putri disney Article: cinderella & cinderella (part 1)

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posted by deedragongirl

The 2 Ellas!

Once upon a time, the disney Princess visit their goddaughter name Dee in Malaysia. One day, they decide to do some window shopping at a new shopping mall, when a door knock is heard.
Dee opens the door, and was surprise to see a familiar face at her door. "Hi there, may I come in?" asks the young girl. Who was only in her early 20's, this young beautiful blonde haired girl is also very pretty. She's also a French.
"Hi Dee Dee, who is it at the-", asks Cinderella, stopping dead at her track. "Hi Cinderella, remember me?" asks the young girl happily as she enters, the other princesses went to main entrance and are astonished at the scene. "Who are you?" asks Merida in her thick Scottish accent.
"Oh! anda don't know who I am? My name is Ella, also known as Cinderella!" replied Ella. At this point, all of the other princesses and Dee gasp in horror. "I knew it! I knew you'd come!" balasa cinderella sadly.
"Cinderella, anda never told us about this?" exclaimed Dee Dee. "Oh don't worry, I bet she wants to surprise you! Anyway, I'm inviting anda all to my movie selanjutnya month! Kit will be coming in anytime soon to see anda all." balasa Ella.
"We heard about it, please come in the kitchen, and we can talk about it." replied Anna and Elsa. Dee and the princesses guide them to the kitchen, they talk about the movie with Ella while cinderella goes upstairs and confronted Prince Charming, who was having a shower.
"We should have told them last night, Prince Charming!" told cinderella in tears. "I didn't expect them to come." balasa Prince Charming angrily, it seems that their relationship has took a turn for the worse. Since their popularity is dying!
The other princesses including Ella and Dee, go upstairs to find out what is happening. They managed to calm the two parties down and go downstairs to meet Prince Kit.
The other princesses and Dee talked to them, while cinderella and Prince Charming pack their things. They will be leaving back to their native France, knowing that they like their life-action counterpart will have lebih success than them. In order not to disappoint their guest, they stayed for dinner.
After dinner, Dee Dee asks Prince Charming and cinderella into the room. They look at each other nervously, worried that Dee Dee will upset about their argument earlier on.

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PrincessAyeka12 I remember this now. I read the original. It seemed rushed. This is lighter which is good. You've got a few mistakes. So "you'll" should be [b]you'd[/b], "confronts" should be [b]confronted[/b], "manage" should be [b]managed[/b] and lastly "stay" should be [b]stayed[/b]. "They will be leaving back to their native France, knowing that they like them." This sentence doesn't make sense. Unless you've done a prequel fan fiction explaining the origins behind your original character = Dee Dee. I'd suggest somewhere explaining her background. Like a more detailed explanation about how she's related to Cinderella enough to become her god daughter or how Cinderella came to realise she had a god daughter. Just so the reader understands Dee Dee's role in the fan fiction. "One day, they decide to do some window shopping, when a door knock is heard." I don't understand this. How can you window shop inside a house? I think you meant [b]They went into town to do some window shopping and then they decided to walk back. They had only been home a few minutes when they heard a knock at the door.[/b]

deedragongirl ^^ No problem!!! Yes, that was what I meant!!!!!

PrincessAyeka12 Oh yes and "astonish" should be [b]astonished[/b]. Okay I'm done. :)

deedragongirl ^^ Thank you!! I love you!!!

PrincessAyeka12 No problem. I like helping if I can.

Princess Rose Red: Daughter of Snow White & Prince (Part 10-FINAL PART)

posted by sweetie-94

There was a lot to be done in 7 days, the invitations had to be sended out, the wedding outfits had to be fixed and so on. But Rose Red and Harold wheren't stressed, they knew they could fix everything in 7 days.

And so the hari came when Rose Red's and Harold's wedding was going to be held, Rose Red's wedding dress was white with bunga and the dress was poofy just like a ballgown. She had bunga in her hair which made her look even lebih beautiful.

Now Rose Red walked into the church where the wedding was going to be held, there Harold stood and waited on her, he looked so handsome and Rose...

Alexandra and the angsa, angsa, swan (Part 2)

posted by sweetie-94

And so Alexandra's journey to find the wand that belonged to the witch began. She left early in the morning and began walking into the forest.

