menulis Article: i think i need help :S please look!

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posted by 1-2vampire

right. ohkay. my best friend is dying. but in some way i knew it was going to happen. through my poems :S yu may b like urgh heres a fuking fake goodbye but please im not joking! HELP ME! :'(

ohkay, i wrote this poem a hari before my frend started akting weirdly and another a hari before she found out she had pancreas cancer.

poem number one:
Closest of strangers,
Time takes it's toll
Keep close to your loved one before they can fall.
No lebih of the laughter
Only the clock ticks away
Ever so slowly the thread shall fray
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly.
Ever so slowly their smile fades away.

poem number two:
Nearer and nearer death comes along
Through the path where it doesn't belong
Don't waste your time
Keep close and shine
Be there until their Smile is long gone.

:( im not faking, PLEASE tell me what is happening to me. :( i gtg Livane's waking up.

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1-2vampire btw when it ses "time takes its toll" i meant to put "death takes its toll", i got confused

jem_ I think you were using what's called your intuition. Your six sense. Some freaky things happen in this world, I don't know what to tell you... I only thing I can think of to offer comfort is to tell you that you are not the only one. And these "coincidances" are nothing to be afraid of. P.S. Maybe you should take intruction from your poem. Maybe your subconcious, intuition, six sense or whatever you want to call it was picking up on things somehow and you should maybe listen to it. Like "Keep close and shine. Be there until their Smile is long gone." being your friend's sunshine.being there for her and staying with her long after she's to weak to put up a facade of happyness. I hope any of this was some help. I'm very sorry about your friend. :( I wish her well.

1-2vampire thank you. I'm happy to say that she is still alive. The doctors are saying its a miracle that she's lasted this long. They don't know but they think she might pull through. They're not sure, though. (i have more poems ive written buh yuno)

1-2vampire About a day after that comment, she died. I took your advice, jem_, thank you.

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One thing

posted by Cutebutcrazy--

i never thought the hari would come when i had to leave my friends and family.but it did and it was all my fault. anda see my names claire and i got in a bit of trouble. i was walking halaman awal from my friends house and happened to over hear something i wasn't suppose to.it was a fight between to guys and from what i heard the fight was over drugs and money so now i'm runing for my life and for the people i cinta lifes too.

"i'll miss anda mommy" i say giving my mother one last hug. "as soon as this is over i'll be home,plaese don't worry."

"i'm not worried" my mom lied.She was a tarible liar so i basicly saw right through her.

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**1st attempt** (I'll stick to poems) Breathe.

posted by Sweet_Pants

A/N; AHAHAHAHAHA! And anda thought i wouldn't dare ;). Anyways, here's something weird i don't even understand. Seriously. But I'll post it here because I feel happy. Yeah, even I don't believe it. Anyways I'll stop talking 'cause this font is making me feel stupid.

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Breathe. anda need to breathe.

“I can’t.” I whimpered “I can’t breathe. It’s too hard. If I breathe, the numbness will go. I can’t let it go.”

You need to. People are counting on anda to have a heart-beat. And oleh jantung beat I mean they count on anda to be here. To have a-little...

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I Raised Myself Not To Cry**sniffle**

posted by VampirePrinsess

Mommy... Johnny brought a gun to school,
He told his friends that it was cool,
And when he pulled the trigger back,
It shot with a great crack.
Mommy, I was a good girl, I did what I was told,
I went to school, I got straight A's, I even got the gold!
But Mommy, when I went school that day,
I never berkata good-bye,
I'm sorry Mommy, I had to go, But Mommy, please don't cry. When Johnny shot
the gun, He hit me and another,
And all because Johnny, Got the gun from his older brother.
Mommy, please tell Daddy; That I cinta him very much,
And please tell Chris; my boyfriend; That it wasn't just a crush.
And tell...

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Rebel: A Poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

It’s a silent staring match between anda and her

The quiet air above anda is whispering anda words

Words anda choose to ignore, words glaring at you,

Gnawing at anda from the very tip of her eyes

But anda won’t let down, no matter how much

She isn’t saying, no matter how much she can’t say

Because you’re in power, anda brought her here

anda yell, and she shrinks back, but in fear?

