my little pony friendship is magic Article: CHAPTER 6

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posted by Canada24

"Having re read cupcake currently.. I still found it as serprisingly inspiring as I use too.. Particalary oleh the writer. Honestly one of the most inspirating writers I've seen for these types of stories.. His descriptions.. Simply amazing. In fact. In this chapter, I'm trying use the same type of moods atau whatever.."

CHAPTER 6:

When Twilight finally gained consciousness she found herself in a unnervingly dark room.

"Goodie, your awake" berkata a sudden, fairly deep voice. Witch sounded almost familiar to the young mare.

At that point, Twilight a shadowy figure within the dark, staring back her with glowing green eyes.

"What's going on here!?" Twilight cried, becoming lebih and lebih uncomfortable oleh the deep darkness surrounding her.

"Well basically. Your our prisoner" The voice replied, chuckling evilly.

Twilight tried moving, but something was against her, almost feeling like a straight jacket, witch only added to the uncomfort for the poor alicorn.

"Why can't I move!?" Twilight whimpered.

"Because Chrysalis felt that just a caged room, wouldn'. Be enough for someone like you.. anda 'disearved' something lebih special.. Don't anda feel honored, love?" The voice teased the frightened alicorn.

"What the hell are anda talking about!?" Twilight yelled at the mysterious figure.

"Now now.. No need for such language.. It's not very lady like, darling" The mysterious voice teased.

Again Twilight to get away, but was glued in place, and she still didn't know why, and it was scaring the poor mare.

"Here hun.. Let me shine some 'light' on the operation" the mystery voice said, and suddenly the lights came on, and showcased the whole room.

Even in the light, much of the room still seemed covered in darkness. And it was still unnerving for poor Twilight.

In the middle of it was a large cage that covers almost the entire room.

But the rest of the room was actually very boring, it was all cement.

But why was Twilight seeing it all, backwards? And on the ceiling?

Like Celestia in 'Canterlot Wedding', Twilight discovered herself inside a jeruk nipis, kapur green goo cacoon, witch was why she was unable to move, but unlike Celestia, Twilight still had her head sticking out.

"What is this!?" Twilight cried.

"Duaa.. Your prison cacoon" berkata the mystery voice again.

Twilight looked over, finally revealing it was Ditto, hovering close to her.

"Whatever your up too!.. anda and Chrysalis aren't getting away with it! Others will come for me!" Twilight cried.

Ditto laughed. "Oh don't worry about that.. How long do anda think we've been doing this"

"What are anda talking about!?" Twilight cried frightenedly.

Ditto laughed again.

"Think about it.. All those kidnappings. We're do think we're getting all those recruits" Ditto berkata sadistically.

"Ne-... anda MONSTERS!" Twilight cried out.

"Haha. Thank you" Ditto laughed evilly.

tailsfan111 and NocturnalMirage like this

NocturnalMirage Haha, sweeeet!!! You conveyed the atmosphere very well, I love it. It was also enjoyable that you focused on Twilight's point of view. The reader would probably knew the mystery voice was Ditto, but Twilight couldn't so, excellent writing. Can't wait for the next one!

Canada24 Awesome.. And I hope my it was cool trying to be like the writerI mentioned

NocturnalMirage Yeah, definitely! One of my teachers said to me in Creative Writing Class: Don't "tell" the reader, "show" it to them! And it works! You made it work too, so keep it up! :)

Canada24 Cool.. Awesome

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The truth about queen Chrysalis' Life: PART 1

posted by soomin1208

Yes, yes. queen Chrysalis may be evil....but she was not always evil. I had a meeting with queen Chrysalis, and....her life was completely ruined when she was only 10. Lets start....

A loooooooong time ago, when Celestia, Luna, Discord, Cadence, Chrysalis, and Sombra were only fillies in school, Chrysalis was a beautiful alicorn. She wasn't evil at all. They all went to the same school, and the same class (3rd grade). Nopony had their cutiemarks yet. Lots of colts loved Chrysalis because of her sweetness, and beauty. But for some reason, Cadence hated her.

In class, with Celestia, Luna, Sombra,...

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Golden Iris part 5

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Con met up with the M.I.3 agent, and it was Fenix Lighter.

Con: Hi Fenix.
Fenix: Didn't know I'd be doing a mission with anda Con. How are ya?
Con: Good. I see anda have another bad car.
Fenix: The EMC tester? It hasn't let me down yet.
Con: Good. Those things tend to break down.

