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Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one atau the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power atau skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.

A.     POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, atau also has api powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B.    All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C.    Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a acak villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1.    THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2.    THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3.    THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” atau “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for anda *blasts kidnapped character* I hated anda anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D.    NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain atau hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills anda with energy beam* atau *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* atau *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! anda do that, and people are going to hate anda so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already berkata it killed you. anda can’t say it made anda stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless anda are close enough to go *drills pisau into stomach* then anda can’t just say *throws pisau into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E.    There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, atau even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver atau Shadow atau Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” atau “Sonia”.
F.    I personally cinta to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, atau hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful acak girl. I know what anda might say. “But anda berkata that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And anda could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking oleh people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, anda can make their eyes sparkle, anda can make their hair shine, anda can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush atau not.
G.    Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what anda use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something anda might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL anda SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then anda can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, atau die in luar angkasa to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some acak song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).

Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve berkata it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1.    Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE malaikat TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2.    THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN malaikat CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?

So that’s my daftar of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think anda can at least agree with some of it.

In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.

Eat Pie and Prosper
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posted by TakTheFox
Loner Days


Introduction
Supreta was named after the group called The Pretas. It was composed of three travelling nations which formed on the brink of extinction. The first group, and largest, was known as The Pers’es of a country we think to be translated as Pers’al. This group was strong, but outgoing. The detik were the Irnd’as, from what we translate as Indesya. These were somewhat smaller than the Pers’es, but still large, and believed in taking all from others, and accepting no others into their group. The third were the Scats- Do NOT laugh at that! … as I was saying, the Scats...
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Chapter Six
(September 29th Monday)

Monday; the first hari of school each week. For many people it is a difficult day. Granted it can start out well enough. Two and a half days of working on school projects and homework is very helpful for being prepared for when returning work, but then the new work comes in. The procrastination of two free days without school adds to laziness of the mind for most, and thusly one’s mind is not prepared for such a task as algebra, geometry, biology, etc.

Unfortunately the school itself had possibly lebih stress during the break. Due to the school’s baru saja attack,...
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Simy: Um...i...just...want to say...that...although we've not known each other that long, i've really grown to cinta anda dearly. I cinta anda so much, with all my heart...and i want it to stay that way for a long time, so...my pertanyaan is...*takes the box out of his pocket, and goes on 1 knee, opens the box, to reveal a emas ring, with a diamond in it*....Princess Emerald...will anda marry me?
>Emerald: *she covers her mouth with her hands, blushing hard, tears forming into her eyes* Simy...*she removes her hands slowly* Yes, with all my jantung yes!
*people: Awwwwwwww!"*
Simy: *smiles, tears up, and gently takes her left hand, and puts the ring on her ring finger*
Emerald: *she bends down & hugs him tightly* ^//////^ Simy: !~ *hugs back tight, and stands up, both of them standing and hugging* ^/////^
Emerald: *softly crying, still hugging him*
Simy: *crying to, looks in her eyes, and kisses her*
posted by BusterTheBunny
" What happened.....the whole story of your......bloody life?" The officer said,sitting in the chair as I sat in mine. "Well...it all started like this..."


5 YEARS AGO

I was walking through town with my friend Darwin. We was drunk....doing stuff every young adult does in their early lives. We was walking,tipsy,back to Darwin's house until a yellow car came up. A zamrud, emerald green-like Hawk get's out the car with two jeruk, orange hedgehogs. "Well....Well....Well....drunk eh?....Why don't I take ya home...." He said,I could even understand what I was doing but the selanjutnya minute....me and Darwin was in the...
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posted by NoctusLynx
Once school commenced, she wasn't accepted with the absolution of her parents' crimes, if I should dare call such actions as such. She was beaten oleh the teachers lebih oftenly than the others, harrassed lebih relentlessly oleh the students, and has had to live through experiences that no child should have to experience.

Those whom would dare say she had a childhood would have minds as twisted as the leaders of these two tribes. Her childhood was taken from her before it even began.

