Sonic fan Characters Article: AN EXAMPLE OF A MARY-SUE

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posted by gyrothehedgehog

NAME: jeruk, orange the Hedgehog
GENDER: Male
POWERS: He can control fire, he can control ice, he can control electricity, he can control earth, he has super-speed, he can fly, he is super-strong and he is invincible
GIRLFRIENDS: Every girl in the series
LOOKS: An jeruk, orange hedgehog with black eyes
BACKSTORY: His hometown was destroyed oleh Eggman so now he wants revenge on him
SUPER FORM: His super form is darker jeruk, orange and he still has black eyes and ALL THE POWERS IN THE WORLD!!!OMG!!
HYPER FORM: His hyper form is exactly like his Super Form except he is neon orange
DARKSPINE FORM: His super form with white stripes and no pupils
DARK FORM: The same as his Darkspine form
WEREHOG FORM: He is exactly like Sonics’ except orange

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Eizabella the cute Tiger <3

added by StarAngle16

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"My Lament" (Free Request to the first person to guess which character is saying this)

posted by TakTheFox

I loved someone once, and I still cinta that same person. So why am I alone? Did she die? Is she with someone else? Quite frankly I don’t know.

I can see through the future and the past with ease, but if I were to do that with her future, to see what became, I might break. Will I find out that she was killed? Will I find out that she loved another? Will it be something worse? I cannot beruang it.

When I first met her I had already been in cinta with her, though quite frankly I was so arrogant and rash that I probably had no idea what the word meant at that point. But I soon learned that because...

Cliches. Why atau why not?

posted by NoctusLynx

Some people hate 'em, some people cinta 'em. Others simply don't give a damn. But what makes the cliche have such a mixed review? Why are there people who like it and cinta it? Let's find out.

First, we might want to find out what a cliche IS. A cliche is comparable to a stereotype to an extent. A cliche is something that is commonly repeated over and over and over and over and over and over and over and... anda get the idea. Here, I will address two cliches.

Character stereotypes are something we can't get around. Most stories are alegories, which are stories which the characters represent a part...

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Mustacheo Rants The Dark Character

posted by TakTheFox

Here,
We,
Go,

So yeah this topic’s been a long one coming. I’ll say right now, for quite a while now I’ve been very happy to see that there are few Dark Characters, and those that are there are done WELL. So this rant is not based on baru saja events, it is just advice.

So let’s try to define a dark character. They are basically any and/or all of the following.
~Broody
~Angsty
~A Daredevil
~Anti-Heroes
~Powerful
~Introvert
~Have a lot of secrets
~Hate everyone
~Act uncaring
~Or simply play the bad boy.

What’s wrong with this? Well since this is for Sonic Characters I’ll go with only Sonic-based parameters...

Contiuum Jump

posted by NoctusLynx

It was a dangerous business indeed. Whitman knew this. He knew this well. This kind of tourism would be dangerous, but if all the protocols were followed correctly, then there shouldn’t be a problem. At least this much he could say, but when dealing with something this large scale, safety precautions had to be taken to prevent the worst case scenario. The machine built oleh a worker called Sonia Rainsford, and she would be the one to test her own machine, be it to see it grow prosperous, atau to see their own world wiped out.

“Ms. Rainsford,” berkata Whitman as he stood in front of her. In Sonia’s...

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I got bored... again.

posted by NoctusLynx

"Hey, Gatage!" Menae shouted gleefully at a penyelidik, ferret not too far from us. The ferret, which was male, turned in response towards us.

"You seem ha- what's that?" Gatage asked Menae, refering to the canteen in her hands.

"A canteen," Menae answered. "You of all people should know."

"I knew it was a canteen. What I-"

"Why'd anda ask then?"

Was she like this all the time? I think I'm beginning to prefer the armory...

"If we knew of a way to send anda back, we would," Menae told me. I forgot once again that my thoughts were no longer personal. This was going to be a long, long day.

"Who are anda talking to...

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I got bored...

posted by NoctusLynx

I think I got it clear the first time we met, but just to be sure, I'll say it again: everyone has at least one characteristic in particular they can call their own. Yours may be different from mine. For example: I'm certain anda can't alter your structure on an atomic level to create anything anda wish with your body. I, however, can.

I'm used to transforming upon my own will, but the way I teleported was of a rather painful matter nonetheless. If anda want to disagree, anda obviously haven't had all your atoms ripped out of your body, and enduredcan attempt to have them placed back together hurriedly....

