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Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one atau the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power atau skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.

A.     POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, atau also has api powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B.    All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C.    Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a acak villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1.    THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2.    THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3.    THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” atau “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for anda *blasts kidnapped character* I hated anda anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D.    NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain atau hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills anda with energy beam* atau *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* atau *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! anda do that, and people are going to hate anda so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already berkata it killed you. anda can’t say it made anda stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless anda are close enough to go *drills pisau into stomach* then anda can’t just say *throws pisau into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E.    There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, atau even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver atau Shadow atau Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” atau “Sonia”.
F.    I personally cinta to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, atau hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful acak girl. I know what anda might say. “But anda berkata that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And anda could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking oleh people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, anda can make their eyes sparkle, anda can make their hair shine, anda can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush atau not.
G.    Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what anda use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something anda might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL anda SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then anda can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, atau die in luar angkasa to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some acak song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).

Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve berkata it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1.    Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE malaikat TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2.    THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN malaikat CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?

So that’s my daftar of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think anda can at least agree with some of it.

In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.

Eat Pie and Prosper
Noctuslynx and I are making a Fighting forum for everyone to try. It will tie in with the meriam universe of our stories, and yours as well unless asked otherwise. This means that anda can be in the story if anda survive long enough.

In the forum there will be matches supervised oleh either Noctuslynx atau myself to make sure there aren’t any signs of foul play. BUT there isn’t just fighting. In the forum anda can go explore and even go to your worlds and other people’s worlds depending on the events, but note that anda may be pulled into a fight oleh a plot-character at some point.

If anda want to...
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So the character “Rynk Hellborn” (For those not knowing about the last-name part, “Hellborn” has nothing to do with demonic anything. It’s simply a name which I can explain later if you’re wondering.) is probably my most populer Sonic fan Character, and probably only surpassed oleh Rin, atau possibly Slender. (OYO)

The character has made her debut on the Mobius Academy series, being written oleh myself, and Gracethefox (To read the first part go here ~ link )
She’s appeared as a cameo character in The Rasoul Saga, written oleh Mephiles97 (To read go here~ link )
And she actually DID get...
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Zone: Black Garden Zone
Countdown: 295 Days Until Darkness
POV: Gamma the Hedgehog 3rd

Time: 7:59:99 AM (7:59 EST)
Day: 2/27/14

Not gonna look back...just gonna keep on running...not stopping...not turning back towards my past...only looking on towards my future...not allowing anything atau anyone to slow me down, just moving on...

Dashing meneruskan, ke depan through the area, Gamma needs to stop and take a breather, so he does so beside the Black Garden Statue. Why...why do I have to have these powers...WHY?! Gamma collapses to his knees and buries his face in his hands, as a memory of the past comes...
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The first few years of my life went oleh without much trouble. Dad and I lived together, peacefully and almost bored-like, in the Mystic Cave Zone until that day... that dreadful day...
It was pretty peaceful until about 10:00 am that morning...that was when we saw him...a blue streak, almost impossibly fast, ran right past us. Shortly after, HE showed up...with his army of robots, he chased me and Dad out of the cave. Being a 3 tahun old, and having lebih Echidna than Cat, I couldn't exactly stay on my feet very long, but that's when Dad set me on my under-developed paws, kissed my forehead,...
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Name (full): Rynk “Hellborn”

Age: Erm… traditionally she’s 15, so… fifteen.

Gender: Male… FEMALE X{D

Species: Erm… oh boy
~Acid Monster 30 %
~Banshee Mobian 30 %
~Identity 10 %
~Mobian Core 10 %
~Xorda Mobian 10 %
~ Lynx 10 %

Abilities: … I’ll daftar abilities and weaknesses to avoid stu-ness
Acid Monster abilities
~Acid… yeah
Weaknesses
~Water increases bulu and hair, as over-exposure is damaging
~ Not too sure but I think Acid monsters might be a bit fragile

