Gary and Sue make too much Stew
Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one atau the other.
What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A. has too much power atau skill
B. All the answers
C. Always gets their way
D. Never loses
E. And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F. Is TOO attractive
G. No weakness
Problems?
Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.
A. POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, atau also has api powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B. All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C. Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a acak villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1. THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2. THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3. THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” atau “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for anda *blasts kidnapped character* I hated anda anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D. NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain atau hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills anda with energy beam* atau *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* atau *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! anda do that, and people are going to hate anda so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already berkata it killed you. anda can’t say it made anda stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless anda are close enough to go *drills pisau into stomach* then anda can’t just say *throws pisau into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E. There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, atau even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver atau Shadow atau Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” atau “Sonia”.
F. I personally cinta to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, atau hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful acak girl. I know what anda might say. “But anda berkata that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And anda could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking oleh people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, anda can make their eyes sparkle, anda can make their hair shine, anda can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush atau not.
G. Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what anda use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something anda might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL anda SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then anda can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, atau die in luar angkasa to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some acak song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).
Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve berkata it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1. Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE malaikat TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2. THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN malaikat CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?
So that’s my daftar of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think anda can at least agree with some of it.
In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.
Eat Pie and Prosper
Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one atau the other.
What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A. has too much power atau skill
B. All the answers
C. Always gets their way
D. Never loses
E. And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F. Is TOO attractive
G. No weakness
Problems?
Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.
A. POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, atau also has api powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B. All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C. Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a acak villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1. THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2. THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3. THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” atau “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for anda *blasts kidnapped character* I hated anda anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D. NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain atau hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills anda with energy beam* atau *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* atau *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! anda do that, and people are going to hate anda so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already berkata it killed you. anda can’t say it made anda stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless anda are close enough to go *drills pisau into stomach* then anda can’t just say *throws pisau into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E. There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, atau even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver atau Shadow atau Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” atau “Sonia”.
F. I personally cinta to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, atau hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful acak girl. I know what anda might say. “But anda berkata that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And anda could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking oleh people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, anda can make their eyes sparkle, anda can make their hair shine, anda can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush atau not.
G. Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what anda use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something anda might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL anda SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then anda can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, atau die in luar angkasa to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some acak song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).
Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve berkata it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1. Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE malaikat TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2. THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN malaikat CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?
So that’s my daftar of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think anda can at least agree with some of it.
In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.
Eat Pie and Prosper
My first story, so, if anda wanna make suggestions, post of a forum ill make in a bit.
The old streets eminated of fossil fuels burning, roadkill and sadness. The ally was scattered with boxes, empty glass bottles and pieces of old news paper. In the distance, a siren went off and anjing yipped to eachother in thier own language. The streets felt cold and filled with the sorrow of the people around.
My body felt cold as ice. I longed to be warm and safe. I wished I had some money to get something to eat, but who would listen to a stray? No one. I curled up in a ball, attempting to get warm, as I drifted into a small rest.
I worried if the wrong person would find me here in this ally, alone in this cold, dark allyway. I dismissed this worry and held the arms of false hope, whispering false facts into my freezing ears.
I believed the false hope's bitterly cold arms were a sign I was alive.
The old streets eminated of fossil fuels burning, roadkill and sadness. The ally was scattered with boxes, empty glass bottles and pieces of old news paper. In the distance, a siren went off and anjing yipped to eachother in thier own language. The streets felt cold and filled with the sorrow of the people around.
My body felt cold as ice. I longed to be warm and safe. I wished I had some money to get something to eat, but who would listen to a stray? No one. I curled up in a ball, attempting to get warm, as I drifted into a small rest.
I worried if the wrong person would find me here in this ally, alone in this cold, dark allyway. I dismissed this worry and held the arms of false hope, whispering false facts into my freezing ears.
I believed the false hope's bitterly cold arms were a sign I was alive.
Once upon a time, Tydus, Torren, Mef and Zanehorn were in the magical land of kacang mentega when Zanehorn had an idea.
'LETS ALL WEAR kacang mentega =D' he yelled.
Torren jumped into the kacang mentega and hugged Tydus tightly, eventually asphixiatining him and causing his demise.
Then Zanehhorn ran around with only kacang mentega on while Torren and Mef threw cokelat at each other.
Tydus' dead body was re-animated oleh a kacang demon and he attacked everyone yelling 'TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLORAEG!!!!!!!!!!'
