~Tip number one
When I make an rp, I usually make it long atau medium so that it doesn’t look like a random/boring/quick idea, and to get rpers (along with other reasons), but sadly that comes with a problem.
A lot of times, if I make an rp (or other people I know do) It’ll say something like
“*SHRUBBERY HUNTER*”
“Your character hears a scream from a marshmellow. They ask the marshmellow what is wrong, and he says “MY SHRUBBERY IS GONE!” Do anda help him find the shrubbery?”
So what one would expect is a
“No”
“Yes”
“Pie”
“TALKING MARSHMELLOW”
“NII!”
atau SOMETHING that has to do with what just happened.
But instead, some people go “Character: *walking in the woods*” atau “Character: What’s wrong?” Why do they do this? Because they don’t read the whole thing. A lot of the time they say “I only read the important stuff” atau “I just read the title” atau “I wasn’t paying attention”. This messes up the rp, and makes it very confusing.
PLEASE PEOPLE! PLEAAAAAAAAASE read the whole thing. Sometimes I’ll be rping fifteen komentar into an rp and STILL be trying to tell them “THAT’S NOT WHAT IS GOING ON! WE’RE IN A FOREST NOT AN EGGSHELL!!”
~Tip number two
IMAGINATION!
Now in my opinion it’s the responsibility of the person who MAKES the rp to come up with most of the action scenes and dialog detail, but with both that person and the person they are rping with, anda should ALWAYS use your imagination in an rp.
Examples of what NOT to use
1. *attacks* Attacks? Attacks how? There could be an enemy that is water proof, and anda have ice, so if anda just go *attacks* it doesn’t accomplish anything. Also it makes it hard for the person to reply with something to counter atau continue with that attack. If that just kept going it would end like
*attacks*
*attacks back*
*attacks back harder*
*attacks and wins*
Which leads to gary-stu rping.
2. *…* Now someone else mentioned the infamous triple-dot-threat, but I’ll just refresh. DO NOT DO THIS! Unless it is COMPLETELY impossible for anda to make a move, like being knocked out atau something, DO NOT USE THIS.
Example
Character1: We should eat pie.
Character2: …
There are three things this can imply (and maybe more)
1. ) Your character dislikes pie.
2. )You’re not paying attention to the rp.
3. )You’re being lazy.
Unless you’re doing number one, anda don’t really have a good reason to do that. “…” Leads to REALLY boring rps, and then people don’t like rping with you.
4. BE DETAILED!
Being detailed makes things REALLY fun for both people. Now that doesn’t mean *shoots your character in the head, then kicks them, then eats pie, then flies off* That is gary-stu rp. What I mean is to do stuff like *Takes out gun and tries to shoot at your character* then wait… then when it’s your turn *kicks your character on the side of their leg* then wait your turn *eats pie* wait *tries to fly off*. NOTICE “TRY”. Try implies that anda are NOT a gary-stu. anda don’t have to say this all the time, but anda should do this when fighting atau stressed areas appear. When anda simply say “*Shoots then kicks then eats pie and flies off*” it implies that anda can do whatever anda want, and we don’t want that.
~Tip number three
USE WEAK CHARACTERS OFTEN
I’ve actually found that using characters that aren’t very strong, atau have no powers, to be lebih fun than powerful characters. Now this doesn’t mean BORING characters, just characters that aren’t all “I AM ALLPOWERFUL FOOL!”.
~Tip number three (part two)
Let your characters get whatever-ed. That includes
1. Controlled
2. Hurt
3. Slapped
4. Hugged
5. Flattered
6. Tackled
7. Shot
8. SHRUBBERIES FORCED DOWN THEIR THROATS!
Especially with rps that involve hypnosis, controlling, atau flirting, rps get REALLY fun. And anda CAN have your character NOT do these things if it goes against their powers, atau if it annoys anda to do it too much, but it IS fun, and it makes rps really funny a lot of the time.
Hope these helped.
NOW GO RP!
EAT PIE AND PROPSER!
OWLS X{D
When I make an rp, I usually make it long atau medium so that it doesn’t look like a random/boring/quick idea, and to get rpers (along with other reasons), but sadly that comes with a problem.
A lot of times, if I make an rp (or other people I know do) It’ll say something like
“*SHRUBBERY HUNTER*”
“Your character hears a scream from a marshmellow. They ask the marshmellow what is wrong, and he says “MY SHRUBBERY IS GONE!” Do anda help him find the shrubbery?”
So what one would expect is a
“No”
“Yes”
“Pie”
“TALKING MARSHMELLOW”
“NII!”
atau SOMETHING that has to do with what just happened.