Julia was right, the forest was very dark and Alexandra wanted to just leave that forest very soon, she was terrified and felt as if she was completely lost. She was so confused that she suddenly fell over a huge stone and wounded her knee and her leg, but she kept on running in hope to find somewhere to stay and someone that could take care of her. But suddenly she started to feel dizzy and felt as if she was going to faint at any menit and a few minutes...

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"If anda can dream" lyrics

posted by rapounzel97

Lyrics to If anda Can Dream :
(Ariel)
There is a world where hope
And dreams can last for all time
I wonder this place to go
You know it
When your jantung will find

(Jasmine)
Hearing our song as old as rhyme
Hold my hand we're gonna fly
While a magic ride
Is just a ciuman away

[Chorus]
If anda can dream for wishful making
On a bintang is coming through

(Pocahontas)
The warna of the wind will lead
My jantung right back to anda

Cos if anda can dream,
Reflections in a diamond sky,
Come shining on through

(Aurora)
Romance will always be so new
And cinta will save the hari
If anda can dream

(Snow White)
Someday...

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Melody's Nanny Chapter 12

posted by faya27

Chapter 12

A few days later, Eric and Melody had a brief meeting with the bullies, their parents, and the principal in the hallway. The parents of Harry, Anna, and Joey were shocked that they would display such despicable behavior. The principal gave them a speech of how rude it is to make fun of someone's family members and family history. Harry, Anna, and Joey begrudgingly berkata sorry and they won't bother Melody anymore. After the meeting, everybody left feeling satisfied. Even though Melody feels safe, she is still afraid that they might bother her again. Rose and Omar told her that they'd...

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A princess nobody knew chapter 3

posted by PeterPansgirl12

Even though nobody is membaca this I still feel like continuing it.

Adella's POV
I ran down the steps. "I'm gonna be late!" I exclaimed. The ball had already started and I was fully in my dress, tiara and glass shoes.
I bumped into Sir Peter on the way down. "Sorry, sir" I mumbled.
"Quite alright... where are anda going?" he asked.
I glanced up at his face "The ball... I'm uh late"
He smiled warmly "I thought a princess is never late everyone else is early".
"Thats not the case today" I answered trying to fix my hair,it had toppled down out of its bun.
"Sir, do I look presentable?" I asked him.
Sir...

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My version of Cinder(h)ella-part 6

posted by Jamie38459

Scene 12- Outside.

Rodney: Now look what you've done anda idiots!

Soilder: Hey! Dont anda know that that spy is... a spy from the evil witch Stelainia.

Rodney: How do anda know?

Soilder: She flew on a freekin flyin carpet bed
thingy.

Rodney: *Sarcasm* Oh wow, that is sooo reasonable.

Knight 1: Dude, are anda ok?

Knight 2: Yea, *Grabs ketopong, helm when Charles stops him before he puts it back on*

Charles: Hold it rite there.

Knights: Eh?

Charles: *Talks 2 self* This girl... could she be? *Speaks up* I have decided that the girl who fits into this ugly lookin helmet, shall be my bride.

All but Charles: WHAT?

Kuffy:...

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My version of Cinder(h)ella-Part 2

posted by Jamie38459

Scene 4- The attic at Stellas house.

Narrator: Hellas life had been miserable ever since then. She had to clean Stellas(and the stepsisters) clothes, feed them, and some other chores. Hella never went 2 school, learned anything but serve the stepmom and stepsisters(who have no life), atau made any human friends. But they would go to church(thats where Hella learned all of the bad words), the bingo parlor(4 old people), and even at the mall where Stella would buy pretty clothes for herself and her daughters, while she gives Hella a maids outfit and makes poor Hella buy groceries, cleaning supplies,...

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Chapter 3-History class

posted by MadameLee

It was a regular looking room with desks. The only thing odd about this room was a little bird house with an owl perched on the hinggap, bertengger outside of the house. The kids, including Cindy sat down at desks. A man with a long white beard came into the classroom and berkata "Hello I'm Mr. History. I will be teaching anda about history."

The man started drawing on the chalkboard "Once a long time yang lalu people told each other myths since there wasn't yet the concept of science. One of the stories was Psyche and Eros. This is an earlier basis of which story?" A scantily dressed blond girl raised her hand and...

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Kingdom's End - Part One

posted by awkwardanna

Author's Note: The basic plot of this story is that all the princesses live in kingdoms surrounding each other, and all the villains band together to start a man-made sort of apocalypse that the princesses and some of the princes/sidekicks have to band together to save their kingdoms. Sort of a twisted fairytale sort of thing, but a bit lebih light. It's complicated.