Mef ate Tydus and resumed throwing things at Torren and Zanehorn remained covered while making out with Seuris in a corner.
And Tydus was watching down from Heaven, talking to St. Micheal.
Tydus pointed to Torren. 'He's my brother (3' he said.
'And you're proud of that?' Micheal asked.
'Not really,' berkata Tydus going back to eat some andy clouds'
'LETS ALL WEAR kacang mentega =D' he yelled.
Torren jumped into the kacang mentega and hugged Tydus tightly, eventually asphixiatining him and causing his demise.
Then Zanehhorn ran around with only kacang mentega on while Torren and Mef threw cokelat at each other.
Tydus' dead body was re-animated oleh a kacang demon and he attacked everyone yelling 'TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLORAEG!!!!!!!!!!'
Mef ate Tydus and resumed throwing things at Torren and Zanehorn remained covered while making out with Seuris in a corner.
And Tydus was watching down from Heaven, talking to St. Micheal.
Tydus pointed to Torren. 'He's my brother (3' he said.
'And you're proud of that?' Micheal asked.
'Not really,' berkata Tydus going back to eat some andy clouds'
Neptun frowned at the bottom of the sea, hating the Old One.
He was cursed to be confined to the sea, all because the Old One was afraid.
Neptun was at the bottom of the sea because he was in cinta with his sister Siria. The Old One knew it was mutual, and knew of a prophecy saying a newborn from the Few would overthrow him, and seperated the two.
"SIRIA! WE SHALL BE TOGETHER!"
He received no news at the bottom of the sea, and had no knowledge that his Mother was with child.
So he was determined that the child that overthrew the Old One would be his and Siria's.
Neptun was near ready for bed, when he saw a sword appear before him. Followed oleh a vision.
(pretend this is italics) Neptun drove the sword victoriously through the Pyramis of the Old One.
He saw his life as he desired it.
With Siria.
(nu longer italics)
"Yes," berkata Neptun. "This is what I desire."
Neptun grabbed the sword and swam to his kastil, castle to prepare.
He was cursed to be confined to the sea, all because the Old One was afraid.
Neptun was at the bottom of the sea because he was in cinta with his sister Siria. The Old One knew it was mutual, and knew of a prophecy saying a newborn from the Few would overthrow him, and seperated the two.
"SIRIA! WE SHALL BE TOGETHER!"
He received no news at the bottom of the sea, and had no knowledge that his Mother was with child.
So he was determined that the child that overthrew the Old One would be his and Siria's.
Neptun was near ready for bed, when he saw a sword appear before him. Followed oleh a vision.
(pretend this is italics) Neptun drove the sword victoriously through the Pyramis of the Old One.
He saw his life as he desired it.
With Siria.
(nu longer italics)
"Yes," berkata Neptun. "This is what I desire."
Neptun grabbed the sword and swam to his kastil, castle to prepare.
Firstly,I wanna thank MasterLink For being an awesome Rper,Epic friend,and makes meh laugh,But sadley he is not on here anymore,A moment of silence please...
Osiris for being the replacment of Master Link... Sorta.... XD Anyways,The guy is a fun guy,Don'tcha know?
MephilestheDark for being a Like,TOTALLY EPIC FRIEND,TOTALLY. XD And for having epic artz,characters,Rps,Humor. Geez... I can't daftar it all. XD
Princess Viviana for Being an awesome rper,but sadley she recolors,and is not here either... ANOTHER moment of silence...
ThirdDevision for being just plain Epic.
Pheonix Royal Just met the gal,AND SHE'S ALREADY AWESOME. XD
And Finally,LadyLyric (Or AktatheWolf,I forget... ^^;) For being meh first fans.
SINCERELY,Markeh456
Osiris for being the replacment of Master Link... Sorta.... XD Anyways,The guy is a fun guy,Don'tcha know?
MephilestheDark for being a Like,TOTALLY EPIC FRIEND,TOTALLY. XD And for having epic artz,characters,Rps,Humor. Geez... I can't daftar it all. XD
Princess Viviana for Being an awesome rper,but sadley she recolors,and is not here either... ANOTHER moment of silence...
ThirdDevision for being just plain Epic.
Pheonix Royal Just met the gal,AND SHE'S ALREADY AWESOME. XD
And Finally,LadyLyric (Or AktatheWolf,I forget... ^^;) For being meh first fans.
SINCERELY,Markeh456