Banshee Mobian Abilities
~Metal bones (the metal bone abilities transfers to all DNA’s)
~Flight (via a web-like substance...
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Okay, to start, there were only about 1,200 fan in this club when I started up, but almost every single one of them was active, minus the club owner. My fan base took off quickly, rising to 45 in the first month, making me think I'd have a lot of fun with this site. And I did. Up until a short while ago, this club was the only club I'd ever play on. That was when I figured out how to make my own club, and the drama began...
Let me tell you, I'm not a big guy on fighting, verbally atau physically, but once my ADHD sets off, you'd better run the other way FAST. The first person to learn this...
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Name:Crescent Age:15 bulu Color:Black Hair Color:Yellow Clothes: A berwarna merah muda, merah muda jacket, dark green tank top, dark berwarna merah muda, merah muda skirt, brown boots, brown boots favorit Bands:Within Temptaion, Three Days Grace, Tiffany Giardina, Crush 40 Intrests:Spending time with her friends Friends/Allies:Sonic the Hedgehog, Amy Rose, Rouge the Bat, Miles "Tails" Prower. favorit Food:Ramen Noodles.
posted by TakTheFox
So a lot of the time I find myself rping with more female characters than male character.
THERE ARE REASONS FOR THAT.
First off though I’d like to point out that I am not…
~ A brony
~ homo/bi-sexual
~ An anime/and/or/hentai fan (EW)
~ in need of a girlfr-… okay maybe, but that doesn’t count X{D

Aside from that the first reason why I rp with girl characters so often is…
1.    Popularity
Of my many characters the only popular guy characters I have (Note: Not using Mobius Academy: Evolution characters because that deals more with who is around than popularity) are...
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Ok, so don't take any of this the wrong way guys, it's what makes me mad and pissed of.


1: Continuesess Role-playing.
I know some people cinta to Role play, I do to. It's just...Isn't it annoying when your sitting there chatting, then someone contacts anda over meebo. anda click on it and they jump STRAIGHT into role playing without even saying "Hi". I certainly HATE it, no offense friends, I'm not naming them.

2: A busy/away sign means no contacting.
When I have a busy sign saying something like, "Busy right now, menulis a essay" atau "eating dinner", that doesn't mean 'I MUST CONTACT HER TO ANNOY...
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posted by FrizTHedgehog
Who is this masked man? The Golden Man?
If anda listen to his theme, you'll get a good idea....
Other than that he has luar angkasa control similar to the the TomTom Gang in Blinx2, thus meaning he can open mini Black Holes, Worm Holes, and basically do anything that has to do with space. But where did he get that technology?
A few years back El Dorado broke into Friz's lab late at night and mencuri experimental equipment, this was before he was El Dorado.
He become El Dorado when he was traveling through Universes and Planets, he found A Planet with entire Cities, Towns, And Villages made of gold, Then...
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It's been hours... days... weeks, since I left the Triple S... I haven't found a single trace of Emile-kun... I think I've been going the wrong way this whole time... I don't think I'll ever find him... I'll probably die of hunger within the selanjutnya hour...
"Back to the real world, Mary. Back to the real world."
It's been about an jam since Mary ACTUALLY left the Triple S. She stopped walking and closed her eyes.
"... Dang it. I have been going the wrong way! Stupid fanisizing." She turned around and started walking back.
Mary walked for another 15 menit before resting under a tree. "I freakin'...
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posted by RawrMonster123
This club is having serious problems. Do anda know what that is? It's ORIGINALITY!!! So that BlazeCat girl made a Truth atau Dare RP. selanjutnya thing anda know that Kittiez girl made one. 1st I thought that was fine, but then I thought about it, and that's plain copying. SilverAnime122 made a RP on her FC Dominique transforming into her Toxic form. Then before anda know it that BlazeCat girl makes one that her FC "Sharmaine" transform into a monster from some damn brownies. Like, give me a Dorito and I'll turn into Barney. -.-" That girl that "owns" that FC Diane apparently doesn't. Like really? anda know that's art theft, right? And it wouldn't of, I think, if anda asked for permission and gave credit. Plus, anda can't draw if anda don't try. -.-" I know I suck but I keep trying. RECOLORS COUNT!! And I don't even need to add the other copiers. anda guys know who I'm talking about. So people, please, BE. ORIGINAL!!!
posted by silveranime122
 Marth Stegtion
Marth Stegtion
This all the information about Marth.



