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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. oleh no means am I forcing anda to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless anda truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before anda start posting. It can be as little as a bio, atau as big as an entire artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no lebih than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he atau she is in, can pull out another trick out of his atau her hat.
4. If anda absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his atau her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely acak and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when anda have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the selanjutnya hari you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own atau is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the baru saja outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, atau claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If anda must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, atau so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if anda do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot atau stabbed in the heart, then pop up menit later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull atau flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to atau dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to atau dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created oleh you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing atau potential character is a Mary Sue, atau if anda suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, anda can take link. If anda want, anda can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case anda were curious, which anda probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all anda want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, oleh no means do anda have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
Yup. I'm posting early, so I can give myself some time to finish the selanjutnya few parts over Thanksgiving Break. Also... I just want anda to have some Kyric fluff.
This story occurs around the end of November/December 1st, which, according to the YJ comics, is Robin's birthday, therefore making it Fin's biological birthday. :3 Yup... Enjoy!


Watching from an opposite rooftop, a smile graced a pair of crimson painted lips. “She’s too vulnerable like this. Untrusting.”
“So what are anda going to do about it?”
“I’ve heard she wants to do this all on her own.”
“And...”
The first girl’s...
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posted by CoaxochYJ
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Just one lebih wouldn't hurt...would it? *Flees from angry mob*




Name: pakis Elizabeth Ameer.

Alias: Delirious.

Appearance: Pale. Blood red hair. Sapphire eyes. Scar that runs from her eyebrow to cheek. Golden Wings.

Civvies: Green hoodie, black t-shirt, jeans, and sneakers.

'Stume: Picture.

Powers: Flight(wings)*You didn't see that coming, did ya?*Wink**.

Skills: Hunting. Extremely advanced senses.

Past: Escapee from the School, took shelter at a circus. Hid her wings from others, started accidentally killing everyone. Fled to Germany, hiding her wings for a year, came back to USA.

Notes:

~Fear of heights, despite her birdy-nature.
~Can make her wings blend into her skin, but only for a short period of time, due to it getting extremely uncomfortable.
~Finds interest in rain.


I just had to! And if anda request, I will hapus her...
 'Stume. Ignore the awkward blonde hair...
'Stume. Ignore the awkward blonde hair...
 What her Wings look like.
What her Wings look like.
posted by SilverWings13
The final bel, bell chimed, signaling the teenagers' realease from their prison of education. The students burst through the doors of Gotham Academy and streamed into the court-yard. They filed into the waiting limousines and Bentleys. Every one wore the same blue-yellow stripe ties, dark navy blazers, dress shoes, bleached white shirts, and finely pressed trousers- plaid skirts for the girls, caki pants for the boys. They also acted the same: texting on their iPhones, chatting in groups and cliques; akting like average teenage kids.
Amidst the swarm wandered a single girl, his target. From his...
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posted by CoaxochYJ
What would anda do,


The two heros stood on the roof of the building.The sun was hidden away oleh thick, gray clouds. Thunder sounded, like Drums of War.
"You think your purpose in life is to sacrifice yourself and get nothing in return." He started. "You think there's no purpose to anything. Even the lives anda save, its just another page of nothingness to you!" Ciel almost shouted.

If the Earth was crumpling,

"That's why I was born. I was created to save us all." She said, black hair hanging over one of her zamrud, emerald eyes.

Right before your eyes?

The young man clenched his fists, his lower lip trembling....
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posted by The_Writer
Interrogation Scene



Stalin yelled as electricity arched through his body. He shook, his body rattled, smoke rose from his weak shell. Revenge walked up to him, control in hand.

"How did anda get control of my bridges? My weapons? The launch codes for the American missiles? How?!"

Stalin was breathing heavily, his tongue was lead in his mouth. He took a full sixty detik to start speaking.

"I will never reveal my secrets."

"But in Soviet Russia," Revenge replied in an excellent Russian accent, "Secrets will reveal you."

Stalin glared. 

"There was a man named Joseph in Russia." Revenge said, walking...
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66 Dragon Animations Presents…
In Association with DC Comics


The New York City Police Chief walked up to the microphone stand and tapped it, making sure the microphones worked. This was perhaps the most important moment in his life. New York was about to be delivered one of the most shocking messages it had ever heard.

