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The last of the makan malam guests poured out of Joseph Warren's house. He didn't have makan malam parties often because they usually resulted in fight's between two different people atau parties with extremely different political views. Fortunately, their was only one, small conflict on whether America should be fighting communism in other coutries atau not. Joeseph of course took the side of fighting communism, and so did a couple of others. But most of the other people...

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“Maryann’s pov (the ghost)”
When Kura woke I went back to the underworls to yell at magnolia (her mom) “I hate lying to that poor child! anda left her to become a vamp after anda asked a witch to turn anda back into a human to have her then be turned back into a vamp!” I yelled at her. She was getting ready to go feed on the males that followed her around. “Well anda don’t have to watch after her I was your choice.” she berkata like a snob. “Because her mom didn’t care and I’m beyond younger then anda I was twelve when anda killed me and...

Chapter 11
I pulled away and showed matt where I was looking it was a brown serigala staring at us I bet he was stairing the whole time we were there the serigala had intelligent eyes like human then it disappeared and jake came out of the same spot with his bare chest
-jake?
-Bella what are anda doing here? Didn’t anda say anda were living?
He berkata coldly
-you talk like this is your land! I was born here anda cant say were I should go!
-I can Bella I don’t want to kill you!
I laughed kill me! Pfffff
-you cant kill us!
Matt berkata angry
-jake what do anda want anda don’t have powers…………and how did you...

The guards walked back and forth in their normal sweeping motion that they always used. This made Joseph smile watching them through his hotel window with his state-of-the-art night-vision binoculars. just routine as usual, at least that's what the guards thought. Joseph looked at his watch, 12:23a.m. only seven lebih menit till he had to go. Joseph grabbed his bag of ammunition and various other things. His small, light smg. He also put on his body armor, his cammo, and grabbed his combat knife. And of course his baby, he'd never forget his baby. His baby was a 9.mm beretta. Aims like a dream...

(end of chapter8)
I was so nerves how charlie was going to react, matt squeezed my hand to comfort me charlie opened the door and gasped he was stairing at me ,not beliving it was me
-Bella?
He wasn’t sure if it was really me and then I heard billys voice from the phone
-charlie charlie are anda ok?
He didn’t respond and turned off the phone
-yeah dad its me
He staired at me again
-you look different!
-yeah two weeks does that to you.
I lied to him
-oh Bella! I missed anda so much I was so worried that I wouldn’t see anda again!
Then I took my hand out of matts and hugged him
-your cold
-yeah its freezing...

“Damn nobody in sight yet, I hope Marley and Alec are doing ok” berkata Opal. As she jumped from place to place she saw a young girl between the ages of 17-20, Opal didn’t even speak, and she didn’t need too. The girl was alone so Opal jumped behind her and as the girl turned Opal dug her fangs right into the girl’s neck. At first the girl’s eyes lit up with shock but then eased down into a deep sleep. Opal’s eyes turned the rose colour it does and when she was finished she through the girl to the ground, it has been too long since she drank so she didn’t really care about anything...

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"yes little girl it is wrong i won't do it again" the man berkata he voice was sweet. my jaw dropped he listened to her. "would anda like to go to a party with me?" he asked. "yes that would be lovely." annabel said. something wasn't right about this man. when they left. i followed them but i stayed in the woods. they made it to the party me and annbel saw when we meet the old woman. they went in. about two hours later they came out. "that was so much fun." annabel said. then some drunk men stumbled out like last night. with girls at their sides. they stumbled away like...

"My world is devoid of hope. It's a world where all I hear is the sound of outside voices and the screams of those I kill. Where all I see is the black surface of an ocean reflecting a moon that is always a crescent, and the scarlet river that tears me in two, the river filled with the blood I have spilled. The river may not be real, but at some point, reality and imagination merge together, so anda can no longer discern them from one another. At some point, it just won't matter anymore," Taylor whispered, resting her forehead against the spotted mirror that hung in her room.

How strange that...

I see everything very clear and I can sense things others cant. My family sees at a great gift sent to me from the senses spirit while I see it as a curse.

For centuries we lived selanjutnya to earth closer to it then the moon living in peace with the humans until they saw us as a threat and started a war against us, at first we fought back but the humans refused to give up their battle. Our kind used to be very peaceful and most of us retreated to Jupiter. But not everyone, a little less then half of our ancestors stayed including my great great grandfather he stayed because he saw it as a right....

This is gonna be the worst years of my life... With peoples I dont even know, a new school, a new life. I miss being in my old school with natasha and others.
Rukia:Hey Hoshi were here.
Hoshi:Comin
Time to ruin my life.Well my name is Hoshi and that was my cousin Rukia(Hoshi facts:Rukia is a name from bleach that my cousin loved so much she wanted it), shes a little energized but im lebih energized than her but now Im to scared to even run.
While I was on my new class room.
Rosalinda:Hi...
Hoshi:Oh..hi...
There was a girl with long grey hair at my side
Rosalinda:Are anda new?
I was starting to get happy...

She reached out and made contact with a brick wall.

Careful not to draw attention to herself, she scaled the building and hurled herself over the lip.

