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Is this a good poem and do anda think lebih could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke atau saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
anda had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
atau your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
anda berkata it was akward
And that anda still cinta me
But I think I pushed anda too far
What did I do
To make anda push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want anda in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for anda even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if anda want me back
Prove anda won't hurt me again
Never again anda will anda hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
anda fucked up









 MattxAliceNine posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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wolfgirl985 said:
That was good I dont think anda have to add anything else its perfect :)
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Thank you. Im glad anda liked it. i thought is was bad. sad i know
MattxAliceNine posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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your welcome it was sad, but it is good work :)
wolfgirl985 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Glad anda liked it
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