Sonic fan Characters Club
gabung
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one atau the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power atau skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.

A.     POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, atau also has api powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B.    All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C.    Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a acak villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1.    THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2.    THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3.    THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” atau “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for anda *blasts kidnapped character* I hated anda anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D.    NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain atau hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills anda with energy beam* atau *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* atau *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! anda do that, and people are going to hate anda so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already berkata it killed you. anda can’t say it made anda stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless anda are close enough to go *drills pisau into stomach* then anda can’t just say *throws pisau into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E.    There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, atau even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver atau Shadow atau Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” atau “Sonia”.
F.    I personally cinta to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, atau hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful acak girl. I know what anda might say. “But anda berkata that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And anda could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking oleh people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, anda can make their eyes sparkle, anda can make their hair shine, anda can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush atau not.
G.    Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what anda use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something anda might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL anda SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then anda can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, atau die in luar angkasa to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some acak song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).

Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve berkata it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1.    Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE malaikat TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2.    THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN malaikat CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?

So that’s my daftar of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think anda can at least agree with some of it.

In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.

Eat Pie and Prosper
posted by smartone123
name: Meoko

age: 18

Nickname: punk dump,load mouth,and gingermind

Stereotype: loadmouth punk

Race: American and Japanese

Hometown: Tokyo,Japan

Birthday: December 7

Astrological Sign: Sagittarius

Species: dog

Gender: female

Religion:unsure

Allergies:bitches XD

Sexual preference: females

Occupation: collage
Way of speaking:Japanese slang

Theme Song(s):[link]
[link]

Personal Quote:"get the FUCK out of the KIRAING way!"

Describe their voice: bit husky

Weapon of choice:knife


PERSONALITY

When anda first meet them: sneer
As anda know them better(and they like you):nice and caring
As anda know them better(and they hate you):...
continue reading...
posted by SaraTheDog
"When anda where little we found anda in a luar angkasa ship that crash landed on this planet.In the spaceship was amap to your halaman awal planet." My--FAKE mother--Told me.Cam was wide eyed and mouth wide open.My Mom gave me a map to my halaman awal planet."We should have told you.But now we both think anda should go...home.Your real home." My father told me while he tryed not to cry."thank you." I berkata and then I grabbed Cam oleh the arm and we ran out.We found Zack and Dee Dee in their huge secert lab.I knew they could gets us a ship.Cam I knew would come with me."Zack,Dee Dee,We need a ship."I told them every thing and showed them the map.They looked at each other and they both berkata "Adventure!Can we come we've been working on a big sapceship." I smiled.And I berkata "Of course!You two are the smart ones.And I don't know how to work a spaceship."I knew now that I would need the help of ALL my friends.
[[Continuing really old story.]]

As the cheery-ish sun rose to greet the world again, the cars zoomed oleh in a hurry, ignoring the streets-people that need thier help. The box I was sleeping in had gotten soggy from fall's late thunderstorm with rain. And my grey bulu had gotten soaked, and dripped the dirty rain water. My pale berwarna merah muda, merah muda eyes looked up at the city sky, glistening with sadness. But some hope that someone would help me. Anyone in fact. As long as I got out of this terrible life I am living.
I hated the rich, they always think "We got it harder than those hobos." No, just take a look...
continue reading...
posted by XxXLolaXxX
The New Kid? Ugh, Not Again!~ Part 2: Who IS She?

When Kimi and Aya left Miss Heather's oh-so-akward-office, They could feel the starring. Kimi heard whispered words like 'Her?', 'Oh, not another one!', and 'GAY!?'. She started looking around franticaly. She saw Aya make a sharp turn, she followed, not wanting to be lost in a place like THIS. Aya stopped in front of a dipan, sofa that sat two identical girls. One had white colouring and hearts on her frilly dress, the other had black colouring and her dress was decorated with Xes.
"Twins," Aya started.
"Aya," The twins replied, one happy and peppy,...
continue reading...
1. u make an argument over how fast Sonic is.

2. u make an argument over how Sonic faster than Shadow

3. u name ur child after a Sonic the Hedgehog character

4. u buy a Hedgehog just so u can name it Sonic Shadow Silver etc.

5. u try to make words to Classic Sonic Songs

5.5 ur secsesful on making words to Classic Sonic Songs

6. u make an argument over Sonic the Hedgehog characters that are mentioned in comics are real characters

7. u can explain Sonic's speed lebih than one way

8. "Shadow is not Emo, he is misunderstood!"

