zoom in of my ubah

the backgrounds pretty awful imo. the lines are all different measures, especially the purple one (or is it indigo idfk). it takes away from the others and domineers the whole thing
i suppose the persons decent although the super berwarna merah muda, merah muda glasses and red kemeja are making my head spin (then again i'm kinda going through a headache so yeah obviously anything would do that). i'm not really a fan of the platform atau whatever the character's standing on
either go easy on the palate you're using atau figure out a way to even out the overpowering difference between the background and parts of the char

of course anda could also disregard everything i berkata like who cares its your thing do what anda want

no i don't have an etch a sketch

I would really suggest using a base selanjutnya time anda do something like this. Bases help give anda a grid of what your drawing. Not using a base would make the art sloppy and kinda messy. This is just some advice

ITT: Highschoolers with tech electives.