my little pony friendship is magic Article: My little Brony pt4

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posted by nerdman101

I woke up to see Twilight Sparkle getting ready to go somewhere...
hey Twilght whats up? I said,Im just gettin ready to go to see pelangi Dash and pick apples with AJ,wanna come? she asked,yeah sure! I berkata with glee,as I combed my mane.
We left and went to see pelangi Dash.....
She was on a awan in the distance,hey twilight berkata as we walked under her cloud,hey Twilight she berkata with a smile!,Hey she berkata to me,whats your name?This is a human who was teleported to the ponyverse through a electronic device!,his name is jake!Hey pelangi dash whats up?,nothing much,just chillin on a cloud...,Twilight asked if pelangi Dash wanted to come and pick some apples with AJ,Yes she berkata as we started walking to AJ's house...

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NocturnalMirage Okay, the pacing is good so far, but if you allow me to give you a friendly advice: you gave us a good ammount of exposition, you set off the characters well. Now it's time to give more dynamics to them, make them do stuff, implement a little "action", create obstacles for them to overcome, introduce an antagonist, etc. oh an most importantly, keep up the good work! :)

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Elements of Harmony

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Pinkie's special ability

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Eclipse

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Pinkie...

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derpy hooves

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pony pony pony pony

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Ponies!

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Lauren Faust with her Plushie

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lebih pony

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Remember her?

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My Little Aqua Teen Hunger Froce

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PONIES!!!

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lebih pony PICTURES!

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My Little Chibis

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Expected Ponies #9: Unknown Baby Unicorn

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A Canterlot Wedding

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A Canterlot Wedding!

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GMod MLP pics :3

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Necromorphs in Ponyville

posted by SomeoneButNoone

Necro Pony :P

Normal In Ponyville...
Twilight - Dan sorry but anda must get out from libary
Dan - yea yea I going sleep on jalan, street see anda soon
Dan get out from Libary and pindah to park
Dan - ahh green everywhere...
Vinyl - Hi Dan... why anda lie on grass
Dan - 4 worlds : I, Dont, Have, Home...
Vinyl - hey why anda dont tell me anda can sleep in my and Octavia hose
Octavia - ... ok ....
Dan -Thanks...
Dan, Octavia and Vinyl come to hose
Vinyl - we have only 2 beds well... anda going sleep with me
Dan - ...cool...
PinkiPie - HEEEEELLLLLPPPPP
Dan - WHAT THE!!!
Everyone come down and see Pinkie and somethink like monster
Dan - What...

Awesome pony pics

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