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Chapter 17: Freedom City's Wrath
Part 2: The Shocking Truth

Dokuro's secret is out--he isn't the true Malice. After he sent his skeleton army after th­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­em, they ran for it. Whirlwind fired off an air sphere at some of the skeleton's, and they broke apart. But a bunch lebih kept coming for them, armed with swords.
"I don't think both of us can fight them all off, Whirl! We need to find Duji....and fast!"
Whirlwind agreed and kept on running away from the skeleton arm ay. Whirlwind grabed Jackson's hand and flew off deeper into the city. Whirlwind looked down at Jackson and asked, "About Duji...where IS he? Shouldn't he be with you?"
"He was, but he and I membagi, split up when he went off to face the citizen's solo.....I hope he's alright," Jackson added.
While they were on their way towards Shock, Shock and itik jantan, drake were still face-to-face with the citizen's. They hid under a car, trying to stay clear of the wrath of the citizen's. It was quiet. Both Shock and itik jantan, drake listened for any sounds of the citizen's talking atau preparing to api again, but nothing was hard through the dead, cool air.
"OK, why haven't they api at us yet?" asked Drake.
"How should I know, Drake? atau whatever your name is...." Shock asked back, somehwat irritated.
He peeked his head out from beneath the car and looked around for any sign of them. He looked at the nearby buildings, and he saw that the poeple has seemingly vanished. He looked back to Shock and said, "I believe the coast is clear, kid."
He grabbed Shock hand as he got up from under the car and stood back up. They looked around for anymore signs of the citizens.
"It's quiet. And we all know that when things get quiet, all hell breaks loose..." Shock
itik jantan, drake continued to look around and said, "Exactly...which is why I'm calling for backup. I'm sure they'll come, but I need to be sure they get here before--"
itik jantan, drake was cut off suddenly, when they both saw bullets flying at them. It didn't take long for them to notice the citizen's running towards them. itik jantan, drake fired off several shots, while running away from the scene. He got a few of them, but wan't enough to stop the riot.
"Come on! We need to get anda outta here!" itik jantan, drake screamed out.
Shock shook his head and formed electricity around himself, also making himself hover into the air.
"No....I'm gona take them ALL on!" he shouted back, having his eyes focused on them.
"Fine, then I'll be back with back up!" itik jantan, drake called out, before officially leaving.
With one last effort to stand against the city, he flew off after them, firing off massive electrical bolts. One person was hit, while another jumped meneruskan, ke depan to stab Shock with a knife. He quickly grabbed the guys hand and electrocuted him, then swung him around using his electrical whip, and slammed him into two other people. Another person tackled him down and they both rolled around on the street. When they stopped, Shock kicked the guy off him and stood back up. He then flew after him, and was ready to electrocute him. But before he could get to him, someone else nearby caused a peice of the concrete below him to come up and hit him. The impact sent Shock flying up higher, and hurt like hell. he fell back down to the jalan, street hard--with scrapes and scratches all over him. He got up, but was sore from impact.
"Damn you...." he called out.
Just as Shock charged toward the remaining citizen's, several police cars drove into the scene--one of them driving in between Shock and the others. Drake, along with other cops, got outta thier cars.
"OK, everyone, get back to your homes! This riot ends now!" itik jantan, drake shouted, ready to use his gun if this gets ugly.
One officer came over to Shock and saying, "We need to leave...if anda come with us, you'll be safe."
"NO! I'm finishing what I started!" he shouted back.
Tyson, with a few other mobians, came up and appraoched Drake.
"We're not going anywhere til that kid is DEAD!" he yelled at Drake.
itik jantan, drake aimed his gun at the remaining Mobian's, mostly towards Tyson. itik jantan, drake had mixed emotions about shooting Tyson--but knew he may have to if Tyson kept this riot going.
"I never thought I would have to do this....I never did like you, but still..." itik jantan, drake berkata to Tyson.
Tyson rolled his eyes and said, "Do anda think I care? Once I make that kid pay for this, I'll be outta your hair, COUSIN Drake..."
Shock heard that and then looked at Drake, asking, "You two are related?"
"Yeah...he's my detik cousin. That doesn't matter now--Tyson? Get these people to go halaman awal before this gets ugly! We got the 'criminal' under control," itik jantan, drake told Tyson.
"Liar! anda idiots didn't do nothing...now WE will take a stand against that monster!" he shouted, while motioning the other mobian's to attack.
Out of pure reflex, he shot several bullets at the crowd as he ran.
"Go...GO! GET THE KID OUTTA HERE!" itik jantan, drake screamed at one of the cops standing by.
Him and another cop quickly grabbed Shock as they ran for their cars. They got in as quick as they could and then drove off down the street, heading for the bridge. Ironically, at the detik they drove off--Whirlwind and Jackson stopped them as they happened to walk by. It didn't take them long to notice the group of citezen's.
"Wait...if they're chasing after that police car, then Duji must be in it! We need to get to him before--" Jackson said, being cut off when seeing Dokuro.
Dokuro flew past them in air above them, making his way towards the police car Shock was in. Whirlwind grabbed Jackson's hand and flew after Dokuro. While driving, itik jantan, drake happened to notice Dokuro flying past them.
"Isn't that him, Duji? You're...'master'?" he asked Duji, who sat in the back.
"It is! Wherever he's going, follow him!" he shouted.
With that, itik jantan, drake drove faster, as he turned right down the jalan, street where Dokuro was heading. Several bullet sounds where heard hitting the car from behind them, as the angry mod chassing them was shooting at them. Shock rolled down the window and shot out multiple electrical blasts at them. Most of them where hit, while the others decided to back off for the moment.
"I got them to back off....now go get--" Shock said, but noticed that Dokuro was outta sight.