9. u understand the joke about Shadow being Emo

10. u make 'Slash parings' that...
continue reading...
{my grandma had a jantung attack after membaca this true story but she lived too}
DONT READ THIS IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-11

It has been a week since we got to the sea of despair and the raising of corals ancestors and it is still raining and storming not seeming to b letting up soon. So today we r leaving the sea and going back into the mountains most of Lovana is made up of mountains.For some reason arc has been quite quiet even if she has quiet a LOUD personality has been keeping quiet close to dasher. Come to think of it her and dasher r almost the same age he's 46 she's like 43 45ish....
continue reading...
Ah~! I find a losted poetry somewhere in my old laptop and had saved it to this new~
This must be very new, because I had use those words somewhere before~ ^^ Hope anda like this small poetry, for the big words.

*****

I've done my everything
I've crossed the line of invisibility
I've been in hell and heaven
but still, I always return

It's too late to do anything
It's too late to regret
It's too late to look one's eyes
And say I'm sorry

I've seen death
No one remembers me
I've done bad things
I've lied, but still

It's too late to do anything
It's too late to regret
It's too late to look one's eyes
And say I'm sorry
First off...This is just an opinion. >:/ Don't bash me just because your character is a Gary-Stu atau Mary-Sue. That is YOUR fault for designing your character that way.

Now, there are many Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues EVERYWHERE. If anda don't know the whole issue, here's some pertanyaan I will answer;

What is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?
A Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu is a character that has many abilities, has no flaws, AND everybody loves them. The real name for these types of characters are a godmodder. A Mary-Sue is a female godmodder, and a Gary-Stu is a male.

Why are they bad?
They are unoriginal, overdone, and...
continue reading...
"RUN,RUN!!!!" Yelled a soilder in panic,he instantly and literlly,exploded. The other Soilders fired,bullets hitting the Demon Dahlaz,putting holes in him,but they quicklt dissappeared.

A soilder pointed a gun to his head,and fired. Another soilder stabbed himself. Soilders ran,but where sliced in half. The soilders ran to the elevator,Demon Dahlaz slowley following.

"GET US OUTTA HERE!" Yelled a soidlder.

Dahlaz's eye flashed,and the man at the evelvator,suppose to hit the button,instead kept pressing the open doors button. The soilder shot him in the back.

They closed the doors,but where interuppted,when...
continue reading...
 Moxie
Moxie
Moxie the rubah, fox in Distbia


Chapter one Just the begenning



" And this why I've always say ' keep your eyes open ' ", berkata Harper who was again telling Floria and me another story about her working for the F.B.I , which I never really believed anayway . oleh the way we just got finished with trainning .




Harper the rbbit . She was the first one I met before Floria . She was a bit anoying , no very anoying . She told me storys about her working for the F.B.I , and she still dose . She nothing but ready for anything .



Floria the cat . She was the detik one I met . Shes quite ,but very strong , and...
continue reading...
posted by TakTheFox
So to those who don’t know about Melcro, he’s one of my best villains ever.
What is he? Is he Mobian? Is he human?

Well firstly, what Melcro’s true species is remains a mystery. Originally he appeared to be a mobian in the Rynk series, but later Rynk found that somehow he had changed from a mobian to an overlander (a human).

What does he look like?
Well to those who don’t know who Albert Wesker (Resident Evil… games not movies) is, Melcro is tall, with a black coat, black pants, black belt, black shirt, black gloves, black shoes, straight grey hair, and a pale white face. His eyes are...
continue reading...
 Dis Him. Right dere. See?
Dis Him. Right dere. See?
(Okay! here we go! Finally got done with Jetsket's backstory. ^^ I'mma have a picture for him here too, hope y'all enjoy learning about my protagonist for my newest series of fancharacters!)

Name: Jetsket "Sket" Blaston

Age: 17

Birthday: August 18th

Species: porcupine/tiger hybrid.

Height: 3'6"

Weight: 112lbs

Powers/Abilities: Chaos powers. Jetsket's powers are different from the abilities bestowed on an individual oleh the chaos emeralds. His relate lebih closely to Chaos, the god of destruction's powers. While they're far from being anywhere near close to Chaos' power level, Jetsket can cast similar...
continue reading...
posted by RawrMonster123
(Sorry I haven't been doing this series. I've been super busy. D: Also I was trying to modify this to make it good enough for my standards. :P Now enough with explaining, let's get with the story. :D)





























































































APRIL FOOLS!!!!!!! I cancelled that fan fiction. XD Now if anda excuse me, I'm gonna not waste my time menulis a story that people don't even read and go get some Frozen yogurt. -U-
Prizes: :3 sonic fc sketch, bragging rights, this cookie, and my respect. :'D Boredom killed 030'
video
added by Jahrome141
added by seuris
Source: Belongs to real drawer.
added by Evolia-Wulf
added by MephilesTheDark
Source: Emo-Bunny and me. <3
added by xxSONICxx
Source: oleh me, for zougethebat1
added by seuris
Source: (c) Seuris