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Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one atau the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power atau skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.

A.     POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, atau also has api powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B.    All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C.    Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a acak villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1.    THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2.    THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3.    THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” atau “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for anda *blasts kidnapped character* I hated anda anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D.    NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain atau hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills anda with energy beam* atau *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* atau *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! anda do that, and people are going to hate anda so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already berkata it killed you. anda can’t say it made anda stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless anda are close enough to go *drills pisau into stomach* then anda can’t just say *throws pisau into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E.    There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, atau even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver atau Shadow atau Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” atau “Sonia”.
F.    I personally cinta to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, atau hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful acak girl. I know what anda might say. “But anda berkata that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And anda could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking oleh people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, anda can make their eyes sparkle, anda can make their hair shine, anda can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush atau not.
G.    Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what anda use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something anda might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL anda SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then anda can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, atau die in luar angkasa to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some acak song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).

Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve berkata it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1.    Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE malaikat TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2.    THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN malaikat CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?

So that’s my daftar of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think anda can at least agree with some of it.

In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.

Eat Pie and Prosper
I liked Blood's original theme *sad face* but I guess this fits him too. Artist: Crush 40 Video source: Blackblur7
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(So baffle is back to share some lebih of his opinions on things... oh wow.XD)

"I AM THE GREAT AND MIGHT BAFFLE, AND I AM BACK TO EDUCATE anda FOOLISH IMBECILES ON WHAT I, THE GREAT AND EVER-SO POWERFUL BAFFLE, DESPISES IN ALL THE LANDS! SO SIT BACK AND LET THE HATRED BEGIN!"

#1. I hate the fact that a sequel came to this.
#2. I hate the fact that my face is balding
#3. I hate the stupid jeruk, orange lynx.
#4. I hate the fact that the stupid jeruk, orange lynx get's a history video.
#5. I hate the fact that as of the moment, the image gallery is overruled with recolors... THAT SHOULD BE MY GLORIOUS IMAGE PAINTED...
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posted by CosmoLuvsTails
Recently I've had a bit of a change of main characters, and a few new ideas for their bios :3 A few spoilers may turn up here and there, I dunno.

Amber Louisa Prower
She's still my main character, still a Prower and not a lot has changed, really. She's fallen out with Jenna-Su, her last best friend, and now has a full, happy family life. She lives with her Mum and Dad, and her sisters Lillian, Heather and Gwen. She's trying to fit in with her new group of friends and can't help but look back at the times where she was part of a bigger cause in the world.

River Spark
She's now got a few friends,...
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posted by Giz_4ever
 Zem
Zem
Name: Zem the wolf

Surname: Hunter

Animal: Wolf

Eye colour: Golden/Orange

bulu colour: He has bright green is mainly his colour of fur, there is shades of darker green as his hair and tail etc.

Clothes: He has a black jacket, brown atau blue trousers.

Accessories: He has a brown sabuk and he sometimes wheres a ring on his wrist.

Extras: He has chest bulu and silky bulu all over.

Role: He is sorta normal, but he has one power and that is telepathy.

Fun fact: He is a bit flirty and pervy at times. XD
Love is a sweet song
sang oleh dying swans.
malaikat of Heaven
fighting for dreams
they cannot save.

Far is so near
now when you're here.
Many deaths tonight
cannot save our sweet love.

So cruel
too dark.
Let my soul depart.
Don't let me die
without false hope of our love!

cinta is peace between
desires and dreams.
malaikat of Hell
laughing at your feelings.

Far is so near
now when you're here
sharing the time with me.
Touch me with the flame,
make me burn like Hell.

So cruel
so sweet
my revenge shall be revealed.
Let me lay anda down
in your grave of my love.


*****
Poems again~ Hope anda enjoy it. ^^
There was once a single being called VIRUS. She membagi, split into three parts. ANTI-NICOLE (Virus), IRON-NICOLE (Rin), and the identities.

The identities are millions of blankly filled Virus people. They all start out the same, but after a week's time they choose sides.

Abilities: Every single Identity has Chaos Energy, which is often mistaken for electricity. They are also composed of part nanite/part artificial life, so they can morph themselves into any type of shape, regenerate, and even multiply.

Personality: Each Identity is usually creepy and heartless, but not always. Their personalities are...
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SPIKE AWOKE. He then realized he was alone, and he heard the Tornado2 start up.
"WAIT FOR ME!" Spike yelled.
Spike threw the covers off of him and ran outside. He looked past the door to see that Tails was just testing the Tornado2. Windy could be seen, tapping her foot in impacience. Spike let out a sigh of releif.
Windy saw Spike looking out the doorway.
"YO SPIKE WAZZUP?" She yelled speaking over the racket the Tornado2 made.
Tails put on his gogles.
"WE SHOULD GET GOING!"
"NOW?"
"YES NOW!"
Spike and Windy shrugged as they walked up to the machine.
Windy climbed in. That's when spike noticed the...
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Chapter three: Messages Part two: Sender
Location: New Legion base
Date: Thursday, December 21st 4337
“…And anda are sure that the project made these events occur?” A tall echidna, wearing a sort of uniform asked, a hooded echidna, as they both walked through a string of dark hallways.
“Ahm certain, sir.” A Tocktin (Cockney British) accented echidna under the hood, answered. “Not only that, but my guess’is, that she does remembah one bloomin thing. I mean, being from that past world and all.”
“Indeed.” The taller one replied. “Well at least we still have that back-up Phantis...
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