But instead, some people go “Character: *walking in the woods*” atau “Character: What’s wrong?” Why do they do this? Because they don’t read the whole thing. A lot of the time they say “I only read the important stuff” atau “I just read the title” atau “I wasn’t paying attention”. This messes up the rp, and makes it very confusing.
PLEASE PEOPLE! PLEAAAAAAAAASE read the whole thing. Sometimes I’ll be rping fifteen komentar into an rp and STILL be trying to tell them “THAT’S NOT WHAT IS GOING ON! WE’RE IN A FOREST NOT AN EGGSHELL!!”
~Tip number two
IMAGINATION!
Now in my opinion it’s the responsibility of the person who MAKES the rp to come up with most of the action scenes and dialog detail, but with both that person and the person they are rping with, anda should ALWAYS use your imagination in an rp.
Examples of what NOT to use
1. *attacks* Attacks? Attacks how? There could be an enemy that is water proof, and anda have ice, so if anda just go *attacks* it doesn’t accomplish anything. Also it makes it hard for the person to reply with something to counter atau continue with that attack. If that just kept going it would end like
*attacks*
*attacks back*
*attacks back harder*
*attacks and wins*
Which leads to gary-stu rping.
2. *…* Now someone else mentioned the infamous triple-dot-threat, but I’ll just refresh. DO NOT DO THIS! Unless it is COMPLETELY impossible for anda to make a move, like being knocked out atau something, DO NOT USE THIS.
Example
Character1: We should eat pie.
Character2: …
There are three things this can imply (and maybe more)
1. ) Your character dislikes pie.
2. )You’re not paying attention to the rp.
3. )You’re being lazy.
Unless you’re doing number one, anda don’t really have a good reason to do that. “…” Leads to REALLY boring rps, and then people don’t like rping with you.
4. BE DETAILED!
Being detailed makes things REALLY fun for both people. Now that doesn’t mean *shoots your character in the head, then kicks them, then eats pie, then flies off* That is gary-stu rp. What I mean is to do stuff like *Takes out gun and tries to shoot at your character* then wait… then when it’s your turn *kicks your character on the side of their leg* then wait your turn *eats pie* wait *tries to fly off*. NOTICE “TRY”. Try implies that anda are NOT a gary-stu. anda don’t have to say this all the time, but anda should do this when fighting atau stressed areas appear. When anda simply say “*Shoots then kicks then eats pie and flies off*” it implies that anda can do whatever anda want, and we don’t want that.
~Tip number three
USE WEAK CHARACTERS OFTEN
I’ve actually found that using characters that aren’t very strong, atau have no powers, to be lebih fun than powerful characters. Now this doesn’t mean BORING characters, just characters that aren’t all “I AM ALLPOWERFUL FOOL!”.
~Tip number three (part two)
Let your characters get whatever-ed. That includes
1. Controlled
2. Hurt
3. Slapped
4. Hugged
5. Flattered
6. Tackled
7. Shot
8. SHRUBBERIES FORCED DOWN THEIR THROATS!
Especially with rps that involve hypnosis, controlling, atau flirting, rps get REALLY fun. And anda CAN have your character NOT do these things if it goes against their powers, atau if it annoys anda to do it too much, but it IS fun, and it makes rps really funny a lot of the time.
Hope these helped.
NOW GO RP!
EAT PIE AND PROPSER!
OWLS X{D
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How old are you?:
How messy is your room?:
How many brothers and sisters do anda have?:
Are your parents married atau divorced?:
What's your favorit color?:
How many chores do anda have?:
What's your favorit couple (from ANYTHING)?:
What's your opinion of me (please no severe haters T^T)?:
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AU: Thank anda MephilesTheDark for the monkey-thing! And oleh the way, this is not really me...
It was the oddest little thing...
A pineapple... With monkey limbs and a little monkey head. The eyes freaked most people out, though. They didn't blink. They were red with yellow outlining, and they followed people.
If people even came close to it, it would chuck vomit at them...
I was stupid enough to sneak up on it and touch it.
It sat on its weird hinggap, bertengger made of a broken concrete stair, watching others walk by. It slowly cocked it's head to the side. Creepy thing...
I slowly tip-toed up to it from behind. It turned it's head 360° to look at me. It shot vomit like a heat-seeking misil, rudal from its throat-hole. The vomit landed on my face. I myself vomited, but on the freaky monkey-thing... Its mouth was still open. It stared at me with almost flaming eyes. One twitched.
I suddenly heard a beeping.