No, she’s waiting for her chips to add up

As life’s a poker game, the highs are all that won

She knows this; you’re the one who taught her

‘Lay low until anda gain the takhta

To strike back at those who thought

The same as Arrogance himself;

That you, gullible and pathetic, were theirs alone’

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Please tell me what anda think, criticizm is welcome.

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Dearheart's Do's and Don'ts for Budding Writers

posted by Dearheart

Ladies and gentlemen, writers of all ages (especially teens/preteens) and species (except mosquitoes), welcome! I'm bored, have a writer's block made of concrete and am feeling particularly resentful towards the curse known as textese/chatspeak. (Seriously, whatever happened to good ol' morse code?) So I decided the best way to give my menulis a rest is to help out with yours! Aren't I generous? :)

Before I begin, I'd like to point out that I am not an expert oleh any means. I'm not a menulis guru atau a master advice-giver-person. I am simply a fellow writer who wants to pass on what she's learned;...

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cinta and hate

posted by twilight-rocks9

One hari in my sixth grade tahun I met a guy because of my friend Brianna Garcia well two guys really. The names were Jessie and Joe. Jessie was Brianna’s cousin I had to deal with him. Joe he was Brianna’s crush. I don’t know why but I hated Joe when I met him but I faked a smile because Brianna liked him maybe I hated him both because she latterly dragged me there and that didn’t put me in the best mood. But soon after Brianna had to leave. So I just stayed with the other group of people I hung out with and sometimes we literally hung out well up side down anyway. My seventh grade year...

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black moon chapter 17

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 17
Bella pov
We were playing chess on the sofa and as always I was winning! Hehehe it feels so great every time I beat him
-u lose again!
I berkata and clapped my hands
-yeah your good at this thing
-well what can I say……………
He sttood up and hugged me
-tell me how anda do this?
He whispered
I touched his head and tapped it hard and said
-just think.
-ok
He kissed my forehead and went upstaires to change cause we were going hunting
He came back and we raced deep in the green greeny jungel I always hated that color I like bron ,warm warna like the sun…………………….
I stopped at my...

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Footsteps

posted by Spotty_Vision21

"Hey baby, where are anda going?" growled a deep voice.

Tammy resisted the instinct to turn around and walked faster.

"Just keep moving and he'll go away. Just keep moving."

She was now hyperaware of her surroundings. The man's quickening footsteps. The cool but smoggy air whoosing in and out of her lungs. Her heartbeat speeding up. The clacking noise her heels made upon the sidewalk.

Her eyes darted left. The store window reflected a woman in her late 40's, blonde hair fading.

"C'mon, baby, turn around."

The voice sounded much closer. Tammy's hands began to shake.

What could he want with her? She...

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I told you!

posted by Whiskey37

Jake wanted his dad to be proud of him.
He knew his dad was interested in wars.
'Why?' Jake wanted to know.
'Wars shape the world,' his dad said. 'If anda have a knowledge of past wars, anda can better understand current politics.'
Jake didn't really know what his dad meant.
'I get it,' he said.
'Clever boy.' His dad smiled and ruffled his hair.
Jake felt six feet tall.

Jake couldn't wait to tell his dad about his new school project.
'Guess what,' he said, as soon as his dad got in the door.
His dad looked at Jake. 'What?'
'We have to do a big project at school,' Jake said. 'We have to choose...

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A quick romance P2 ( lebih added to the last)

posted by _Blackhearts_xx

My first kiss, here it is, the man of my dreams, together we are combined, lips entwined, hands joined, the feeling makes me overjoyed. His arms wrapped around me as he continues to ciuman my lips,my arms in response to his, pindah around his neck. Holding him,beckoning him to come closer.

Our lips still flowing, we slide to the ground, his body on puncak, atas of mine,holding me, caressing me. Stopping to take a breath, he whispers " Your a good kisser anda know?".he chuckled as he brushed my hair with his fingers.

My cheeks flush red "no" i smile " but i do now" i pull him down, pressing my lips to his,...

