in young justice I Need Some Help With A Fancharacter.

nymph_tonks posted on Feb 26, 2011 at 03:55AM
i dont know how to introduce her in the fanfic! help me out. i have two ways to do this so the firsdt one:
"hey girl, wake up."
again? this happens all the time. i faint after a battle, acedentilly open a portal, and end up in some random walmart. another guy said "i think she's dead."
"well then what do we do with the body?"
i woke up."no,no i'm still alive."
i saw a guy with a mask on. "oh great. am i at that costume festival again?"
"no." the kid said, confused.

you like it?

second version:
a girl walked into the room. she was a younger version of the woman next to her. "this is my daughter, amasa girl." the older woman said. megan realized something and said "hello megan!" and amasa girl put a knife to megans throat and said "dont ever say that again unless you feel like dying!" the older woman pulled her away and said " I apologize for my daughter."

vote which one you like best!

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lebih dari setahun yang lalu puppip said…
smile
I like the first one :)
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Denelys said…
hmmm
the first one though take the walmart part out ok
lebih dari setahun yang lalu nymph_tonks said…
i aint taking the walmart part out.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Starlight1o1 said…
I think the first one is better because the beginning kind of misleads you and then you figure out what happens. I didn't really understand the second one though i hope my opionion helps you.

P.S. i am horrible at spelling so if there are any mistakes you know why.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu RavenclawQueen said…
i like the first one,
but the second one made me laugh when she had a knife to megan's throat.
First one though. :D
lebih dari setahun yang lalu nymph_tonks said…
i also have other questions. like should she like kid flash or robin? and should kid flash or superboy like her?
lebih dari setahun yang lalu RavenclawQueen said…
smile
have her like wally, and superboy like her. she likes the funny ones, not the brooding ones. :D
lebih dari setahun yang lalu nymph_tonks said…
what should megan think of her? should she hate her, or be her best friend?
lebih dari setahun yang lalu RavenclawQueen said…
mhhhm, well i think mega should be her best friend, like she is with artemis, only because she's not aware that superboy likes her. then when she finds out that supes likes her, she'll be mad for a bit. but they end up friends again.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu miss-martain said…
sounds good.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Denelys said…
worried
fine im just saying my opinion jeez(people can get so melodramamtic)
lebih dari setahun yang lalu miss-martain said…
its not like she was screaming at you.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Denelys said…
sick
not to be rude or impolite or anything and not to ofend ya but umm WHY DO YA CARE! ITS BETWEEN A ND B SO CYA...dont ttake it personaly just dont jump walls!
lebih dari setahun yang lalu nymph_tonks said…
uh, miss-martain is my third acount.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Denelys said…
angry
what does that mean!
lebih dari setahun yang lalu RavenclawQueen said…
it means mss-martian and nymph tonks are the same person. And not to be rude or impolite or anything, but when you post something here, it then involves the whole alphabet.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Denelys said…
angelic
???????????(try to calm down dont let it get to ya)..........
lebih dari setahun yang lalu RavenclawQueen said…
laugh
^I don't get what you mean? lol.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Denelys said…
meh
nevrmind call me crazy but i talk to my self to calm down.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu RavenclawQueen said…
um, I talk to myself too. What I don't do is talk to myself and then post it on fanpop or any website.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Denelys said…
sad
i...........just nevermind forget abut it......:(
lebih dari setahun yang lalu RavenclawQueen said…
wink
okie dokie artichoke.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Denelys said…
blush
tehehehehehehhehehe i have heard that one before but where?
lebih dari setahun yang lalu RavenclawQueen said…
Don't know. I just grew up knowing that. :D
lebih dari setahun yang lalu Denelys said…
laugh
tehehehehe ow i remember on hannah montana that guy said it soo anoyingly! hehehehee
lebih dari setahun yang lalu RavenclawQueen said…
^hmmm... I never saw it.