Beep, beep, beep, beep...
Oh crap.
BLOOOOOSHHHH!!
It was the oddest little thing...
A pineapple... With monkey limbs and a little monkey head. The eyes freaked most people out, though. They didn't blink. They were red with yellow outlining, and they followed people.
If people even came close to it, it would chuck vomit at them...
I was stupid enough to sneak up on it and touch it.
It sat on its weird hinggap, bertengger made of a broken concrete stair, watching others walk by. It slowly cocked it's head to the side. Creepy thing...
I slowly tip-toed up to it from behind. It turned it's head 360° to look at me. It shot vomit like a heat-seeking misil, rudal from its throat-hole. The vomit landed on my face. I myself vomited, but on the freaky monkey-thing... Its mouth was still open. It stared at me with almost flaming eyes. One twitched.
I suddenly heard a beeping.
Beep, beep, beep, beep...
Oh crap.
BLOOOOOSHHHH!!
Not good enough to die with them,
Not good enough for death,
Better to be tortured my dear,
And Father knows best,
You think I'm dastardly,
That I've committed a crime,
I won't stop until I see anda breathe,
For the final time,
I may have killed them all,
All the ones anda love,
But just remember anda might see them,
When anda go above,
He's not here to save you,
Your precious crush,
When he hears your screaming,
He won't be quick to rush,
Goodbye my dear,
A very fond farewell,
You might go to heaven,
Yet anda might go to hell...
Mauri Higashi to Satsujin Higashi
Not good enough for death,
Better to be tortured my dear,
And Father knows best,
You think I'm dastardly,
That I've committed a crime,
I won't stop until I see anda breathe,
For the final time,
I may have killed them all,
All the ones anda love,
But just remember anda might see them,
When anda go above,
He's not here to save you,
Your precious crush,
When he hears your screaming,
He won't be quick to rush,
Goodbye my dear,
A very fond farewell,
You might go to heaven,
Yet anda might go to hell...
Mauri Higashi to Satsujin Higashi
This is actually inspired oleh an old artikel I made here about Horn's average day, I remade it and here it is! Enjoy.
The following takes place between 0 Hours and 2359 Hours
0000 - 0330
Sleep.
0330 - 0530
Shower.
0530 - 0750
Style Hair.
0750 - 0800
Beat Coro With A Blunt atau Dull Object While Eating apel, apple Jacks.
0800 - 1100
Get Pissed At The Local Bar.
1100 - 1230
Attempt To Drive Drunk.
1230 - 1231
Unsuccessful.
1231 - 1340
Realize It Was Unsuccessful.
1340 -1400
Return halaman awal From Police Station.
1400 - 1610
Clean The House After An apel, apple Jacks And Coro Related Incident.
1610 - 1730
Beat Coro With A Spiked atau Sharp Object.
1730 - 1800
Attempt To Relax.
1800 - 1802
Relax.
1802 - 1950
Flirt with (Wo)Men.
1950 - 2130
Sustain Serious Genitalia Damage.
2130 - 2200
Sex.
2200 - 2300
Realize Your Homosexuality.
2300 - 2359
Stay In The Closet
Lather, Rinse & Repeat.
The following takes place between 0 Hours and 2359 Hours
0000 - 0330
Sleep.
0330 - 0530
Shower.
0530 - 0750
Style Hair.
0750 - 0800
Beat Coro With A Blunt atau Dull Object While Eating apel, apple Jacks.
0800 - 1100
Get Pissed At The Local Bar.
1100 - 1230
Attempt To Drive Drunk.
1230 - 1231
Unsuccessful.
1231 - 1340
Realize It Was Unsuccessful.
1340 -1400
Return halaman awal From Police Station.
1400 - 1610
Clean The House After An apel, apple Jacks And Coro Related Incident.
1610 - 1730
Beat Coro With A Spiked atau Sharp Object.
1730 - 1800
Attempt To Relax.
1800 - 1802
Relax.
1802 - 1950
Flirt with (Wo)Men.
1950 - 2130
Sustain Serious Genitalia Damage.
2130 - 2200
Sex.
2200 - 2300
Realize Your Homosexuality.
2300 - 2359
Stay In The Closet
Lather, Rinse & Repeat.
acak flashbacks about Bieber opinions:
~At School~
Syd: I hate him! He sounds like a girl!
Aly B: Me too.
~At friend's~
Izzy: Justin's so cute!
Bre: Yeah!
~At my house~
Me: I dunno if I like his bernyanyi atau not...
*finds cinta Me oleh Justin Bieber*
...
*clicks* Me gusta.