"What is it? Did he vanish?" asked Drake.
Shock nodded as he pointed towards that same old house that he saw before--the house that "Malice" told him to stay clear of. itik jantan, drake stopped the car as he aproached the strange, creepy old house. They quickly got outta their cars and Shock went ahead of them, running up to the porch.
"Hey, whats wrong? Did he go inside atau something?" itik jantan, drake asked.
"Yes...I'm going inside..." he said, with a determind look.
After that, he opened the door and waisted no time going inside. itik jantan, drake noticed Whirlwind and Jackson coming into the scene--Whirlwind lowering down to the front yard.
"Glad anda made it....your grandkid went inside after Malice," berkata Drake.
"Good...but we have some news: that guy isn't Malice! His name is Dokuro and he's not your regular Mobian...." Jackson called out.
itik jantan, drake was a little shocked oleh the sudden news, but then motioned for the other officers that were with him to go inside.
"Let's worry about that later.....right now we need to catch this guy," he told Jackson.
As they went inside, Shock was already waking in the livingroom. The house was dead quiet--as it has been for the last 6 month. There were no furniture around, just a huge empty space. As he looked around the place, memories of that house came flooding back to him. he looked over at the section where there was once a couch, and he began to see a specific memory reply in his head. One of him and his parents watching TV. itik jantan, drake and the others finally caught up to him. Jackson rushed over to Shock and was worried.
"Duji, are anda OK? Is he here?" he asked him.
He didn't quite hear him talking--he was toobusy thinking back. itik jantan, drake came over to Jackson and said, "Wait...I think he's remembering..."
detik later, Shock went up the stairs and down the hall. Jackson, itik jantan, drake and Whirlwind all followed. Jackson looked at Whirlwind and asked, "What exacty are anda doing here? Are anda still after that Spectre guy?"
"Yes. Spectre berkata that him and Dokuro are planning to team up...." he added.
As they came up the hallway, itik jantan, drake and a few other cops aimed their guns around the place.
"Shock? Are anda OK in here?" asked Drake, his voice echoing in the hall.
Shock was in his old room, looking around the place. He then saw another memeory reply in his mind as he looked at where his tempat tidur use to be. Thinking of these memories brought tears to his eyes as he silenty cried. Little did he know: Dokuro was watching him from inside a closet. The door was open, so he quietly stepped out into the empty room. Dokuro grinned maliciously as he saw what Shock was doing.
"Awww....is the lil anak anjing, anjing sad?" he asked him, clearly trying to taunt him.
He looked back and saw Dokuro standing there--he was angry.
"You lied to me, didn't you?" he asked Dokuro.
Dokuro rolled his eyes, though anda couldn't see it through his shades.
"Kid, we're way passed that now....so I'll just cut to the chase: I DID lie to you...." he announced.
Shock grew angrier and fired off some light bolts. Dokuro and jumped up and quickly flicked his wrists around, and started twisting Shock's bones.
"You....you berkata I had no family! anda berkata I was EVIL!" Shock screamed out.
While still holding Shock in his grip, he raised Shock's body in the air, saying, "Evil? Please....you were NEVER truely evil! I only made anda think it til I was done with you..."
Then he threw Shock across the room. Shock hit a nearby dinding face first. Shock groaned in pain. He stood back up as Jackson and the other cops entered the room. They aimed their gun toward him.
"Put your hands up! I don't know what anda wanted with this kid, but it's over..." itik jantan, drake berkata to him.
"Over? Far from it....wanna hear lebih of the truth, kid? anda DID have a family, but Malice killed them off 6 months ago," declared Dokuro.
When he heard that, he grey lebih angrier. And his teary eye's face was replaced with that of pure rage. Electricity circled around him. Jackson, itik jantan, drake and Dokuro all backed away from him as this happened.
"Duji, I know you're probably in a of shock right now, but I want anda to know--" Jackson said, being cut off oleh Drake.
"Jackson, I think it's best we get outta here...." he said.
Then he got so angry, that his electricity became bright red flames. Shock didn't notice this of course, but the others did. At that moment, he officially remembered who he was and that Dokuro had lied the whole.
"You...you're gonna pay for this! For ever tinking anda could USE me like this!" he shouted, flames bursting from around him.
He made a loud scream and as he did so, a streem of api burst from and went straight through the ceiling, making a huge hole. Dokuro knew this may end badly for him, so he flew out the window in a hurry. But Shock wasn't gonna let him off that easy. With api still around him, he flew after Dokuro and smashed right into the wall, making another huge hole. Jackson rushed over to see if he could find out where Shock had went to. He looked upwards at the sky and saw him giving Dokuro hell. Shock, while still angry, made a firy sphere around himself and flew straight for Dokuro. He was coming on pretty damn fast, and Dokuro barely dodged it. He would attack with his bone-weapons but knew it was useless at this point. As he flew circles around him, he also shot out api balls at Dokuro. He tried his best to dodge the attacks, but didn't do much good. Then had got an idea: he backed away some, and then started moving the bones in Shock's arms while saying, "You think anda have me, don't you? Think again...."
He then made Shock push the button on that watch that he had diberikan him a few hours ago. Afterwards he let go. Shock started to calm down some and gew confused. He heard beeping sounds from the watch and then saw a timer iluminate on the screen.
"What is this...? Why is it counting down?" he asked Dokuro.
"Considering it a birthday present form your master. Happy birthday, mutt!" shouted Dokuro, flying off.
He aw that the timer was counting down, and had 10 detik left. He tried getting the watch off, but it wouldn't budge. He grew terrified, and didn't know what else to do. So as a last resort, he flew--WAYY up high as high as he could before it finally went off. The force of the blast still hit the city regardless, and poor Duji was cought at the center. But is this it? Is this the end of his journy?