The two friends drove away, but when they left Charleen arrived. Then their car broke down.

Fenix: I can fix it. Wrench
Con: *hands wrench* What do anda know about the mexicans?
Fenix: I know that they hate germans like me, so I can't stay long. Screwdriver
Con: *hands screwdriver* How close can anda get me?
Fenix: To a cemetary....

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Hedgehog In Ponyville One Last Time part 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Another title screen

I've made several enemies, been in many wars, and countless battles, but this will be intense. It all started on March 13, 2025 when King Sombra was figuring out a way to destroy Equestria. He had something very big planned after losing the crystal empire.

King Sombra: Finally, time to test the time machine. *travels back into time*

November 23, 2012

Nazi Leiutenant: They went into a place called Equestria.
Robotnik: Then lets go!
King Sombra: Wait!
Robotnik: What do anda want?
King Sombra: I heard you're trying to destroy a hedgehog correct?
Robotnik: Ja, and?
King Sombra: I want to help you. Follow...

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Score has gone missing part 3...........We gotta rescue her!

posted by applejackrocks

Back with the story......

All the little ponies headed to Nikki's farm, because they knew they would find something militaryish to put on.

Pacifica: Oh my, my, my! What kind of house is this?!
Azura: This, is called a barn.
GW: She's right, right now, we're in a barn.
Pacifica: Ewww! Dirt! I stepped on dirt! AHHHH! *faints*
MH: Seriously?!?! She faints because of dirt?!?
Nikki: Eeyup.
Stormy: Yes.
CS: True.
Azura: Look girls! I found a military uniform! (Holds uniform up to everypony)
CS: Whoa...
GW: AWESOME!
MH: Cool!
Nikki: *chuckles* well would ya look at that! Azura found my halloween costume Ah wore...

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my little pony:tree friends are magic chapter1

posted by flippy_fan210

Flippy(not flipped out)

Intro:this is my first crossover fanfic with 2 cartoons, it probably isn't that great.

Chapter 1:Flip out
It was a normal hari for twilight sparkle, Spike was doing chores and she was getting ready to go to one of Pinkie pie's parties. There was someone new in ponyville, and from what Twilight heard from Pinkie, he's pretty cool. She was walking to sugarcube corner nopony was outside, which meant Pinkie had invited everypony in ponyville. When she got to sugarcube corner the party was in full swing, all the party food was out and there were plenty of games and music, typical Pinkie pie party....

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Twilight's Adventure In Darkness Part 1

posted by Mylittlecute12

Twilight was studying on a normal hari when suddenly all the lights went out.
When Twilight looked outside everything was dark!
How could this be! berkata Twilight.
Twilight went outside to see what was causing the darkness.
Maybe Zecora can help me! berkata Twilight.
So Twilight Sparkle was heading to the Everfree Forest to find Zecora.
It was dark but Twilight wasn't afraid she was running when suddenly she finds a green unicorn trapped in a hole.
I will help anda berkata Twilight.
So Twilight pulls the Green unicorn up from the hole.
I am zamrud, emerald and thank anda so much berkata the green unicorn.
Your welcome berkata Twilight.

To be continued........................

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A Canterlot Wedding - Review

posted by StarWarsFan7

There was nothing entirely wrong with this episode. Afterall, it was a season finale. It had awesome songs: B.B.B.F.F, This hari Arias, Love is in Bloom. My favorit out of those songs is This hari Arias. It has great vocals provided oleh Princess Cadance and queen Chrystalis. Speaking of, I want to marry Shining Armor's voice atau someone with his voice. It was perfect. I swear I died when I heard him say, "Twilee[/i]. I thought it was very cute how he and Twilight Sparkle were so close before she came to Ponyville. It was sweet of him to cinta Twilight Sparkle even though she was upset with him...

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My fan-pony's cutie-mark story(Electra)

posted by shadowknuxgirl

~Just another lonely filly~

(Note: This is told from Electra's point of view.)

I sighed as I slowly trotted across the clouds. Again, I was alone. I had friends, sure, but they weren't BEST friends. I always thought the reason that I didn't have best friends was because of the way I looked. My mantel was the same color as Nightmare Moon's. Most filly's had bright, vibrant colors. But I was pitch black. My mane was always frizzy, no matter how hard I tried to brush it. Though its dark and light yellow warna were lebih inviting, it didn't help much. Though on dimmer days, atau when it was night, atau any dark area, my mane and...

