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posted by xXxEmoRAwRxXx

Yeah I know it sucks I was bored when I wrote this....so yeah. [Chapter 1]
She stares at the rain in silence. Grieve over took her. She sat there still looking at the body lying cold, pale, still, and dead on the floor. She just stared not sharing a tear and droped the knife, she then looks at the lighting that was flowing in the sky. She then spares a tear, she sits still selanjutnya to the body crying for her lover. What had she done? He didn't deserve the pain she gave him. She gets up and comes back with another knife, a bottle of scottch, and a...

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The first 3 chapters of my book- Flame Boy

posted by coolie

Jason: blonde spiky hair, green eyes, wearing his favorit gitar kemeja for almost three days straight, and he’s a teenager, but a rather short one. He has jeruk, orange braces that are spotted easily when he smiles. Jason has an arm that can oddly twist all the way around in a
perfect circle. One of the strangest things about him is a black thing in the shape of a flame on his left leg. People think it’s a poorly drawn drawing, but he was born with it, and as he got older it grew with him.

Jason was sitting oleh the fireplace watching the flames blow from side to side. His eyes liked to find themselves,...

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Psychoanalysis: Chapter 17

posted by Insight357

It felt like I had been submerged under water. I was suffocating.
    “How could anda leave her?” I managed to get the pertanyaan out of my mouth.
    “Genette didn’t tell me she was pregnant. I didn’t even know about Lucy until she was five. oleh then I figured it was too late,” Alexander berkata a look of pain was in his face.
    “It’s never too late, Alexander,” I said, angered oleh the fact he would just give that magnificent child up.
    “It was at the time. I didn’t know where she was, and the...

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Stardom Chapter 2 - Elaine and Blaine, Mischievous Twins

posted by Vampiyaa

"This is beautiful!" Aiko breathed. Elaine beamed and laughed, "I knew you'd cinta it!" Elaine had called Aiko's apartment at five in the morning, telling her (well, lebih like yelling at her) to come to a spot in the park. In that spot was a bench facing a brilliant, crystal-clear waterfall that flowed around the bench like a sparkling moat. An authentic wooden bridge with white and blue mawar woven in the railings connected the park with the solitary bench.
"We're going to meet your brother in such a beautiful place?" Aiko gaped.
"Yeah!" Elaine exclaimed, flopping down on the bench and grinning...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 15

posted by Insight357

“I can’t get anda out of my head either,” I said. Voices broke loose in my head, and I fought to push them all back.
    “What are we going to do then?” he asked unaware of the chaos in my mind.
    “What do anda mean?” I asked confused.
    “We both have feelings for each other. We can’t just ignore it,” Alexander said.
    “I know,” I wanted to ignore it no matter what he said. That would be rude though.
    “We should take time together to explore...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 13

posted by Insight357

I sat on a black, leather couch, starring at the deep blue walls. I was in Alexander’s office, for my appointment. I’d come here straight from the cathedral. My hair was tangled, and messy. I still wore plaid pajama bottoms, and an old, gray tee shirt.
    I came to a realization last night. Today, I would make my move. I have done enough to hold my own. Now I could be happy…Maybe.
    I debated whether, atau not I should tell Alexander about Lucy. Dr. Anozi would’ve liked the idea, but I’m not sure about Dr. Laveney.
    I also...

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Psychoanalysis: Chapter 9

posted by Insight357

I ran my hand through my tired hair. I fell asleep on the attic floor last night, after my outburst. I was tired, and ached everywhere. What a night it had been.
I took my weight of the gurney I had been leaning on. I was at the hospital today, to help calm this schizophrenic man. I arrived here at seven this morning, and had to leave before noon. I couldn’t miss Lucy’s appointment at Social Services.
It was eight-thirty now, and I was getting ready to meet my patient. He was in the emergency room, with the doctor. He’d had a nervous breakdown,...

Hells Outlaw -- Chapter 17

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 17

“Who killed them?!” Koda growled.
Iah was trying to keep Koda calm; from his few encounters with this one he knew anger was Koda’s worst enemy.
“I am not sure…” he replied softly.
“How can anda not know!?” he screamed, charging after Iah. He dug his fingers into Iah’s chest as they turned to claws, slamming him to the ground, his dark red eyes bored into Iah’s sending dark chills through his mind. “You know everything else but anda don’t know who killed them?”
Iah cringed in pain, trying to speak.
“I do not know but…I have a feeling who may have done…it”...

Living in the City of the 1970's: Chapter 1

posted by StarWarsFan7

I stroll down Western Avenue with a blue coin tas, dompet in my fragile hands. People in every direction as far as the eye can see. Neighbors being neighborly, store keepers selling and people riding the subway to work. Today happens to be a Saturday morning. And as usual, I awaken in the morning at six o'clock and dress. Every Saturday morning is the same old thing. I turn to the corner seeing the store I've been looking for. Roosevelt Island Shop. Yes. Indeed I live on the island of Roosevelt Island. It's very exhilirating to walk in the streets of our state of New York. As I enter the small shop,...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 4

posted by Insight357

    I stood from the brown couch, rubbing my eyes. I had slept on the couch. Grey was mad, and I had been stressed. It was a fight waiting to happen.
    Grey had already left for her job at the pharmacy. She was a secretary. Today, I was going to get my license, to practice psychology.
    I stood from the couch, I was dressed in last night’s clothes. I’d been at the bar, doing tequila shots. I was trying to numb my mind from pop-up questions.
    It had been a week since I left the asylum. Since I left Dr. Anozi....

