Hello everybody! Okay, so in this first OC Making 101 Article... Mary sues. Now, most of anda know what i'm talking about. Rainbows, un-natural colors, neon. BUT, that's SO stereotypical! Most NORMAL Mary sue's, Like IceTalon here, Look normal and have something wrong with it. (The base was made oleh WarriorCatkittyclaws on deviantart! ) Then... On the other hand... Stereotypical Mary sue's, like queen pelangi step over there at the bottom of the page... Is actually kinda scary. Now. if your a beginner, at least TRY? G'night! See anda on the selanjutnya episode of.. OC making 101!
About 3 moons after Firepaw come to the forest
Fire_dude has logged on
Gray_man has logged on
Firedude: Yo Graypaw whats up?
Gray_dude: I just nocked Sandpaw, so i'm hiding
Fire_dude: How mad is she?
Gray_dude: I'm hiding in a rabbit hole
Fire_dude: :O wow, that sucks.....Dude she just came into camp....DUDE SHES RED!!
Gray_dude: i'm not here i'm not here
Fire_dude: Brb, she wants to talk to me....
Gary_dude: ok.....
its really loney now.....
anda back yet?
COME ON!
Bluestars_dead has logged on
Bluestars_dead has logged off
Gary_dude: ooooookkkkkkk
Fire_dude has logged off
Gray_dude: great
SPBH had logged on
Gray_dude: SPBH?
SPBH: Sandpaw...BEST HUNTER!
Gray_dude: mouse DUNG!
SPBH: NOW WHERE ARE YOU?
Gray_dude:.....uh....Riverclan
SPBH has logged off
Gray_dude: cool she bought it!
Gray_dude has been hacked, and can no longer chat 4 Gray_dude has been deleted
(PLZ! feel graypaws pain! AMEN!)
Fire_dude has logged on
Gray_man has logged on
Firedude: Yo Graypaw whats up?
Gray_dude: I just nocked Sandpaw, so i'm hiding
Fire_dude: How mad is she?
Gray_dude: I'm hiding in a rabbit hole
Fire_dude: :O wow, that sucks.....Dude she just came into camp....DUDE SHES RED!!
Gray_dude: i'm not here i'm not here
Fire_dude: Brb, she wants to talk to me....
Gary_dude: ok.....
its really loney now.....
anda back yet?
COME ON!
Bluestars_dead has logged on
Bluestars_dead has logged off
Gary_dude: ooooookkkkkkk
Fire_dude has logged off
Gray_dude: great
SPBH had logged on
Gray_dude: SPBH?
SPBH: Sandpaw...BEST HUNTER!
Gray_dude: mouse DUNG!
SPBH: NOW WHERE ARE YOU?
Gray_dude:.....uh....Riverclan
SPBH has logged off
Gray_dude: cool she bought it!
Gray_dude has been hacked, and can no longer chat 4 Gray_dude has been deleted
(PLZ! feel graypaws pain! AMEN!)
Tell me ur siblings and mother and father and ill see what I can do! Yay...please reply as soon as possible, and if u have any other pertanyaan u can ask and I will answer as soon as I get on! DONT FORGET TO fan MEEE!
Your fellow warrior friend, Brightnose
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