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The problem with Applebloom: Part 7

posted by shadowknuxgirl

"All done!" The filly snickered.

"What are we gonna do first, what are we gonna do first?" Applebloom asked rapidly, unable to wait any longer. "Let's see here,..." Twilight said, opening a "Sleep-over" guide-book. "How about a make-over?" Twilight asked. "Make-overs? Hmm..." Applebloom stated as she began to think, "OK! But anda go first!" Twilight got some make-over supplies out from the closet and brought them over to Applebloom. "Alright!", Twilight said, "Make me look prettier than Rarity!" After a while, Applebloom finally finished her "masterpiece". "All done!" The filly snickered. "Take a look!" Applebloom couldn't...

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The problem with Applebloom:Part 3

posted by shadowknuxgirl

"What could be more fun than organizing books?"

"Twilight, anda lied to me!" Applebloom moaned "This is boring!" "BORING?!" Twilight exclaimed, "What could be lebih fun than organizing books?" Applebloom gave her an "Are-you-serious?" look. "Um, how about NOT organizing books?" Applebloom stated, as if the answer couldn't be lebih obvious. "Fine, we can take a break, what do anda want to do?" Twilight sighed. "Hm..." Applebloom thought for a brief moment,"can we get some ice cream?" "Ice cream?" Twilight thought aloud, "I guess that wouldn't be so bad, sure!" But as soon as Twilight opened the door, Applebloom rushed out of the house faster...

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Fluttershy

posted by StarWarsFan7

When Fluttershy is first introduced in the series, she barely manages to tell Twilight Sparkle her name out of shyness, going so far as to be reduced to whimpering in fear. However, she becomes very conversational when she notices Spike the baby dragon, and implores him to tell her "everything" (which he does), all the way to Twilight's residence.

She is terrified of full grown naga and repeatedly freezes in place when she and her friends go on an expedition to confront a dragon in Dragonshy. Twilight Sparkle encourages her and tells her that her understanding of binatang will come in handy...

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The Cutie Mark Chronicles

posted by StarWarsFan7

♥Apple Jack♥
Before she became one of her family's best apel, apple gatherers, applejack tried her hoof at the sophisticated life. applejack leaves the farm and heads to the big city of Manehattan to gabung her Aunt and Uncle Orange, who promised to shape up the little filly into that of elegance. During an evening get-together with some of the other regal Equestrians, AJ tells them how much she loves the city with her new high-society accent, but she causes a raise of eyebrows when she mentions the life she left behind. Thankfully, her awkward moment is interuppted as makan malam arrives. But it turns...

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The last solstice - Chapter 43: The solstice

posted by NocturnalMirage

The last solstice

AUTHORS NOTE: Since I had to explain a lot of stuff here, this is the longest chapter I've ever written. Just wanted to let anda know, so be prepared! In order to get into the atmosphere, let me recommend anda a few songs for this part of the story, which goes well with the plot.

1: Pitch Black Theme

link

2: Two Steps From Hell - Archangel

link

3: The Lion King: Battle at Pride Rock/Cleansing Rain/The Ascension

link

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Chapter 43: The solstice

Nocturnal Mirage lost track of time as he was sobbing violently over the lifeless body of his beloved Princess. He still could not comprehend...

Equestria Girls: pelangi Rocks Toys

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MLP batman

added by AlexMusicLover

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Sweet Apple-Dash Acres ch. 1 prt. 2 apel, apel, apple club

posted by Dragon4322

"I can do this on my own!"

When applejack noticed that her mare friend saw that she wasn't doing well, she came over to AJ. "Um...you..sure anda don't need my help?" "NO!" applejack yelled where every pony heard her. pelangi Dash felt embarrassed having her mare friend frustrated this way. "Here AJ, let me..." The Pegasus took Apple's club and placed it in the farmer's hooves. "I can do this on my own!!" She shouted at the pony trying to help her. At this moment all the other ponies stopped and watched as this was happening. A staff pony came up to applejack and said, " Miss, if anda can't control your anger I will have to escort anda off the course" oleh this time applejack had no patience for any pony telling her what to do. She pointed the club at the pony's snout while angrily yelling "if anda keep telling me.." "Um AJ, lets just leave". "No! I wanna finish this dang hole!!! AND NO pony IS GONNA TELL ME OTHERWISE!!!" ......