Anna's Pov

The storm swirled around Anna, her eyes stinging with the icy snow that landed all around her. Her feet, still in her slippers from the night before barely clung to her feet as she trudged through the snow, tears rolling...

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Lines to tangled part two

posted by THEDisneyFreak

tangled Part Two
Rapunzel: AHH!
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Rapunzel: Okay okay, I've got a person in my closet. Person in my closet. I've got a person in my closet! Haha! Too weak to handle myself out there, huh mother? Well, tell that to my frying pan.
Mother Gothel: Rapunzel! Let down your hair!
Rapunzel: One moment Mother!
Mother Gothel: I've got a big surprise!
Rapunzel: I do too
Mother Gothel: Oh, I bet mine is bigger!
Rapunzel: I seriously doubt it.
Mother Gothel: I brought back parsnips, I'm going to make hazelnut sup for dinner, your favorite. Surprise!
Rapunzel: Well mother, there's something...

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Which disney Princess place I want switch?

posted by bluerose777

Which disney Princess has best life?
I will choose in which DP life I want life.
I will rank:
Personality
Voice (speaking and singing)
Looks
Her house
Name
Her wardrobe
Her sidekicks
Her boyfriend
Her parents

12.
Snow White
I want have: Her princess dress and nothing more

11.
Mulan
I want have: her parents

10.
Tiana
I want have: her parents and few dresses

9.
Cinderella
I want have: her looks, voice and few dresses

8.
Merida
I want have: her personality, maybe voice and parents oh, and maybe her name

7.
Moana
I want have: her personality, voice, parents and maybe looks

6.
Pocahontas
I want have: her personality, voice,...

My favorit disney Princess Songs

posted by bluerose777

17. Noble Maiden Far-Merida
16. I'm Wishing-Snow White
15. I wonder-Aurora
14. When will my life Began?-Rapunzel
13. Almost there-Tiana
12. Someday my prince will come-Snow White
11. So this is love-Cinderella
10. Cinderella-Cinderella
9. A dream is a wish your jantung makes-Cinderella
8. Reflection-Mulan
7. Just around a riverbend-Pocahontas
6. Coluors of the wind-Pocahontas
5. How far i'll go-Moana
4. Belle-Belle
3. Something new there-Belle
2. Part of your world-Ariel
1. A whole new world-Jasmine

My favorit disney Princess speaking voices

posted by bluerose777

12. Snow White
It's childlish and not mature
11. Merida
Itsn't very pretty
10. Pocahontas
Is boring and sounds too old
9. mulan
It's pretty but sounds to odd
8. Rapunzel
It's cool but a little bit childlish
7. Moana
I like her voice but it's too adult
6.Tiana
I like it but I prefer my puncak, atas 5
5. Cinderella
Very pretty and mature
4. Jasmine
Stunning but too adult
3. Ariel
Very pretty but a little bit childlish
2. Belle
I like her voice but i prefer my #1
1. Aurora
Her voice it's perfect (shade only in speaking version)

My favorit disney Princess bernyanyi voices

posted by bluerose777

12. Snow White
Her voice is childlish and annoiyng
11. Aurora
I'm not a fan of opera voices
10. Merida
It's pretty voice but it's child voice
9. Rapunzel
I like her voice but I think it's a little bit childlish and she sings to fast
8. Tiana
Her voice it's to entertaining
7. Cinderella
It's pretty voice but I like selanjutnya 6 more
6. Mulan
I know she and melati have the same voice actress but i like melati voice more
5. Pocahontas
Very pretty voice but too adult
4. Moana
Beatiful but it has some bad parts
3. Belle
Absolutly stunning voice but I prefer my puncak, atas two
2. melati
Gorgerous voice but can't beat my #1
1. Ariel
Ariel voice is definitly most beatiful voice

Snow White

added by jlhfan624

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P/VOTM: Why we cinta Maleficent

posted by BB2010

Not too many people diserahkan why they cinta Maleficent so I apologize for this short article

I cinta how she's so evil she doesn't hesitate to curse a baby just because she wasn't invited to a party. She's even so petty and evil that when it looks like she might win she creates a dinding of thorns and becomes a dragon just so Aurora won't wake up -BB2010

Her character desain is great, Eleanor Audley is perfect for the role, she is intimidating yet elegant and has some pretty cool powers (including being able to turn into a dragon). -LMH5113

Her voice is PURE evil! -deedragongirl