak tempat tidur Time Story I Made Up In 5 Minuets

posted by SongBirdTeam

In the distent land of isis, there lived a young princess, who loved to be outside. on one, perticularly nice, day, she went out to talk to the birds, when suddenly she was captuerd oleh an evil mage, and told the king if he did not reliquish his kingdom to him, he would keep the princess untill her death.
in desperation, the king sent his greatest knights to save his duagter, but alas, it was all in vain.
the king had almost lost all hope, when he heard that a young sorccerer had come to his kingdom. the disstresed king called for the sorccerer to be brought before him.
when he saw the sorccerer...

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Diary of a super hero with a plan. Diary entry 1

posted by dragonrider

Dear Diary,

I hate my life now. I am now going against everything of what I stand for. It's all because of one stupid mistake. I can't write about it now. It's just too shameful to write about it. Today I mostly hung around my room. atau my new room in Jerry's house. Man I hate him so much now. anda are probably thinking Who are you? What are anda talking about?
I am Lily. I'm a super hero. Actually no I am not. I can die like a normal person but I can't get hurt easily. I have lebih than one powers so I live a normal life span.
You know I am actually not a super hero anymore but I'm working on that....

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Poem: Lonely Girl

posted by emmett

Lonely Girl

So peaceful in sleep she lies
Brown hair spilled across her pillow
I can picture her beautiful eyes
Looking into her dreams…

She looks like she’s not listening
But really she’s deep in thought
Remembering forgotten memories
When she lived life as she ought

Stolen kisses in the night
Laughing with her friends
Little did she know back then
This is where it all would end

Her jantung is filled with regret
Always looking back
She wishes she would just forget
And find happiness once lebih

I don’t think she’ll ever forget you
But for now there’s joy on her face
She keeps reminding herself
It’s not a race, to be the first to find your place

Now as the sun goes down
She’ll say a prayer
Wishing perhaps for you
But really, life’s not that fair
There’s nothing this Lonely Girl can do

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Broken Dreams Epilogue

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

There isn't a lot left to say. I guess happy endings can happen, but the struggle to get there isn't always that straightforward.

It wasn't that easy. And I wouldn't wish it was. Because that made it worth it.

I glance down at my hand for the umpteenth time that day. The small circular stone set on a silver band.

I'm twenty six...so that's seven years. Seven years since...

I never have and never will regret any of that.

"Serena, are anda even listening to me?!" Kayla shrieks from the other side of the dressing room door. "Come on! You've been in there, what, fifteen menit now?"

She graduated...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 34

posted by BellaSwan636

Ashleigh

We got to go the hospital. A nice lady wearing white stuff gave us lollipops, and we got to play teaparties. There was another girl there, and she was five. I wanna be five. But I'm turning four in, um, I think mommy berkata a month? I dunno. But anda have to be four before anda can be five, I think. Why can't I just skip it?

Anyways, now there is a big girl living in the guest room. She says her name is Kayla. She has shiny goldish hair. Like Jamie's mom, but with brownish stripes in it. It's long. Like if she sits down, she almost sits on it. My hair is only halfway as long.

My mommy gets...