TO BE CONTINUED
Damayz,Sitting at his takhta like he was a king,Requested EVEZ to come in his takhta room,Where Xiz and Dezray sat beside him.

"EVEZ,I request that anda go attack a city,And bring me lebih souls,I thirst for them." He berkata to EVEZ.

"But sir,I'm just a lonely Demon,I can't just ATTACK a city BLINDLEY without any help." EVEZ Responded.

"That's Why I'm bringing an Army of Demons to help you,Fool,Now go,And bring me lebih souls." He said.

EVEZ nodded and ran off.

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"Dang,I can't Believe that Caboose is gone." Typhoon sighed.

"Well,At least he's in android...
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“We all know about those days when criminals break lose at the most unexpected times. We all know about those crazy, insane, sometimes even psychotic people, that have the tendency to kill off many innocent beings for no apparent reason. But this woman…is no different.”
    “She started off her childhood at a rough pace. She was a murderous demon, trapped in the soul of an innocent woman of age nineteen. Many spirits beyond the grave never understood the reason why they were killed off. She caused others to commit suicide, atau die of a broken heart.”
    “She...
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It was winter.

I was walking through thick, clear white snow. It was chilly, of course. I knew about Kalla Potter.

She was a nice girl. Never talked back. Made peoples' hearts skip a beat. She always brightened up their days like kupu-kupu and rainbows filling the clear blue sky.

But of course--Then came the death of Kalla. People felt...lost. Depressed. Not their true self without her.

All thanks to Zak. That sniveling little director. Sending out all his assassins on missions that don't even make any sense.

Kalla's death was a complete joke. When I heard the news, I thought it was a joke. But...
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Ifuen leaned over the table, keeping himself up oleh propping his arms on the table. He stared at the holoscreen, formulating a secret plan in his head. Now usually, he wasn’t this quiet; whenever he had some life-threatening, daring plan of action, he would usually require a little help to think it up, but now he couldn’t trust anyone. He wanted to trust his best friend Jace, who had been at his side since they were little. He wanted to trust Anya, who he had always loved from the bottom of his heart. But letting someone in on the plan would be dangerous; not to him, but to everyone else....
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The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 17 (Part 1)


Kyle walked back outside, releasing a sigh as he closed the backdoor behind himself; he was hoping that Damien really would go easy on Ruby and I2. Trenton and Mancer both noticed the sigh that Kyle released before they decided to walk over and ask the hedgehog what was wrong.