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TO THE FOURTH chp 3

posted by babina

recap:

I had a feeling that that was some kind of signal and that they might be tricking me but what were am i going to do.I didn't know in the first place if i was planning to walk over, take her oleh the hand and walk her away atau if the Qsix were the ones who were gonna walk away, all knew was that i just wanted to tell them to leave her alone.
But i had no other option of what to do so i started walking over to where she was standing planing to take her away, but as i took the fourth step, one of the Qsix guys pushed a book bag that was on the floor in my way. Before i saw it i was on the ground...

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a writers best friend

added by whitelion

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writers group, session 5

posted by pixie09

this is a story that i wrote for my practice tahun 12 exams, its theme was 'circle'
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The girl strode on, her kap, hood firmly over her head, her eyes fixed on the horizon. Around her, the cars grew less, but the trees grew plentiful. The orb-like moon rose steadily into the sky making visibility almost possible through the canopy of ever increasing leaves.

None of this mattered. The girl strode on, her face set, her one intention clear in her mind.

The lingkaran must have closure.

At this thought, the girl lengthened her stride, each step crunching the fallen,...

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Spotlight part 1(german)

posted by Ms_Montana

Spotlight

1. Kalte Pizza

Es war ein kalter und verregneter Tag im November. Manche Menschen bezeichneten diesen Regen sogar als Schnee, aber nicht so Helena. Sie war nicht der Typ Mensch der das alles beschönigte.
Während sie durch sarang, den voll gestopften U-Bahnsteig hetzte, kramte sie ihn ihrer Tasche nach ihrem Handy. Sie versuchte in dem Gedränge die Nummer ihrer Mutter zu tippen, jedoch ohne Erfolg.
Helena rollte genervt mit ihren Augen. Ihre Mutter hatte ihr gesagt sie müsse mittags ihre kleine Schwester Allison abholen. Und nur deswegen stand sie hier.
Links von ihr telefonierte ein schwer...

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poem, capture my jantung

posted by whitelion

love, a word that can bring much joy atau much pain
it can put the jantung at ease atau under strain
and as that word to each other we spoke
it made our hearts complete and not broke

a feeling unlike any other i felt
as anda heavenly eyes made my jantung melt
anda were always the one, i could tell
cause from the moment i saw anda in cinta i fell

the words to describe anda a poet can never posses
anda were always the one that was hard to impress
anda wanted lebih than poetry and bunga could give
because only on true cinta your jantung could live

to capture my jantung for anda it only took
one moment one smile and one unforgettable look

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My Best Authors of All Time (In My Opinion)

posted by sapherequeen

Edgar Allen Poe - #1

Okay, so this is a countdown of my most favorit authors of all time. It goes from igood #10 to magnficient #1.

I am also so happy for myself because this is technically my first work of menulis that I will soon publish.....

Alright, here it is;

1. Edgar Allen Poe - He has had a rough life filled with death, grief, abandonment, and misery, and his ways to cope with these difficult emotions were his magnificent stories and peoms that we enjoy to this day. Also, he and I can relate...
2. Stephen King - He has this enigmatic personality that makes anda wonder and puzzle, and he's a bit of an oddball...

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In cinta With My Best Friend

added by martemora15

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Lets write something...

added by CathCuddy

Source: google

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Opposites

posted by harold

The penulis considered. Then the penulis wrote:

Two opposites sat on a park bench

The penulis deleted

eating their curds and whey

as soon as it was typed, and replaced it with

and one wanted the other to leave.

The critic noted "That's really not very specific, is it? Two 'opposites'? Come on, you're going to have to be lebih specific than that."

The penulis considered. Then the penulis wrote:

The Republican sat down selanjutnya to the Democrat on the park bench

and nodded, satisfied. The critic clucked his tongue. "Welll...it's not exactly original, is it? And how different are they, really? Honestly, anda couldn't...

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populer oleh a Landslide Chapter 1

posted by lollipopszx3

As I stood there waiting at the jalan, street corner I thought about how much I was going to kill Fawn. She's making me wait oleh the jalan, street corner drenched in rain while she was probably getting a ride from her father.

I then saw her father's car turn up around the corner. Fawn, with her colourful Jansport bag came out... with an umbrella. I ran up to her and mencuri the umbrella.

"Hey gothie! Come back here!" She yelled. I laughed as I ran away. She loved to call me gothie. I wore black make-up, black clothing, and I loved skulls. But that doesn't make me goth!

If I'm not a goth, my own person, then...