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hey do anda like this poem i did about alice and jasper's love?

these two were insepreable
the trust and cinta in his eyes
made her feel aman, brankas
when she smiled
it brightened his hari
the thrill of the adventure
the adventure of cinta
was making alice and jasper
fall ever so passionetly inlove
cinta is like the wind
anda cant see it
but anda can feel it
cinta folowed jasper and alice
because they were destined for eachother

 twilight_lover9 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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TEAM-EDWARDxxx said:
I Like it...

But is okay i guess.. maybe sum lebih stuff bout like vampire haha that would be interesting..
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anda could just go to the request a peom pertanyaan and say that u kno! but thanx! for the tip
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Little_Cullen said:
cinta it. Punctuation a bit funny, but the actual menulis is really cool. I especially like the bit about he makes her feel aman, brankas and her smile brightens his day. I cinta it. Keep it up!
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thank-u so much
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twilightgirlNo1 said:
i think its great but some of the lines could be a little better.
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twilight0girl said:
it's a perfect poem about them.
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it's a perfect poem about them.
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Twilightpup said:
Its really good , anda should make one about Bella and Edward
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emilyemmett said:
That is really good!! anda should write another one!! Maybe about the meadow atau Jacob and Renesmee atau something!
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sessa123 said:
Its not bad, i always thought a poem used to jus have to rhyme but narr its really gud maybe fix up some little thing and maybe have a good thing to rhyme bout, like werewolves, vampire anything lol KEEP IT UP HUN XX
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zXwolfgirlXz said:
aww i like it

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Brysis said:
It´s cute ♥
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LovelyDragon said:
Ya, I like it. Some of the lines could be a little better, but it's really cool. :)
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