menulis for the Joy

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"Evangeline! It's time to get up!" Mom called from the hallway. I grumbled and pulled the blanket over my head. Just five lebih minutes... five lebih hours would be nice...

"Evan," my older brother Joshua poked his head into my room. "Didn't anda hear Mom? anda need to get up." I growled at him.

"Get out," I squeezed my eyes shut tighter.

"Why don't anda try and make me?" he taunted. I grabbed my bantal and flung it across the room at him. He laughed and ran out of the room. Not having anything to...

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Chapter 18
    A sleepless night
    I spent the rest of the vision following Dorothy and I, smiling at the good ole times. oleh the time the vision was done it was dark outside and I was exhausted. I called the doctor to notify him that I was okay, and after a few menit I had hung up, finished showering, and was ready for bed.
    But I couldn’t sleep, I kept thinking back to those...

Dear Sam,
I've been see my therapist - never thought I would be saying those words - for a while now. She berkata that I was making a major break through. I do not know why she believes that since u barely say a word during the sessions, I barely do anything during the sessions.

I had to miss a few days from work so right how my boss is on the verge of killing me. His birthday is coming yo so I will try to throw him a surprise party. Ha, can anda imagine my boss at a party?!

My boss is about as all as a 13 tahun old . He has a tangled beard and beady green eyes, he use to have a full head of brown...

I was trying to reach the sky
I was trying to fly
That was my dream
And anda made it my fault

It has taken all my life…
Staying away from you…
Thought I then can survive without you
Nothing has helped me to forget
Everything I cinta reminds me in you
And to act like I’ve never known you…
There’s no way
………………………

How would I ignore your smile?!
How can I forget who has created me?!
The one who has changed my life
The one who has been always beside me…

Don’t ask me to pindah on
Because you’ve never taught me how to do that
………………………

Nothing I need when you’re beside...

Part 8! I don't own any of these pictures! Most come from Alegrias.me Hope anda feel inspired! Down here is a song I wrote called Breathe, hope anda enjoy it.

Breathe
    Verse 1:
    I wake up today with a smile on my face, and I return back disappointments are made. Where did I go wrong? Did I even try? This world is gonna bring me down, bring tears to my eyes.
    What’s this weird feeling? I want it to go. I can’t believe that life can a cruel black hole. Time just seems to fade away, days become weeks, and I’m still, yes I’m...

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Chapter 17
    Happy times
    “How can anda not be happy, this is our first sister-sister tradition in like…ever?” My eleven tahun old self asked my sister, giving her a look like I thought she was mental.
    Dorothy laughed, a huge smile on her face. “Your such a loser Des, we hang out all the time.”
    “Not all the time,” I insisted. “And this is the first time we planned this to do and do again every year.”
    Dorothy...

so I see anda guys menulis alot of wonderful poems
so I just want to share this with anda
I saw alot of anda menulis in the new poetry style and no one have ever wrote in the old style ,maybe cause it's only populer in where I live ,but here's a part of my fav poem ,it won't be easy to read it for the first time ,I hope I can translate it right ,it called "be panacea " :

1-weak your feeling of cinta when it fall in sleep without people senses they would be like dolls

2-love ,the hut became a bright kastil, castle hate,the world became a dark prison

3- the life gave anda all her treasures don't hold it back...

September 1

Blair was almost out the door of her grandma's apartment. She was dressed and all set for today's activities. As soon as she opened the door her dad was sitting in his car. He was debating whether atau not to go in. He had unfortunately heard the door click open and was out his car in a second. Blair had no choice but to continue walking to her car.
"Blair," called her dad. "Just listen to me. I can explain."
Anger filled her. "Explain what? That anda cheated on my mom with her sister? What could anda possibly say that could change everything? I bet the selanjutnya words that will come out...

I was in my house waiting my father and my brother
I heard something ,it's calling me since I was a kid ,and it always say "weak up" even If I'm not sleeping
I want to leave my house ,I opened the door and felt the air touching my hair ,the sun was cold in my cheeks ,it was summer ,and I feel the cold winter coming and escaping autumn
I walked away from my house , this is the first time I feel my house is very hunting that way ,while I was walking there ,I realized one thing and it was the most important thing I should realized in my dark life
I'm now a real human ,I were always close to live...