Hi! I'm Cedarstorm, atau Cedar. I'm an artist and writer, and this artikel is for people who are just beginning writing- and have no idea what to do. Let's talk cats.
First, the kucing in the Warriors series aren't spelled like "FireStar", "Fire Star", atau "Fire star". They're spelt as though it is one word; "Firestar". Many people don't study the buku enough to write the names like that.
Second, the cat's don't just walk. They limp, stumble, pad, dash, and bound through the forest, tails streamed out behind them.
"Cedarstorm dashed through the dense wood, dodging branches and leaping over rocks."
Now, menulis grammar. I see a lot of stories that don't indent when a new character speaks. For example;
"Don't leave," Cedarstorm begged, taking a few steps toward the light gray tabby.
"You know I have to," Cloudstripe meowed back, his voice cracking with greif.
So, please use this! If anda think this artikel is junk, just ask anyone who writes stories. They'll tell anda the same.
Thanks for reading!
~Cedar♥
First, the kucing in the Warriors series aren't spelled like "FireStar", "Fire Star", atau "Fire star". They're spelt as though it is one word; "Firestar". Many people don't study the buku enough to write the names like that.
Second, the cat's don't just walk. They limp, stumble, pad, dash, and bound through the forest, tails streamed out behind them.
"Cedarstorm dashed through the dense wood, dodging branches and leaping over rocks."
Now, menulis grammar. I see a lot of stories that don't indent when a new character speaks. For example;
"Don't leave," Cedarstorm begged, taking a few steps toward the light gray tabby.
"You know I have to," Cloudstripe meowed back, his voice cracking with greif.
So, please use this! If anda think this artikel is junk, just ask anyone who writes stories. They'll tell anda the same.
Thanks for reading!
~Cedar♥
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Graystripe walked down the twoleg path when
"Hey you!" Graystripe shot around to see a gray she-cat sitting on the fence
"What do anda want kittypet?" the kittypet jumped down to talk to him
"Yo, i anit no kittypet, i'm from Sparta, motter'o'fact my name is Sparta, ya i'm so tuff i could take u down, i took my big sister down when she was taking a nap!" Graystripe just stared at this crazy kittypet
"What?!"
"Ohh ya i'm a spartin, i got 300 buddies back there, and they will take u down!"
"What!?"
"Ohh ya u can't handle all this!"
"What?!"
"and u know y we lick ourselfs???cause we can"
"What!?" Sparta turned to go back
"Ohh ya u got surved!" then she disspered over the fence.
ok onley reasion i wrot this cause i have a cat named Sparta and yesterday i saw he kinda talking to this gray cat oleh the woods, and i thought it would be funny to write this, hope u enjoyed iy
"Hey you!" Graystripe shot around to see a gray she-cat sitting on the fence
"What do anda want kittypet?" the kittypet jumped down to talk to him
"Yo, i anit no kittypet, i'm from Sparta, motter'o'fact my name is Sparta, ya i'm so tuff i could take u down, i took my big sister down when she was taking a nap!" Graystripe just stared at this crazy kittypet
"What?!"
"Ohh ya i'm a spartin, i got 300 buddies back there, and they will take u down!"
"What!?"
"Ohh ya u can't handle all this!"
"What?!"
"and u know y we lick ourselfs???cause we can"
"What!?" Sparta turned to go back
"Ohh ya u got surved!" then she disspered over the fence.
ok onley reasion i wrot this cause i have a cat named Sparta and yesterday i saw he kinda talking to this gray cat oleh the woods, and i thought it would be funny to write this, hope u enjoyed iy