Without pausing, she ran across the rooftops, leaping the small gap between them. The pain was worsening oleh the minute.

She froze, hearing two voices coming from the alley below. She crouched low, peering over the edge, her heightened senses zeroing in on the conversation.

She calculated their positions, and leaped down, her figure a blur. She landed, pinning her first victim down. She clapped her hand over his mouth, stifling his scream. With...

This one is for just_bella, let go of the bad moments, hon! We need to enjoy the present, look out for the future and let the past in the past... Don't forget, but don't let it control you:D
Thanks to patrisha727, emmett4ever, and everyone for the support:D


"Catherine's POV"

The sun may shine through the day, the moon may light up the night but I'm still in the dark, I'm still looking for my shining light to guide me out of this misery, out of the dark...
Until our selanjutnya rendezvous, I send anda a million kisses... Do not send me any back for they set my blood into flames...
Ever yours...


Three...

Skiro
As I walked in I noticed everyone knew someone. I also noticed everyone was wearing uniforms-blue atau white shirts and kaky pants. I stood out much lebih than I wanted to. Though I wanted people to see me, and now a lot did, so I smiled and looked for a place to sit. I saw a group of girls, a group of hot guys,a lot of black-wearing people,and some others that I didn't care to know.
Then there was a meja that was mostly empty except for one very cute boy. as I walked toward him I saw lebih of his features: he was pale-I wondered why-,skinny and muscular-did he play a sport?-,and light blond...

Chapter 1: First hari of school
Skiro
I woke up to my mom's voice saying “get up, Its your first hari of school!”,as she woke me up from a nice dream. I opened my eyes and then waited for for my mom to leave the room. Then I got up in the room that was still new to me. I had only been in Spanish Fort a week so everything still looked strange. Reaching into my suitcase,I got out a berwarna merah muda, merah muda T-shirt and jean shorts. After putting them on I went into the bathroom,peed,and then looked at myself in the full-length mirror. I smiled at the nice tan I got from going to the pantai earlier that week. Seeing...

Not much to say, just thanks to DxCluvr for the help....
Thanks to Just_bella for all the help as well...
Thanks to Patrisha727 for helping me find the banner and the icon for my spot...
And thanks to everyone for the support...
This time the lines are all mine... No song to inspire them


"Daniel's POV"

Can I fight when there's no hope? Can I smile when there's no happiness? Can I still cinta when the one I cinta is gone? Can I live when I hope for death?
I try to stay awake not wanting to dream of her, not wanting to see her eyes, her lips, her face begging to stay with me! I'm trying to go back...

Chapter Nineteen

Seeing Sean Connors there with a bottle of wine inside the bag he’s carrying, Jamie was about to closed the door and headed up the stairs to sleep but she didn’t. Instead of doing that, Jamie stared at Sean’s eyes and with a questionable tone in her voice and a thin line on her face that resembled her smile, she asked him, “Sean, what are anda doing here?”

Holding the heavy canvas bag in his hand and holding it up to the brunette woman while saying to her, “Hi, Jamie and well, I went over to the liquor store on the way halaman awal to get myself a six-pack of bir because...

New Smells


The smell. There was nothing like it the first hari at school. I looked to my brother. This was our first school tahun in Maine. The weather was crappy all the time but it was worth it I am not really a night person. Whose to say I have to do everything like my parents. This is the new millennium not 15 hundreds.

My family is different. Other then the fact that we have lived for hundreds of years, we are also vampire. 40 years ago, the human world found out about our world. Slowly rights were made to fit our needs, and schools were open for the young and unadvised. Humans could fall...

Fire, every were ,no escape,so many dead, another
nightmare...
"Liana,Liana wake up!" I opened my eyes ,and groaned. Mami stood over me. "Come on sleep slough" she berkata "or anda will be late for P.C.S" P.C.S is my school . It stands for power control school. I sighed and got up. Still sleepy, I brushed my teeth and got dressed. I grabbed a pisang and ran out the door.Outside sat Hikaru." What took anda so long?" he asked." Sleep.""Ha ha ha!" he laughed. Hikaru is my best friend. He has beautiful green hair with two long stripes of yellow and has big brown eyes that always sparkle.Nothing like my...

After Patrick left, I had a restless night. I couldn’t sleep feeling that I’m a prisoner in those four walls in my room. I couldn’t sit quietly all night, nor slept for a brief moment. After all, Patrick’s visit was quite unexpected, and I wasn’t ready to see him that day. Also what was weird about his visit, that during all these two weeks he didn’t pay, not even a brief visit, to Robert’s house.
Wandering around my room with my pajama on, didn’t help me to sleep, nor comforted my restless mind. As I didn’t see him during these two weeks, I thought that those feelings I...

Spotlight

1. Cold pizza

It was a cold and rainy hari in November. Some people called this rain even snow, but not thus Helena. It was not the type Person all that varnished.
While she rushed oleh the crowded U platform, it rummaged about him of her pocket for her mobile phone. She tried to type in the scrum the number of her mother, however, without success.
Helena rolled irritated with her eyes. Their mother had berkata her at noon she must fetch her small sister Allison. And here only so she stood.
On the left from her a hard occupied looking man called up his mobile phone and before her there stood...