“Ladies and Gentlemen of the Press.” Draxx took another deep breath to steady himself. “At exactly fifteen hundred hours yesterday, an incident occurred off of dinding Street. As anda all know, it is my job to keep the citizens of New York City aman, brankas no matter the cost against...
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WARNING: The following excerpt may contain medium to high acts of sexual desire and lust. If this is too graphic, atau the subject area makes anda uncomfortable, DO NOT PROCEED!!!

A/N: If this is too graphic for y'all, lemme know and I'll change some things. Thank anda and enjoy!




Barbara placed the slide Sam had diberikan her into a special part of the computer and waited. She groaned, wiping the sweat from her face again.

"Jesus it's hot in here." she exclaimed, pulling her tank-top off and tossing it on the floor. The only thing the red-head had on underneath was a gym-top which didn't cover much more...
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New series, takes place two years into the future. link. Enjoy!

Hope anda enjoy!
Jacob was a drug dealer. He worked late nights in Trinity, out in the open. No one stopped him; the police force was corrupted, and the heroes of the League were always too busy to pay any attention to this city. So he went about his business .
Tonight, however, something seemed different. He could feel someone watching him as he walked home. But whenever he turned, there was no one, no one at all. Shaking his head, he continued on. If anda studied him, anda could see how managed to pindah a little lebih quickly this time....
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
 Tarrant Hero
Tarrant Hero
Name: Dariyn Swift
Alias: Tarrant
Age: 16
Powers/skills:-Creates optical illusions
-master of hypnotism and mind control
-hand to hand combat
Past: Dariyn grew up in a wealthy family as well, along with Hikaru and Kaoru. Dariyn was sitting at his meja tulis, meja doing his school work, when his maid entered the room, and noticed a slight change of attitude in her and decided to make some arrangements to it with his powers. Dariyn met Jaime and the Eden twins while attending school.
Others: -People refer to him as the "Mad Hatter" because of his costume.
-Keeps cards in his hat.
-Occasionally uses his powers to get what he wants.
-Has flirtatious attitude as Hikaru and Kaoru.
 Daryin civvies
Daryin civvies
AN: Red Revenge: International (Man of Mystery) is a large book set to start publishing January 1st and go until April 1st, the premiere of the final RR book. This takes place in 2021. Current timeline is 2025. Also, a certain spy film series doesn't exist in RR's universe.



Scene
(RR: International takes place when Sam and holly are 21 and 20. A certain spy-action adventure film series doesn't exist. >:)...))


Holly boarded the elevator, adjusting her jacket. God, they were secret agents. Why the hell did they have to dress up like bank owners and secretaries? 

"Special Agent Fowling says you're...
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posted by RichiYJ
Yup. It's a one-shot about Richi. Enjoy.




November 7th.....It was that time of tahun again. I stared at the horizon as the sun gently climbed up, spilling its rays across the forest Higher and higher it went, until it finally rose to the spot at which everyone sees it at as they climb out of their beds. Sighing, I leaped down from the tree, and landed on the cold ground with a soft thud.

I walked slowly to the forest's edge, mentally creating a shopping daftar of the items I need from the market, when an panah zoomed so close to my face, it cut me as it flew past me and embedded itself in the trunk...
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Endgame Enable

(Part 2)

Previously on Red Revenge…

"Blue Beetle, laporan to mission room immediately."

Batman walked in and pulled up the necessary files. Beetle walked in.

"You're friends with Red Revenge, correct?" batman asked.

"Well, lebih like acquaintances." Beetle started, but batman cut him off."

"Good enough. Revenge claims he is faking his death to make the Light egotistical so we can cut him down. I don't believe it. I need anda to track him."

Holly walked into the bedroom and started taking off her green dress covered with a black coat. "You know, we still have to wait on Rose before we...
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posted by Red-Revenge
Betrayal

(Part 2)

New York City

June 14, 23:09 EST

Batman placed a firm kick on the door and it fell in. superman and Flash quickly scoured the penthouse while batman walked into the living room. He bent down on the floor and rubbed his fingers.

"Superman! Flash!"

The two sped into the room and looked at Batman.

"This way." The Dark Knight said, standing up and following the trail of blood down the stairs. It led to a storage closet and just ended. batman threw open the door and looked inside. Nothing but a mop and broom.

"Damn it!" he exclaimed.

"Nightwing to Batman. I've found Revenge."

"Where?!"

"In...
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Manhunt

(Part 3)

Previously on Red Revenge...



