Well..
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 atau 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, atau giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till selanjutnya time.
Live long and prosper!
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 atau 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, atau giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till selanjutnya time.
Live long and prosper!
I keep seeing hate komentar here and there and I just want to say a few things to everyone membaca this. One thing for sure is that everyone who keeps wanting this club to die out: F*** OFF ALREADY! Look if anda don't like this club then just leave. You're not forced to be here. Those who actually want to be here are really annoyed oleh spammers and haters. How about these haters just find your own club to annoy. We all want this to stop!
Now to those membaca this and actually want this club to be alive: we can't just sit around waiting for a miracle. We must all take action and keep this club going. Everyone has a part to keep and the power to keep this club going but some of us underestimate our own power and are not using it wisely. Keep this club alive oleh adding fanarts, pertanyaan atau even forum for crying out loud!
I am doing my part oleh trying to think of interesting things to keep everyone hooked. Now anda must play your part.
Everyone who wants to: KEEP THIS CLUB ALIVE.
Now to those membaca this and actually want this club to be alive: we can't just sit around waiting for a miracle. We must all take action and keep this club going. Everyone has a part to keep and the power to keep this club going but some of us underestimate our own power and are not using it wisely. Keep this club alive oleh adding fanarts, pertanyaan atau even forum for crying out loud!
I am doing my part oleh trying to think of interesting things to keep everyone hooked. Now anda must play your part.
Everyone who wants to: KEEP THIS CLUB ALIVE.
Rocko was hunting in the vally with his sister
"so whens the wedding" Kate asked
"i dont know sis"
"well i cant wai..."
Kate was cut of oleh a plane
"its japanese see the meat balls on the wings" Rocko said
"what are thay doing here"Kate asked
"go to your den" rocko berkata as the plane shot at him.
Kate ran as Rocko jumped on the plane when it got close
the plane flew down to hit a pohon and explode as rocko jumped off.
"i was attaked this meens WAR.
sorry its short i dont have alot of time
"so whens the wedding" Kate asked
"i dont know sis"
"well i cant wai..."
Kate was cut of oleh a plane
"its japanese see the meat balls on the wings" Rocko said
"what are thay doing here"Kate asked
"go to your den" rocko berkata as the plane shot at him.
Kate ran as Rocko jumped on the plane when it got close
the plane flew down to hit a pohon and explode as rocko jumped off.
"i was attaked this meens WAR.
sorry its short i dont have alot of time
Wow...this movie...blew me out of the water...
Plot: Runt must help a blind serigala named Daria find a halaman awal while he learns about a ghost.
The plot of this movie is very deep, with lots of neat twists and turns.
Score: 5/5
Music: The musik was meh in this one...
Score 4/5
Characters(Heroes): Runt is becoming a hero. He helps Daria escape evil wolves, which is a very admirable thing. The only problem I had where the Porcupines (except the male one).
Score: 4.5/5
Characters(Villains): The evil serigala who tried to kill Daria are despicable! They killed her mother and tried to kill her! YURUSANAI!
Score: 5/5
Final Thoughts: This movie wins best animated for this tahun for me.
Final Score: 18.5/20
Would I recommend it? YES
Plot: Runt must help a blind serigala named Daria find a halaman awal while he learns about a ghost.
The plot of this movie is very deep, with lots of neat twists and turns.
Score: 5/5
Music: The musik was meh in this one...
Score 4/5
Characters(Heroes): Runt is becoming a hero. He helps Daria escape evil wolves, which is a very admirable thing. The only problem I had where the Porcupines (except the male one).
Score: 4.5/5
Characters(Villains): The evil serigala who tried to kill Daria are despicable! They killed her mother and tried to kill her! YURUSANAI!
Score: 5/5
Final Thoughts: This movie wins best animated for this tahun for me.
Final Score: 18.5/20
Would I recommend it? YES
Who is Lois? The she-wolf who tells Daria about her mother and is a re-skin of Sweets? I don't remember anyone called Lois in A&O4. She may have been mentioned oleh name and I not noticed it, but I could've missed it as the character I'm assuming "Lois" is didn't appear until near the end of the movie.