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Darren's Official Bio

posted by ShadowFan100

Character Chart
Character's full name: Darren D'Orsi (He had his last name changed to "Scythe" eventually)
Reason atau meaning of name: Darren means "Great One", so he was named for being the one who's "destined" to start a revolution (aka wipe out the Mobian Race)
Character's nickname: None
Reason for nickname: None
Birth date: 8/24/1951
Powers: Unknown...for the moment
Theme: None

Physical appearance
Age: 62 (in Shock's last saga, 90)
How old does he/she appear: Same
Weight: 52 pounds
Height: 7ft
Body build: slim
Shape of face: Old XD
Eye color: Navy blue
Glasses atau contacts: None
Skin tone: Tan, wrinkly
Predominant...

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Devilyn's Official Bio

posted by ShadowFan100

Character Chart
Character's full name: Devilyn Sierra kuda jantan muda, colt (Not joking! XD)
Reason atau meaning of name: None
Character's nickname: Demon
Reason for nickname: for his psycho half
Powers: Psychic (he can read minds and manipulate emotions)
Birth date: 7/30/1980

Theme: None

Physical appearance
Age: 33
How old does he/she appear: same age
Weight: 51 pounds
Height: 3ft 7in
Body build: Slim
Shape of face: n/a.
Eye color: Purple
Glasses atau contacts: None
Skin tone: Tan (his hands, feet and mouth)
Predominant features:
Type of hair: Thick
Hairstyle: Like Dyllon's kinda...several spikes running straight down his head.
Voice:...

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Chrome The Panther: Part 5: Final Battle.

posted by Dragonfruit44

Bard walked to the middle of Scaler Town's Town Square. Scar handed him a megaphone, from which Bard snatched from him and called into the bustling crowd," Hello citizens of Scaler Town! I am Bard, leader of The Wicked Ones and also your new ruler." Some people kept going on with their business and some stopped to listen to Bard and someone called to him," Yeah right! Even if anda tried, Rose and Thorn would stop you!" A lot of people agreed. Bard gave them a evil snicker," Rose? I've already taken care of her. Once I'm done, we'll be too strong for her to even try to stop us! Hahaha!!" People...

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Craiger Mini Character bio

posted by TakTheFox

Name: Craiger X
Age: going oleh Mobius Academy tahun Three logic, Craiger is…19
Species: Sand Fox
Nationality: Australian (Homeworld: Mobocan)
Build: Craiger is very fit and continues to increase in his strength with his training and workouts, though not obsessively.

Powers: None

Skills
~Combat: Craiger is very good with hand to hand combat, usually up close, and has some training in fencing, though not much. In combat he is usually goo with defense, and quick strong attacks, either to disable an opponent, atau to shove them away. He is also very sturdy, making it normally hard to flip him over, atau push...

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Why I'm saying No

posted by Evolia-Wulf

"Sorry to announce that I won't be able to make Starlight Accord. My apologies to those good people who donated their characters- but simply put- I just can't make the game. I promised atau offered things I realize yesterday I can't accomplish with such short knowledge of the subject. I still do plan making video games and the like, but at this very moment, anything I openly planned can't be accomplished with 'free' software.
"That's the main reason. There's also the fact I've been running into a few issues with activity and what not. I'm not as young as I use to be and my attentions are starting...

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Winners of the Eleina Drawing Contest!

posted by XxRocket95xX

Okay, since it only got two viewable entrants, here are your winners everyone. ^^

3rd Place: THERE WEREN'T ENOUGH ENTRANTS FOR A 3rd PLACE PRIZE

2nd Place: blossom1111, I will draw anda your request and give anda a prop later.

1st Place: TakTheFox, your image was (even though it was only out of two) the best, so I'll use it on every later RP with Eleina, give anda a prop for images, and draw anda your request. ^^

For anyone wanting to see the gambar placed into this contest, click the link below!
TakTheFox's Entry: link
blossom1111's Entry: link

I hope to see anda all again in my selanjutnya Drawing Contest!!! ^^

"The Missing" Part 4 - Finding Talia and Dave

posted by RawrMonster123

(Okay. So I've been forgetting about Jenny ALL THIS TIME, and I JUST noticed. Thanks for telling me, guys. XD Let's just say she was with them when they got out for JoJo and was in the car listening to musik when they were driving around.)

