Well..
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 atau 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, atau giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till selanjutnya time.
Live long and prosper!
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 atau 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, atau giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till selanjutnya time.
Live long and prosper!
On a warm hari in jasper park lilly went with garth to watch out for enimies around the border.
Lillys pov
Lilly:Garth when can we go halaman awal im sleepy
Garth:we can go when the sun goes down
Lilly:who are those guys
Garth:what?
figures seen in the distance
Garth:Shit GO GET WINSTON
Lilly: on it
Kates pov
Kate:whats going on
Garth:we might be under attack. *pulls out pistol*
Kate: where is Lilly
Lilly:we're here
Winston:whats going on?!
Garth:we might be under attack we need to form alphas just in case the serigala are a threat to us.
*Screaming*
find out what happens selanjutnya in chapter 2
Lillys pov
Lilly:Garth when can we go halaman awal im sleepy
Garth:we can go when the sun goes down
Lilly:who are those guys
Garth:what?
figures seen in the distance
Garth:Shit GO GET WINSTON
Lilly: on it
Kates pov
Kate:whats going on
Garth:we might be under attack. *pulls out pistol*
Kate: where is Lilly
Lilly:we're here
Winston:whats going on?!
Garth:we might be under attack we need to form alphas just in case the serigala are a threat to us.
*Screaming*
find out what happens selanjutnya in chapter 2
I just needed to let fellow Alpha and Omega know about this, there is a petition on Change. org now calling on Lionsgate and Crest to make an Alpha and Omega spin-off movie featuring Lilly and Garth as the main characters.
Every time someone signs the petition, another letter is sent to the head of Lionsgate's Motion Picture Group telling him how much we'd cinta to see a movie like this.
So, if anda like Lilly and Garth, atau just want to see the movie series continue beyond the selanjutnya few sequels, signing the petition would not be a bad idea.
The petition can be found oleh searching "Alpha and Omega" atau "Lilly and Garth" on Change. org. If anybody wants to sign it, that would be great.
We're going to need all the help we can get if we want Lionsgate to take this seriously. So every signature helps. With enough support, we can get Lionsgate to take notice and get this movie made.
Every time someone signs the petition, another letter is sent to the head of Lionsgate's Motion Picture Group telling him how much we'd cinta to see a movie like this.
So, if anda like Lilly and Garth, atau just want to see the movie series continue beyond the selanjutnya few sequels, signing the petition would not be a bad idea.
The petition can be found oleh searching "Alpha and Omega" atau "Lilly and Garth" on Change. org. If anybody wants to sign it, that would be great.
We're going to need all the help we can get if we want Lionsgate to take this seriously. So every signature helps. With enough support, we can get Lionsgate to take notice and get this movie made.
Morshu:Lamp oil, rope, BOMBS! anda want it? It’s yours my friend. As long as anda have enough rupees.
Link:i want it!
Morshu:Sorry Link, i can’t give credit. Come back when you’re a little, MMMMMMMMMMMM richer.
Link:son of a-
Spy:PICKABOO!
*then Spy bite Link's Neck*
Spy:hey Morshu do anda are a, MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Shopkeeper?
Morshu:MMMMMM.
Spy:can i have B0mbz?
Morshu:MMMMMMMMMMMM(Over nine thousand years later...)MMMMMMMMMM...as long as anda have enough rupees.
Spy:I want it!
Morshu:Sorry, Sp-
*Stab can be heard*
Spy:Thank anda for being such a dear friend.
15 menit fater... (WHAT!?) Swat guy 1:What just happend?!
Swat guy 2:That was a murder.
Swat guy 1:Do anda want, MMMMMMMMMMMM b0mbz?
Swat guy 2:Nope.avi
Swat guy 1:Uhhhhhhhh...okay.
The MMMMMMMMM End.
Link:i want it!
Morshu:Sorry Link, i can’t give credit. Come back when you’re a little, MMMMMMMMMMMM richer.
Link:son of a-
Spy:PICKABOO!
*then Spy bite Link's Neck*
Spy:hey Morshu do anda are a, MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Shopkeeper?
Morshu:MMMMMM.
Spy:can i have B0mbz?
Morshu:MMMMMMMMMMMM(Over nine thousand years later...)MMMMMMMMMM...as long as anda have enough rupees.
Spy:I want it!
Morshu:Sorry, Sp-
*Stab can be heard*
Spy:Thank anda for being such a dear friend.
15 menit fater... (WHAT!?) Swat guy 1:What just happend?!
Swat guy 2:That was a murder.
Swat guy 1:Do anda want, MMMMMMMMMMMM b0mbz?
Swat guy 2:Nope.avi
Swat guy 1:Uhhhhhhhh...okay.
The MMMMMMMMM End.
so, i loved Alpha and Omega 1 and 2. they're the best film i ever seen! Alpha and Omega 1 had a great story, lovable characters along with funny and touching moments. Alpha and Omega 2 had all of these stuff back again and made the franchise even better. Now, i really can't wait for A&O 3 and 4 to come out, cause this franchise's been endeared to me ever since A&O 1.
but unfortunately, Lionsgate confirmed that A&O 4 is gonna be the end to the "Alpha and Omega" saga. that makes me feel sad, cause like i said, i cinta this saga, and i always will, but when it ends, i'll be stuck in watching stupid film again.
so yeah, it's confirmed: Alpha and Omega 4 is gonna end another great saga
but unfortunately, Lionsgate confirmed that A&O 4 is gonna be the end to the "Alpha and Omega" saga. that makes me feel sad, cause like i said, i cinta this saga, and i always will, but when it ends, i'll be stuck in watching stupid film again.
so yeah, it's confirmed: Alpha and Omega 4 is gonna end another great saga