Even though she had to endure all this, she kept going with a belief that her own parents still loved her for her uniqueness....
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posted by ShadowFan100
Character Chart
Character's full name: Dyllon McKinley Colt
Reason atau meaning of name: None
Character's nickname: Dyl
Reason for nickname: It's cute, and adorable
Birth date: 12/24/1999
Powers: Psychic (He can see the future, past and even view some thing that are happening LIVE, in the present
Theme: None

Physical appearance
Age: 14
How old does he/she appear: same age
Weight: 49 pounds
Height: 3ft 6in
Body build: Slim
Shape of face: n/a.
Eye color: Light-blue
Glasses atau contacts: None
Skin tone: Tan (his hands, feet and mouth)
Predominant features:
Type of hair: Thick
Hairstyle:
Voice: Deep, with a Hedenese accent,...
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posted by ShadowFan100
Character Chart
Character's full name: Charity Grace Higawatta
Reason atau meaning of name: None
Character's nickname: Char-bear
Reason for nickname: It's cute!
Birth date: 2/2/2002
Power: Air (this power has no corrupted mode)
Theme: None

Physical appearance
Age: 11 (13 when she meets Shock in his series)
How old does he/she appear: same age
Weight: 43 pounds
Height: 3ft 3in
Body build: Slim
Shape of face: n/a.
Eye color: Blue
Glasses atau contacts: None
Skin tone: Tan (her hands, feet and mouth)
Predominant features:
Type of hair: Thin
Hairstyle: 3 quills on the back of her head and 3 bangs over her face
Voice:...
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Blazeik...name mean anything 2 u? Yeah, me neither...but apparently I'm decended from the head of the clan...tribe...thing...and I'm the 1st in generations 2 actually tampil it. He was apparently my great (to the power of 8) grandfather. Apparently he had only 1 child, a daughter...who somehow was not born with any abilities exept being extreamly agile, if that counts. Since then no1 had been born with the abilities of api (much less lightning which I also learned) 2 the family until me. How strange...and unfortunate for me. api is distruction...it brings only pain 2 those with the ability...
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posted by zutaradragon
Let's start with saying this...I was told that I was made using part of the DNA of another hedgehog 1 of Father's family members made...some1 named Shadow is geneticly my brother...a guy named Robotnic. I guess that makes Robotnic my grandpa. Knowing this, he also berkata that he made me so I would b different...better....supposedly. But I...I'm a monster...just like the others...only un-like them...well...they have 3 different forms, rite? Regular, demon, and were form...I have not only my own soul but 2 other, evil souls that inhabbit me. They try 2 take over and it shows in my 2 other...“forms”....
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{this fanfic has pretty much no plot they just go save a bunnie my god!}
PLZ READ CHAPTER 1-18 BEFORE membaca THIS

so this was heaven a land of clouds a land of hope and dreams "wat the hell" berkata misery just waking up "this is heaven" asks rane also waking up "i gess so" i berkata and i stood up the clouds were quite fluffy and jumpy then misery took a handful of clouds and puts them in her mouth so i slap her hand and say "wat the heck u dont just go around eating stuff" i say "mmmmm tastes like kue, cookie yummy" she says with her mouth full
"come on lets go we have a mission guy" rane says getting...
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posted by PrinceTwo
Hello friends. Recently a friend has asked me to write a critique for a character named Rynk in this club. I spent 2 hours on this only to find out that the person who asked for the critique in the first place didn't read past the first 2 paragraphs. Then proceeded to create a large amount of drama over it that resulted in hurting my friends emotionally.. Now being the evil mother fucker I am, of course I decided to make this critique public for everyone! Because hey, if the person who it was intended for didn't read it someone else should. Plus giving someone a taste of their own medicine...
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Many times I see people complaining about either A) not being able to afford photoshop atau B) saying that their art program is shitty and that's why the have 'bad art.'

I have always hated people saying these things because they are really shitty excuses. Your art program is not that fucking bad if anda actually know how to use it, for one, and for the other?

THERE ARE OTHER PROGRAMS.

So here is a daftar and quick review of any free art programs I can find. (Let me know if I'm missing any- I want as many on this daftar as possible.) (Also if any of the link don't work let me know and I can try to help...
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Note; This is an opinion, do not take this as anything offensive atau insulting. This is to help anda avoid having an overpowered atau overangsty character.

It is very fun to make your own character, atau fan character, yes? ^^ I agree. But, sometimes, people don't go through character development the correct way, having their character atau fan character result in being overpowered and/or undefeatable.

Sometimes, they do follow the right steps, but instead create a much lebih angsty, annoying, depressed character.

I will start off with the much lebih common character; Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus.

They are characters...
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