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posted by lollipopszx3

Chapter 4

After I left the two losers, I mean best friends, I walked to homeroom. Unfourtunatly, Jake was in my homeroom, and automatically he started asking me fifty thousand questions. How did know? Wow, my friends are such freaking nerds.

"So I heard anda like a new girl." he berkata trying not to talk too loud. But sadly some girls and guys nearby heard him.

I was immediately bombared with questions. "Oh my god? How can anda fall for such a slut, Joshie!!! anda would look so much better in bed, selanjutnya to me." berkata Brianna. Oh so that caramilk girl was a slut now? She at least covers her ass!

"What...

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"Sometimes Goodbye is a detik Chance"[Ch.2]

posted by HarryPLover

I felt completely laid back and excited to go to the arcade,I needed to play some Gears of War atau something to get my frustration out.But when I saw Juan pass the arcade I started to get nervous.
"Ummm...Juaney...are anda kid napping me?"
We joked around and laughed our butts off for a few menit but Juan ended up explaining to me that he knew that playing some fighting game would just make me get even lebih upset and that I needed to cool off before I did anything I would regret.Therefore he took my phone away and turned off the radio just in case I decided to start cuss-texting Joel out atau started...

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POEM: Boredom

posted by June4

It’s raining on my window pane,
Inside this house looks so lame.
I’m so funny, so bored hunni.
Nothing much to do but to be a horn dog,
Being bored makes me write in my log.

Are we counting up atau down?
Nothing seems to go around.
Boredom, anda don’t like him.
Boredom, anda wanna shoot him.
Don’t make that move.

anda get in trouble when looking for fun,
anda get so tired when the hari is done.
Soon as anda get in bed,
anda remember what should be done instead.
Just forget the problem.

Get a goodnight sleep and dream.
Forget about the boring adventure,
anda should’ve discovered something in nature.
Boredom, forget them.
Boredom, sleep before the morning.

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That week (Chapter two)

posted by dragonrider

That first hari -Eric's Perspective

Maybe I should of berkata something to her. I was kind of rude then again I was scared as well. These situations always scare me. Who knew she would take the bus today? I was told she never took the bus. I don't know. When she put her hand on my knee it just made me think of her in the future.
I laid my head on the meja and sighed. I inhaled the scent of lemon pledge and I got a coughing fit.
"Dude Eric anda okay?" my best friend Tom asked walking up to the table
"Yeah *cough cough* I am. I just inhaled lemon pledge. That's all," I coughed out.
He backed up a...

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black moon chap 10

posted by joe-edwardfan

Chapter 10
I waited till charlie started snoring and went to matts room we talked and talked I told him about my friends and the teachers………………………….
Till I heard charlie wake up and rushed in an inhuman speed to my room and faked for charlie that I was sleeping I got uop and washed my face and got dressed for school when I went down stairs charlie was gone mayy got ready to and I thineked about a black bmw but not that expensive and it apeared in the drive way
-do anda like your new car?
I asked matt
-its mine?
-yup!
-my family cant efford it its yours!
-thanks
He gave me a hug suddenly...

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black moon chapter 8

posted by joe-edwardfan

bellas dress and converse

Chapter 8
I was so nerves how charlie was going to react, matt squeezed my hand to comfort me charlie opened the door and gasped he was stairing at me ,not beliving it was me
-Bella?
He wasn’t sure if it was really me and then I heard billys voice from the phone
-charlie charlie are anda ok?
He didn’t respond and turned off the phone
-yeah dad its me
He staired at me again
-you look different!
-yeah two weeks does that to you.
I lied to him
-oh Bella! I missed anda so much I was so worried that I wouldn’t see anda again!
Then I took my hand out of matts and hugged him
-your cold
-yeah its freezing out...

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friends,hate and cinta

posted by twilight-rocks9

“Hay” Byron said. “Hi”I berkata “um….can I talk to you? This is sort of important.” I waited for his answer. It seemed like forever. “Sure. What do anda want to talk about?” I didn’t know how to start. “Your sister. She’s being quite childish about this I mean she’s 15 I know I acted like a 5-year old when it doesn’t get what it wants. But this is just….well dumb-” he cut me off. “How is she being childish?!” he was very furious he looked like would explode. “Well… she only lets anda talk to me when she’s not here. We have to hide the notes from her. And…...