"Umm... Are anda done now, Casey?" Kyle asked in a shaky voice as he was still driving.

Oh yeah. Driving. Casey remembered. She turned back around and took the wheel. "Now does anyone have any idea where they live?" Casey asked.

"Wait... We came all this way and anda don't know?!" cepat, swift carped.

"Maybe a pedestrian knows," Swerve said.

"If they're even alive," Blake...

Twisted Realms Book 1: Elementania and Mobius Part 3

posted by CyberEchidna

Arriving into the base, a girl in berwarna merah muda, merah muda sweatpants and matching berwarna merah muda, merah muda leather jaket came running in, tackling Locke to the ground, and trying to shoot me with a Plasma Laser. "Would anda just relax, Trisha? He's with me." Locke sighed, pushing her off and standing up. I, personally, was lebih concerned about the walls that she hit, and my front spine that she singed.
"Oh, I'm sorry..." Trisha had sighed, "I guess I oughta ask before I shoot..." "YOU THINK?!" I exclaimed, pinching my blazing spine to put it out. "Cyber, this is Trisha...she's my younger sister, and she acts lebih like an annoying...

A Dark Story, a Dark Hedgehog. (6)

posted by Shadey_Grey

Raven: Well Shadey wont be menulis today, sorry.
Shadey: Say what?!
Raven: Ah! Shadey!
Shadey: *grabs him* Get of my computer and let me entertain.
Raven: Um... wahh!! *gets throwed across the room*

(An ally 2:19 pm)
"L-Look R-Raven... we d-didn't mean it!" the leader said. "Heh. anda say that all the time...," he closes his grip on the leader harder. "Now tell me why anda called me to come here?" his eyes tampilkan no signs of fear, nor anger. "W-We need y-you to h-help us...," he said. "Hm... fine," Raven drops the leader and steps back. "Tell me quickly Zala...," Raven crossed him arms, slowly letting...

A Dark Story, a Dark Hedgehog. (5)

posted by Shadey_Grey

Shadey: Ok... and... *whack* ow...
Jewel: Haha!
Shadey: Why anda little!
*Censored for your safety*

(Shadey's Mansion 12:49 pm)
Shadey stares out a window, her soft gaze never leaving the way she looked. Thoughts filled her head of curious things. Her room was her life. It explained her past, her present, and even her future. She had a nice wooden desk, on it, acak pieces of metals, leathers, and other fabics and items. Her tempat tidur had a nice silk sheet, though she didn't care much for it. A picture frame stood straight on a night stand. She pulled her gaze away from outside, and stared across the...

A Dark Story, a Dark Hedgehog. (2)

posted by Shadey_Grey

Shadey: Why do I get bored?
Shade: Just because... now write.
Shadey: I still hate you...

(Shadey's mansion 8:57 a.m.)
Shadey walks downstairs and walk around in circles. "Why do I live life like this... I'm no one here. No one cares... but I did and they were killed oleh those chaos users. Its the same everyday here on my own," she thinks. "These memories are painful to remember... but they don't leave me alone. My family... my friends... my life... gone.
Is there anyone like me?" She gets dressed and walks to the park.

(Central park 9:21 a.m.)
Shadey stares at the lake in the park. She stares until...

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My Villains and Anti-Heroes "Brief Descriptions"

posted by TakTheFox

Here's a daftar of the Villains (And Anti-Heroes) and a brief keterangan so they aren't too vague for ya

VILLAINS

Melcro
Some people say Dr. Melcro, some say Professor, Some say PHD, but who knows what exactly he is? Melcro is an overlander (human) antagonist who makes his work in Semretches mainly, mainly attempting to make armies of his many creations, and either selling them, atau keeping them for himself.
His protagonist characters is Rynk, who was the first, and one of very few “experiments” to have escaped him lebih than once.

Virus Elder Identity
Virus is the leader of the Anti-Identities....

Where The Hell i been?!?!

posted by LunaAcores94

lolz
all of yall are wondering where i been.
pft some of yall care atau don't care, i was wondering if i was suppose to put this on artikel atau on forum but eh.

I been addicted to Deviantart xD Since im always there.
Yes im still working on the comic still. It got lebih had to stay on it since i have college and that they want us to give us a holiday :/

im still going to be here but for fun :3
i total forgot i made a account here xD

so here's my deviantart user-----> LunarLuna94

Thank u for reading