“Is something the matter?” Mancer asked the yellow hedgehog as he walked up and stopped beside him; Kyle shook his head at what Mancer had said. “Then why the sigh? Also, who was at the door?”

“The sigh was just from a thought, and someone I met before came to see Ruby and...
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added by CosmoLuvsTails
added by MephilesTheDark
Source: Me.
hey peeps! This is Mephisto N here, with a super-special-awesome guidline as to how to make a decent, likeable Sonic fancharacter!

Let's start off simply with the prime examples of a Mary-Sue in the Sonic fandom. This is what anda DON'T want.

-Is paired with a canon character. Especially not Shadow.

BIG NO-NO. Very few people can get away with this, especially with Shadow. This is usually a 'I luff Shadow he give me 3 babies!!' cry.

-Is related to an official character.

SONIC DOESN'T NEED 300 LONG-LOST SIBLINGS.

-Is faster than Sonic.

It is made a dear point that Sonic is the fastest Hedgehog around...
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So after the events of Origin Unmade 2 there were changes, shifts, in the universes and characters. Today we have Leah Grimstone. I’ll be going over her backstory, personality, relationships, and abilities.


BACKSTORY
Leah was a chameleon girl born in a neutral country on the Mobius “Mercia”. She lived through the Third Predju’King War as people called it as it was not currently involving her home-country. It had just begun and would soon end with her country unharmed, but unknown to her country, the enemy, Mevrik the Mighty, a mobian-hating human wizard-king, had unleashed a new threat...
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Source: me & SaraTheDog
added by CyberEchidna
Source: Myself
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Source: Crystal~~Me Base~~Lennythehedgon On DA~~
So for those who have no idea what the Conflicts Arcane is, here is a brief summary.

On Mobius-Zone-8, an identity crash-lands onto the planet and vanishes. Years later another one crashes on the same Mobius. This identity is found oleh a teenager named Nick Falon, nicknamed Talon. He is friends with a girl named Kal, and a boy named Jesse. They find out about a terrorist group called “Arma-9” supposedly run oleh the government, and ally with the identity, later named Rin, to stop them.

So let’s start with the origins of the entire idea.

So while menulis halfway into the V Saga in Lizzy Eventide:...
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 This is Rachel in her ordinary human form. she always wore attire that would suit an adventure, just incase her life took an exciting turn.
This is Rachel in her ordinary human form. she always wore attire that would suit an adventure, just incase her life took an exciting turn.
I had quite a bit of help from Evolia-Wulf on this, so i gotta give her a TON of credit! Rachel's had a lot of critics in the past about her being "Mary-sueish" so Evolia-wulf and i worked together, brainstormed (and brainhurricaned XD Evolia would be the only one to get this joke), put our ideas together, and came up with an AWSOME storyline that i think EVERYONE will agree, is A LOT better than her last! so here it is! Enjoy!

Personality:

Rachel is very timid and shy. she often lacks self confidence in herself, leading her to battles that are made lebih difficult than they really need to be...
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So yeah it’s almost here, but there’s a few things to get across before we can start.

To take part in this free-world rp series, your character(s) must have met the character Sissy in at least one of these rps
~Bleeding Moon (link)
~Intruder In the House Yo! (link)
~OYO (link)
If anda have met Sissy in a different rp somehow that will count as well.

If anda have finished one of those roleplays, and not signed up yet, sign up here (link )*

The forum will begin the events, but it will not restrict the events to this rp’s forum only. Any and all roleplays that I answer atau create in the future will...
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(Author's Notes: "Quotations"=Someone talking.
Underlined words shows the focused upon character's thoughts. italicized words are used for notes and other aside voices, such as the one in Cyber's Nightmare.)

Zone: Green bukit, hill Zone
Countdown: 295 Days until Darkness
POV: Cyber the Echidna 3rd Person

Time: 2:01:50 AM (2:01 AM EST)
Date: 2/27/14

" Come to me, Cyber...come to me....come...and give me...YOUR SOUL!!!! "

Cyber awoke from this horrid nightmare, drenched in a cold sweat.

What...what WAS that...? That...that wasn't... he sat up slowly, rubbing his eyes. He then looked around his room,...
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...I'll tell anda right now, I've had a dangerous life up to this point, but I've managed to survive without powers, thanks to my friends, enemies, and pure luck. Sure, being a menyeberang, salib between a Cat and an Echidna, AND being a Bisexual, things can get a bit strange...but I've made it through, and now anda get to hear all about it. But we're not starting as late as you'd think...we're starting all the way back to when I was first born...back in Mystic Cave Zone...
All I know is this: When my mom, an Echidna at about 25, went into labor, my father, the fearless, 26 tahun old lion, put her on his...
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