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No Matter How anda Bleed - A Poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

We're all human.

A/N: This is not much my type of menulis style, but I'm going to try it out. Hope anda like it. Please rate !

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This is a new day, a fine clear sky

Trades the sun to mock our sight

With these eyes, I see no blue

He’s clutching my arm, and yelling

Yelling what? I don’t know

But I’m falling, we’re falling

Falling into a hole, digging our my souls up

For someone else to find

If this is what I get for having one

I don’t want it anymore

And there are rose-less thorns

Biting my hand,

It hurts, and I’m crying

You’re hurt, and you’re dying

I don’t know...

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Forbidden cinta - Chapter 8

posted by ashesandwine

Ok, sorry for not menulis lebih sooner but I wasn't home! Ok... so thanks to patrisha727 for the help...
Thanks to Emmett4ever as always for that first push...
And thanks to everyone for the support...

"Daniel's POV"

I'll wait for you... I promised anda that, I promised myself that and I'm keeping my promise... But, please, find a way to let me know that anda are all right...
Find a way to keep my hope up...

I staied halaman awal for three days... Waiting for any letter from her. I just needed to know that she was safe...
I never went down, unless for breakfast, lunch and dinner. I hadn't talk to my father...

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Forbidden cinta - Chapter 6

posted by ashesandwine

Not much to say, just thanks to DxCluvr for the help....
Thanks to Just_bella for all the help as well...
Thanks to Patrisha727 for helping me find the banner and the icon for my spot...
And thanks to everyone for the support...
This time the lines are all mine... No song to inspire them

"Daniel's POV"

Can I fight when there's no hope? Can I smile when there's no happiness? Can I still cinta when the one I cinta is gone? Can I live when I hope for death?
I try to stay awake not wanting to dream of her, not wanting to see her eyes, her lips, her face begging to stay with me! I'm trying to go back...

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"Benny" - Chapter One

posted by marissa

"It was an early March morning, so early that the sky still had streaks of jeruk, orange and berwarna merah muda, merah muda in it."

"It was an early March morning, so early that the sky still had streaks of orange and pink in it."

Chapter One:

Benny:

Benny climbed onto the bus, giving the bus driver a kind smile as he paid his fare. It was an early March morning, so early that the sky still had streaks of jeruk, orange and berwarna merah muda, merah muda in it, very reluctantly giving way to gray-blue. It was cold out, so Benny pulled his brown jaket tighter around him as he took his kursi near the back of the bus.

He sat in the kursi nearest the window, like he always did when he was sitting oleh himself. He cracked it open a bit. The breeze, however cold it was, made him feel a little less cooped up, a little less separated from the rest of the world that...

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Fallout: Kind of a Drabble.

posted by Sweet_Pants

He was yelling again.

    I’d close my eyes, letting his voice fade over my ears, pleading my breath to go even. My ears traveled out, hearing anything but my father’s yelling, anything but his harsh insults, anything but his mocking...

    Tick, tick, the clock was ticking. It was an malaikat clock, hanging over my head, hanging over the computer I was sitting in front of.

    He was saying something about towels, towels left on the floor in the bathroom...

    “...left towels all over the damn floors...someone...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Sixteen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Sixteen

The selanjutnya hari and after Church, Sean came over to see the girls and while seeing him playing happily with the girls and with Boyd on the right side of her chair, Jamie was thinking about breaking Mac’s promise and going ahead with the makan malam together with Sean but she couldn’t because she promised her little girl and don’t want to see her jantung being broken and so will Michael if he finds out about the makan malam with Sean and his wife.

