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hi guys just being really brave here coz i dont usually do this but would u plz read a poem i wrote? it was inspired oleh twilight saga :)

my friend Twilight_lover encoraged me 2 put my poem up here! plz tell me wot u really think i want to b told the truth coz i cinta menulis and i want to improve it thx :

cinta is the closest thing we have to magic
But It can be hurtful and painful too
it lies in those whos hearts are cold
it glows in those who are true.

anda can find it in the least expected places,
It can kill to let cinta go
It can comfort those who are in need of help
It can fight and take over woe

cinta is something that never dies,
It stays in the hearts of the gone,
cinta is a candle that never goes out,
No one knows where its from

cinta is the glue that holds us together,
It is the thing that makes us smile
Without knowing, we rely on love
lebih then anyone would know

It can kill those who turn against it,
It can take over those who don’t
It can bring tears and laughter and cries of pain
But die is what it wont

People hurt for those that leave
cinta finds the one who another needs
They need the ones they can’t live without
It can cause hearts to bleed


Sometimes cinta burns
To an extent that we can’t bear
cinta is an emotion,
something we can to share

Maybe anda don’t cinta the one who loves you,
But even if your jantung is full of hate
cinta comes first before anything
It burns on after fate

cinta can bring back life to those
Who have lost meaning and hope
So I belive cinta is good,
It warms the ones grey and cold who havn’t the strength to cope

cinta is goodbye, but also a welcome
A bird that flies there, free
cinta is something anda can’t buy,
Whatever the price may be.

To watch a face twist up in pain,
cinta is how anda sooth
cinta is calm but also wild,
musik that makes anda move

Peaceful is what cinta is,
a flutter in the air
cinta is sometimes peaceful
cinta isn’t fair

A palm on an island,
a petal on a rose
cinta never stops growing
we don’t know how big cinta grows.


cinta is the closest thing we have to magic
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sorry guys couldnt fit the rest in it was 2 long but the ending sentence was the first verse of the poem :) thx for membaca it
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thanx i luv this poem girl this rock.
blacke posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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wow great poem better than some pro work can i add u as a friend?
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ABDCFan- said:
This poem is awesomeeee! (:
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thx!! that means alot
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o and btw ur reveiw is awesomeeee! aswell ;) lol
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Hellohoudini said:
Beautiful and moving! Dont be afraid to post more..
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thanks that is really really nice it means loads to me thank u xx
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countrygirl2008 said:
wow that was very touching . anda have a natural talent.!
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:::::DDDD lol thank u thank u!!!! thats really nice it means alot
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ScottishChic said:
THAT WAS AN IMMENSE POEM!!!!!!!!
how'd u get so good at menulis them??? *jealous*

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wow thx that really nice :)
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twifan2010 said:
WOW, AMAZING! Could u give me some tips on how u can write poems like that, cause I really like menulis n would like to do some more! :)
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thx ye i will x :)
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loverofedward said:
hey there ur poem is really awesome u knw .I guess u must b in luv too dats y u wrote dis poem.U did include dat suggestions r welcome so i just felt dat ur line "love isnt fair" is incorrect as i think luv is always fair atau maybe u cld xplain wat did u meant oleh it.
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kk thx and btw im not in love!!! lol thx tho
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