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Hells Outlaw - Chapter 13

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 13

The hallways of the hospital were dead silent except for the beeping noises of the jantung monitors from the patient rooms and acak coughing. Jax slowly and silently stepped passed each door not wanting to spook anyone and draw attention to him. So far it was working.
Finally, he reached an elevator and pressed the down button, hoping that no one was on the other side of the door.
The door binged loudly as it reached his floor and Jax held his breath waiting to see a doctor atau security on the other side. It opened and he let out a huge sigh to an empty elevator.
He stepped inside and...

Hells Outlaw - Chapter 12

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 12

The late afternoon sun shined on Koda’s back as he headed further west. Soon the sun would be shining in front of him, slowly drifting its way down the western horizon. Night would follow…

The hospital grew quiet as the hours went by. Jax’s pain had subsided but his anger and vengeance did not. With each passing menit he grew lebih restless and ready to leave his hospital bed.
He gently took the oxygen tubes out of his nose then gritted his teeth as he pulled the IV out his hand. Slowly, he moved his feet towards the edge of the tempat tidur but quickly pushed them back as he saw a nurse...

Psychoanalysis: Prolouge

posted by Insight357

This is a story; my story. I am Damien Cole Demidov. My grandparents are full-blooded Russian. I am twenty-one years old, and I’ve been locked up in an asylum for four years.
    I have black hair about four inches from my shoulders. I am vampire pale. I have crystal blue eyes. I’m 5’9’’.
    I have met many a person in my time. Maybe you’ll meet some of the throughout the story.
    Anywho, I live in the U.S. now, shipped over with my mom when I was twelve. I live in New York City at the moment. My mom is back in Russia with my father, and grandparents.
    Now, let’s see what’s in store for us.

justin bieber?

posted by sassygirl26640

clearly justin bieber the famous pop teen idol. is being down graded for 98% of girls lives to 20%. its been taking forever for 1 song to come out of his mouth these days. plus no girl likes his new hair cute from cute and shaggy to a short cut. now he sung with a wanobe kid whos daddy paied for his songs to come out janeh smith. oops did i spill the beans on him i think i did but thats a differnt story about him and his sister. but i cinta his sisters's musik but there they been edited!! what is going to happen to are once loved justin bieber now. o and something i think all the people who...

Collin jalan, jalan, street Despair (short story)

posted by liissaaxx

“I can’t even remember why I chose to marry you!” She yelled. Her beautiful face filled with anger, those sparkling brown eyes that I have loved since hari one, bore into me with no affection. She had berkata them, the words I never wanted to hear.
The fight had been going on for an jam now and I started to yell back, I could no longer control myself. Our first real fight in five years. I knew she would be over it soon and that big bright smile will light up her face, but I was overwhelmed too. I was hurt. But I stopped myself.
There were no lights on in our house; the outside light had...

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Every story has its beginning.

posted by jesus_bale

"It's something unpredictable, but in the end is right."

I can still remember the disappointment in those hazel eyes the moment I told him I was leaving. I couldn't stay - I had no choice. I still can't decide whether it hurt lebih to leave him, atau to know I had been the one who caused the pain. What was I supposed to do? This child needed guidance and protection now lebih than ever, and I couldn't help him. For so long I had been the one to console him - make him feel aman, brankas - and it was coming to an end. It was... the rule.

"I need to go away, Alex. It's what imaginary friends do....

Hell's Outlaw--Chapter 10

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 10

“It appears an animal attacked him but the claw marks look almost….human,”
“How could a person do something like this?”

Voices echoed in and around him. They sounded so distant like he was under water.
His face burned like something tore the skin off and left it bare to the elements.
A light glowed around his eyes; a strong smell of oxygen filled his nose as he took in a deep breath.
The voices became louder as he became lebih awake.

“He’s starting to wake up.”

“What’s going on?” he winced. Talking made his face hurt.

“You’re in the hospital, anda were found this morning...

Hell's Outlaw--Chapter 9

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 9

Jax slammed on the breaks of his truck in front of the Sakima home. With his shotgun in hand, he cautiously stepped out.
He could barely see through the thick darkness.
His lungs burned as he tried to breathe the frigid air that surrounded him.

“Mrs. Sakima!” he yelled stumbling over a rock.

“Help…”
A weak voice called out.

He ran through the darkness, trying to navigate where the voice came from.
His foot struck something hard causing him land on his stomach, knocking the breath out of him.
Not able to pindah from his inability to breathe he lifted his head and opened his eyes. A...

Hell's Outlaw--Chapter 8

posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 8

The highway was strangely quiet tonight.
On a typical Friday night Officer Ranald would see 20 cars every 5 menit but since the early evening there hasn’t been one car except for a few semi-trucks. In his 25 years as an officer, this was a rare occurrence.
His patrol car sat parked in a shallow ditch in the darkness so that any driver going over the speed would never see him until it was too late. One of the many perks of being a highway patrol officer.
But tonight it was boring him to death.

With his window rolled down the outside air was cool and fresh making him feel more...

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Blind: Chapter 1

posted by Insight357

Yes, it was happening (again). Seventeen tahun old Wyatt Thomas was being chased oleh a pair of vampyres. Great. He was going to be late to school for the fourth time that week. He was sure his best friend Elizabeth would cover for him, as she'd done the other four times this week.
He spun around with inhuman speed. Blue flames leapt out of his fingers toward the vampyres. When the flames made contact the vamps flew back into the wall. Wyatt quickly ran out of the ally, and all the way to school.
Wyatt, suprisingly, got to school on time, early in fact. Even Elizabeth wasn't there yet. So, he...