*after brushing teeth*
I'm gonna finish my Gatorade!
*drinks*
FFFFFFFFTERRIBLE-but not as bad as jeruk, orange juice.
Yeah...super-duper bored...
OH! Btw, I'm thinkin' up an AWESOME new story! It's gonna be called...
The Christian Chronicles!
Yes, it is a Christianity-based story, about someone's struggle with faith and life. If anda are offended oleh it, I suggest anda not read it.
Cast:
Skiibe(skee-bee) Hone the Hedgehog
malaikat Andrews the Wolf
Tibeste Marcus the Creature
Mint the Cat-Dragon-Dog
lebih chars to come! :D
~At School~
Syd: I hate him! He sounds like a girl!
Aly B: Me too.
~At friend's~
Izzy: Justin's so cute!
Bre: Yeah!
~At my house~
Me: I dunno if I like his bernyanyi atau not...
*finds cinta Me oleh Justin Bieber*
...
*clicks* Me gusta.
*after brushing teeth*
I'm gonna finish my Gatorade!
*drinks*
FFFFFFFFTERRIBLE-but not as bad as jeruk, orange juice.
Yeah...super-duper bored...
OH! Btw, I'm thinkin' up an AWESOME new story! It's gonna be called...
The Christian Chronicles!
Yes, it is a Christianity-based story, about someone's struggle with faith and life. If anda are offended oleh it, I suggest anda not read it.
Cast:
Skiibe(skee-bee) Hone the Hedgehog
malaikat Andrews the Wolf
Tibeste Marcus the Creature
Mint the Cat-Dragon-Dog
lebih chars to come! :D
Lights flickered all around. " Tails," Teardrop said" We'll never make it. They'll find us and kill us." Tails berkata " No. We'll find a way out. I gotta plan."
As the sun bared down on their backs, Tear and Tails sneaked to the beach. " We'll have to swim." Tear berkata with a smile. " Uh... uh... uh..." Tails stammered. " What's wrong?" Tear asked. " Um... nothing." Tails said. Tear dived in the water. " Here goes nothing." Tails said. He followed in after her.
They cam to a small island. Tails looked terrified. Tear grinned."This is it. Calypso's island." They walked towards a garden. A small figure appeared. "Hello." she said. "Welcome,visitors." Tails and Tear asked in union:"Who...are you?"
"I am owner of this garden. Prisoner of this island. I am..."
WAIT TILL I FINISH THE WHOLE STORY. I MIGHT SEND IT TO GET PUBLISHED. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY!
~Teardrop
As the sun bared down on their backs, Tear and Tails sneaked to the beach. " We'll have to swim." Tear berkata with a smile. " Uh... uh... uh..." Tails stammered. " What's wrong?" Tear asked. " Um... nothing." Tails said. Tear dived in the water. " Here goes nothing." Tails said. He followed in after her.
They cam to a small island. Tails looked terrified. Tear grinned."This is it. Calypso's island." They walked towards a garden. A small figure appeared. "Hello." she said. "Welcome,visitors." Tails and Tear asked in union:"Who...are you?"
"I am owner of this garden. Prisoner of this island. I am..."
WAIT TILL I FINISH THE WHOLE STORY. I MIGHT SEND IT TO GET PUBLISHED. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY!
~Teardrop
This is the 10 kutipan that Danny use in his life and in his stories.
1. Most cant relive life...i relive all.
2. Finding your calling in life is easy... preforming it is the hard part.
3. No anda cant stop it...its too powerful for anda and me.
4. If we are mobians...are we like the humans.
5. Everyone has a power, a skill and a talent...be your own self...you will find it.
6. No one is good atau bad...they are the same thing.
7. Being a hero is hard but earning your reputation at the end is all i need.
8. He win ands we lose...but if we win we fight to win another day
9. Don't judge a hedgehog oleh its looks...judge it oleh what choices it chooses
10. Matter is in my heart...my soul...my world...all i need to do is to learn it more.
1. Most cant relive life...i relive all.
2. Finding your calling in life is easy... preforming it is the hard part.
3. No anda cant stop it...its too powerful for anda and me.
4. If we are mobians...are we like the humans.
5. Everyone has a power, a skill and a talent...be your own self...you will find it.
6. No one is good atau bad...they are the same thing.
7. Being a hero is hard but earning your reputation at the end is all i need.
8. He win ands we lose...but if we win we fight to win another day
9. Don't judge a hedgehog oleh its looks...judge it oleh what choices it chooses
10. Matter is in my heart...my soul...my world...all i need to do is to learn it more.