Name:Marth Stegtion/Project-M
Age:16
Sex:Male
Species:Hedgehog
Birth Date:April 17,1995
Power:Speed and change of body hight
Abilties:Understand all lanagues,see at night clearly,far distance hearing,running as fast as Sonic,unlimited hight change
Bio:Was born in the middle of the forest oleh his parents.Raised until his parents were murderd one night when he was 12.Had to raise himself ever scence.
Job:Has to be a F.B.I. agent in order to be free.
Relationships:He is Dominique's boyfriend.
Likes:Being known as good,with his friends,knowing his friends are honest to...
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posted by TakTheFox
Part Four

Rynk had arrived in a different city now. It was less populated then her own, but it was not the population that she interested. She walked across the city’s outskirts, until she had found a still-occupied military base.

“This had better be it.” She berkata to herself. The lynx-girl then walked up to the gates of the base, and asked if she could meet with someone who she could pertanyaan about certain files.

“Are anda serious?” The man at the gate asked in his booth.

“Well… I was… now I’m slightly less serious, but-“

“You can’t just be handed files like that, Miss…”...
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posted by TakTheFox
Geon

The scenario: Creation, and containment of a new stable species.

“Is he controlled?”

“Yes.”

The Location: Base-X. X for unknown. In the Metro-city of Mobotropolis Mark 21. On the planet Mobius Zone 12, atau as called oleh the natives “Iblicis.”

“Is he complete?”

“Yes”

The date: The fourth after-apocalypse-world, atau lebih commonly called “Fourth From-Ashes”. tahun 5500. January 1st, Saturday.

“Is he… contained???”

“… Completely.”


Chapter one: Happy New Year

Five hours prior…

A almost glowing-red male cat lay unconscious on the floor of what appeared to be a hotel living-room....
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posted by smartone123
name: Moshi

age: 17

Nickname: panda boy,shy guy, and freak

Stereotype:friendly but shy with passion for alot of things

Race: American and chinese

Hometown: forests,china

Birthday: June 4

Astrological Sign: Gemini

Species: great white panda

Gender: male

Religion:unsure

Allergies:talcum powder

Sexual preference:both

Occupation: highschool

Way of speaking:no way at all,but would be smooth and soft if could

Theme Song(s):
link
Pierce The Veil - Chemical Kids and Mechanical Brides

link
Tonight Alive-"wasting away"

Personal Quote:"it doesn't matter what the outside shows,the inside shows the real story"...
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[Warning: minor spoilers sort of...]

I remember how we were born. A stern father who hated us. A beautiful mother who found us disgusting. A pair of parents who abandoned us. Left us out on the jalan, street in a unstable town. To die. We were punished for something we did not ask for. For our supposed digesting deform we have.

Conjoined twins. That is what me and my brother, Amore were. Connected at the skull and shared a brain. We didn't ask for this. I cinta to be close with my brother, but not this close.

For years, we lived in alley ways and on the streets. Making money for tampilkan people our gross...
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posted by Kal_Sphinx
Chapter six: Oops

Location: Mobius-zone-8, Faconicks, Meridona, South-Tropan, Mansion

Date: Date: Thursday, March 13th, Second-Line-2101

Time: 11:21 A.M.

Rin started up the computer, then quickly opened the file named “disposition-analysis”. Inside this one there were documents, videos, pictures, and so on. Rin scrolled down through these; ignoring them complete, which did not make the others happy, but they berkata nothing.

She finally came across one that was called “Communication-Uplink”. She clicked on it. As soon as she did, a progress-bar appeared on the screen, and a web-cam window...
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Sorry about the delay on chapter two.... Well anyways, here is the link to chapter one if anda missed it.
link
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Where we left off....
"Hey, what are anda doing?!" A prisoner shouted. lebih heads of prisoners turned to him. They ran to him, but it was too late. He placed the bottle in the middle of the pentagram and started murmuring strange sounds under his breath. The bottle started glowing and shaking. Finally, the deep scarlet turned into a deep green. He picked up the bottle and started drinking.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>...
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Rynk’s profile

Character's Full Name: Relmiss Nyra Avi
Reason atau meaning of name: Unknown.
Nickname: Rynk
Reason for nickname: It’s the only name she knows, and the one she made up for herself for no reason.

Birthdate: She’s fifteen, but no one knows her exact tanggal of birth. Somewhere in April possibly
Astrological Sign: uh… the moon?

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE
Age: 15
How old does s/he appear?: 16 atau 17
Eye Color: Mint, with faded blue pupils
Glasses atau contacts? No
Hair color: Black
Distinguishable hair feature: Sometimes it looks as if it has stripes on it, but no one knows why
Type of hair (coarse,...
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