Also, when Sean turned to her and gave her a slight grin on his face before heading back with the girls, Jamie also smiled at him and after...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Fifteen

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Fifteen

Later that hari and after makan malam and playing games with Mama and Sean, Mac knew that after Sean leaves their halaman awal to go back to his own house and once Jamie cleans them up, put them in their pajamas, and read them a story atau two, then she can ask her mother about that odd thing she saw that hari between her mom and the man who hangs out with them any chance he got.

It was coming closer and closer. After Sean had left, four of the Thomas family is heading into their ‘getting ready for bed’ routine which means taking a bath, taking sure that the kids had brushed their teeth, used...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 27

posted by BellaSwan636

Ashleigh

I see lotsa stuffs on TV. Like how big kids have to look out for the littler kids. And how kids always have mommies and daddies.

I don't have a daddy. Mommy never says why, but I think she doesn't want me to ask. So I don't.

I notice a lot lebih than she thinks I do. Like how whenever she sees a ungu (I asked her what it was called) she smiles a little. Like it reminds her of something. I know she likes them because she has some of them framed in my room.

I also see how she always ignores everyone but the people she's talking to and me.

And she always knows when Jamie and me play spies...

The Vampire Reporter -- Chapter 7

posted by BiteMeCullen107

I left Jason at his house while I drove to work. When I first walked into the building and straight to the elevator, floor twelve. I got of the elevator and waiting there was a woman with a clip board smiling at me well I don’t know if she was smiling at me atau if her face was stuck like that but I greeted her.
“Hi I’m April Meyers; I’ll be your assistant.” She held her hand out and I took it. “Vanna is waiting for anda in her office. Do anda need anything?” She walked and talked. “No thank you, not right know.”
She opened the door and I stepped in and shut it. I couldn’t believe...

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Trapped in my own time Chapter 7

posted by dragonrider

"So Starr what is going on?" my mom asks me when Elliot and I sit on the dipan, sofa "And who is this?" she motions to Elliot
"I'm Elliot from 2009. I'm excited to be here Mrs Makenzie I cinta your daughter," he says
My mom raises her eyebrows "Oh wow already? Starr please explain,"
I sigh "I chose the wrong job mom. Oh sure I chose the job where it sounds the most interesting but little did I know I was working for the bad guys,"
My dad walks in with jagung meletus, popcorn and sits down "Please start at the beginning Starr I want to hear everything," he says
I sigh "Okay so anda guys know I was in 2009 right?"
...

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The Vampire Reporter -- Chapter 1

posted by BiteMeCullen107

I’m finally on my own, alone. I just turned eighteen a couple of months yang lalu and I got a job offer in Los Angeles California. I’ve been menulis since I could write and when I reached junior high I joined the new paper and I did the same in high school and in my detik tahun of high school I was offered a job as a reported for the Salem New Hampshire news paper and I accepted. My job threw the years had grown and now that I’m done high school I can take the job offer.
Ya my parents were pissed when the found out I wasn’t going to collage but if anda think about it...

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Who are the real monsters: Chapter 1: The Antiworld Part 2

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

“There anda are, man” berkata Marley. Opal had blood dripping from her mouth; her eyes were shining red as the shadows off the pohon darken her whole body. “Looks like we’re all done here, let’s pindah out before they wake up” berkata Alec. Later on while Marley was lying on his bed, the same thought came across his mind, should the others know about their secret. “Marley, someone’s here for you” berkata Marley’s mum. “Hey man””It’s us”. This is Lindsay and Slone Sudiro (Lindsay 14, Slone 12) Lindsay level is higher than Opals, Slone’s is no better than Nathan’s. They are...

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underworls Chapter 5: Road trips

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Tayce’s p.o.v

“Training time for Lilly” I sneered looking at the small blond. She nodded. “Let me get ready” She said. I shrugged and then turned to go, but was stopped oleh Hayden. “She already trained today” he informed me, I nodded. “I know, but Rebecca wants her to have lebih of it” I told him, he rolled his eyes. “Why is she being such a bitch?” he asked me I laughed. “It’s Rebecca, she sees her as a threat” I told him, he tensed up. The he turned to me. “You’re not being so bad” he said, pointing out that I’m usually a bitch. “She didn’t do anything...