"Batman, my detective the Question. Question, this-"

"We've met." pertanyaan said.

"Ah." Flash said. "So anda know him Batman?"

"Too well." the Dark Knight growled.

"Hey!" Sam exclaimed. The thief ran out into the hallway and was heading towards the doors when Sam grabbed him and slammed him into the wall. He snatched the tas, dompet away. Sam ripped down the man's kap, hood and turned him around. He froze when he saw the man's face.

"It can't be." Sam said, stumbling away from the thief. "You-you're dead. I saw you-"

"Thank you-Sam? Sam? Are anda okay? anda look like...
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posted by Red-Revenge
Jolt

Revenge stood on the corner of a skyscraper. The night had been uneventful so far. zamrud, emerald was at the base trying to track down Dealer. Surprisingly, Reaper had not escaped prison yet. It surprised Red Revenge. Although Reaper had murdered his father, the man didn't know Red Revenge was Samuel Grant. His arrival always complicated things.

Revenge sighed. The last time he had faced Reaper was two years ago. It had been a small battle, hadn't even made the news. Reaper had escaped and Revenge had caught him and thrown him back. It was Page 3 in the Local section if memory served.

Red Revenge's...
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[A/N] Um....hello. I'm new to the club. The reason I'm doing this mostly is because one of my good IRL friends, who anda know as SilverWings13 / SilverWingsYJ, kind of....well....persuaded me to do this to RP. She can be very convincing at times. I mean, she's the reason I even got into Young Justice, which is one of my few favorit shows.

Anyway, here it is. Oh, if this is similar to someone else's OC, then I apologize. If anda want, I'll take this down and we never have to speak of this again, 'cause I'm that type of person :P.

Name: Richi Devilin

Alias: Hell Apostle

Age: 16

Skin Color: Almost peach,...
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posted by The_Writer
NEW OCs!!!!



Name: Alexa Veda
Code Name: N/E
Race: Caucasian
Age: 16
Hair/Eye Color: Black/Blue
Height/Weight: 5' 4"/121 lb.
Civilian Clothes: Black tank-top/ dark jeans, jaket atau black mini skirt, midnight blue top.
Hero Uniform: tato on face glow white when willed atau powers are in use to disguise Identity. Dark blue, form-fitting, sleeveless dress that reaches knees. Hair Band.
Superpowers: Control over mystical arts, specifically water and air. api if powers stretched. Scout of The Gang



Name: John Delegos
Code Name: Hammer
Race: African
Age: 18
Hair/Eye Color: Black/Black
Height/Weight: 6' 3"/257 lb....
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Milton Khaners

Alias: Conscience

Age: 15

Appearance: he has kind of curly and wavy brown hair and crystal blue eyes.

Powers/Skills: he has the ability to read others problems and feelings and can talk to people in their minds helping them out, hes basically like your conscience and like a fortune cookie XD. Hes a very good saran giver.

Civvies: he wears beige cargo pants and a green sweater with a snapback hat.

Personality: he is a very quiet and shy person ( especially around girls ) he is lebih on a bit of the nerdy side and smart side.

Past: unknown.
posted by XxKFforeverXx
Yes, I did base him off malaikat beats. No, he isn't the same, just looks and personality!

Name: Hinata Kennedy :3
Alias: Hinata
Age: 18
Powers/Skills: -Posses a bit of magic, whenever he says "Godskill lvl 1,2,3,4 atau 5" some sword atau bostaff, will appear in his hands.
-Sword fighting
Weakness: He has his physical limits.
Past: Hinata grew up a happy and healthy child, but that all changed at the age of 5. Hinata went through a untreated case of untreated rheumatic fever, resulting in two of his aortic valves to stop working. Soon after, Hinata had to have surgery to recieve two metal aortic valves,...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 Bentleys dad
Bentleys dad
" I wanna be drunk when i wake up on the right side of the wrong tempat tidur and evet excuse i made up ,tell anda the truth that i get hate what didnt kill me it never made me stronger at all "

He rolled over opening up his blue eyes that were mopped underneath black hair, he sat up looking around the room knowing he was now in an empty tempat tidur alone, like he had been for years. He was hoping this jantung ache would make him stronger but it only made him feel worse. He scratched the black rubble on his chin as he looked at the dinding of his room as empty bir cans were filled on his nightstands. He blinked a...
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