For me Twilight was too easy to read. I could predict what would happen and the plot was too easy. The thing is, the plot isn't bad. vampire exist, that's cool. anda know one, yes, very cool. But the way Stephenie Meyer introduces it, how she developed her characters, how she modeled the vampire species, that is where Twilight gets people annoyed. It represent the iceburg that sunk the titanic, the heal that killed Achilles...
Us Harry Potter fan wouldn't be as hateful if the Twilight characters were as real and developed as J Rowling's, if the characters weren't *poof* beautiful, attractive, smart, strong and if the plot was something truly well thought off.
Okay Harry Potter fans, imagine Twilight didn't exist. Rowling released a series about vampires. The heroine is a girl who falls in love, after years of friendship with a vampire. They get married, the end.
anda find in this 'Rowling's twilight' an elaborate plot. There is a logical porblem, climax as climatic as it gets, a twist that nobody could have expected.
The girl isn't a Bella. It's a Hermione, atau a Ginny. She refuses to play weak and defenceless she stands oleh herself and doesn't depend. This sceries could be alright, no?
That's because the idea behind Twilight isn't bad. I just wish somebody other then Meyer would have gotten the idea and how it would've been developed more. If Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ginny and Ron Weasley's personalitites and characters would've been the Twilight vampires, we'd ALL be gaga for this new series.
What's wrong with Twilight, it isn't the diea of vampires.
It's how theese vampire are, and how Bella is portrayed.
ps. I,m not saying Meyer is a bad writter. Everybody needs constructive critisism for her first time writting. If she writes agian I'll surely try it. This is also one of my first artikel and I,m not very old, so please keep that in mind.
(A customer in her late teens approaches me in the bookstore.)
Customer: “Hey, do anda guys sell the Twilight books?”
Me: “Yes, they’re right over there.”
Customer: “Have anda read them?”
Me: “Yes, I have.”
Customer: “Didn’t anda just cinta them?!”
Me: “Well, actually, they aren’t really my type of book, so–”
Customer: *suddenly furious* “Are anda f***ing serious?! These are the best buku ever written! I’m going to tell Edward to come and bite anda and drink all your blood!”
Me: *backing away* “Have a nice day, ma’am…”
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right then the sun came toungt the window and then edward begin to spark
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ron is he waring girls cothing
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and that's the end of this fine story
no i cant see anda it's so drak a cat even could not see in here.
hah ron very funny, lets try to find a light swicht for anda can see.
ron i found one. well then turn it one then
i am don't worry
boo am going to suck your owls blood.
right then the sun came toungt the window and then edward begin to spark
look harry this vamiper sparks how sad is that.
ron is he waring girls cothing
yay i think he is
no am not but am in cinta with a human girl
harry and ron at the same time laghed them selfed silly
and that's the end of this fine story
