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 Once upon a....you know what, forget this cliche starter!
Once upon a....you know what, forget this cliche starter!
To me, one of the hardest things to do is the begginning. How exaculy do we start it off? What do we say? I'm not a complete genius on writing, but I have written my fair share of stories. Then thrown them away and started over. Then throw them away and start over again. anda could say i've kind of become gifted in the art of the first chapter. Here's an artikel to help my fellow writers out!

1. Start Off With Someone Saying Something!
This would be what my annoying language art teacher called a "Grabber." Get the readers attention oleh introducing a character through dialouge. For example;

"Hey Caleb, do anda need a ride?" Caleb morgan turned to see his friend Chikara Wang cruising beside him in his car. Chikara was really the only one of his friends who knew how to drive. He himself was stuck walking.
"Sure, why not?" He climbed into the passenger side beside him.


2. The Good 'Ol keterangan Scene!

Every now and then, we come across the decription scene. A paragraph of "It was a bright and sunny morning. Birds were chirping in the sky." While it's not my favorit way to go, some people manage to make it work. Try describing the town atau where the story takes place, atau the building your characters are currently in. School? Thier house? The bowling alley?


3. The "Code Red" Alert!

Try to get the reader's attention oleh saying something urgent. For example, in Maximum Ride, the main chacter, Max, starts off oleh saying your lives are in danger if anda don't read her book. The book is about a group of children who were genetic experiments. So if your trying to breach to a teen/pre-teen audience, it really hits close to home. I wanted to include the opening on this artikel but I couldn't find it. Poo! Many times, these "Code Reds" could be used as prolouges.


4. The Action Scene!

The action scene. It's a part of the story where something really big is happening. Usually a battle atau major drama. Take the first chapter of Maximum Ride for instance!

The funny thing about facing imminent death is that it really snaps everything else into perspective. Take right now, for instance.
Run! Come on, run! anda know anda can do it.
I gulped deep lungfuls of air. My brain was on hyperdrive; I was racing for my life. My one goal was to escape. Nothing else mattered.
My arms being scratched to ribbons oleh a briar I’d run through? No biggie.
My bare feet hitting every sharp rock, rough root, pointed stick? Not a problem.
My lungs aching for air? I could deal.
As long as I could put as much distance as possible between me and the Erasers.
Yeah, Erasers. Mutants: half-men, half-wolves, usually armed, always bloodthirsty. Right now they were after me.
See? That snaps everything into perspective.
Run. You’re faster than they are. anda can outrun anyone.


The Dream Sequence!

Now, picture that same scene above and picture the next. Max sitting upright in her bed. It was all a dream. The dream sequence is commonly used in today's media. anda see it all the time in televisi and movies. It could also be used to start off the detik chapter!

5. Introduce The Character!

Another way to start off, introduce your characters. This way the reader will get a first hand experience of what your characters are like, and maybe gain a little lebih information about them.

Do your Own Thing!

It's always important to do your own thing, no matter what other people think. Your story. Your mind. Your imagination. Nothing in my silly little artikel should tell anda how to write correctly. It's merely here to give anda ideas. There's no right atau wrong way to write a story.

With this last little word of encouragement...I bid anda farwell. Happy writing:)
posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 6: headache.
I was membaca a book on my tempat tidur when I heard my phone buzz
-hi Alice!
-hey Bella I was wondering if me and edward could come and see u?
What? People just don’t call and invite theme selves over! ugh! just be nice Bella she's a good vamp atau I think she is……
-yeah sure when are u coming?
I asked. I was positive she even had a set time to come here….
-at 3:00 pm it gives u 1 jam to clean and dress up! I'm so happy to come over! Yay!
Then she hung up oooh I don’t want to dress up! Right now I just want to sleep atau continuing membaca my book! I just climbed of my tempat tidur and cleaned...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 5:B pov
I woke up and looked at my new purple alarm clock it berkata 2:00 pm
-shit!
I was late again,I jumped off my tempat tidur and stretched then walked to the bathroom and washed my face, I walked to my giant dresser and focused on what to wear, Hmmm the brown tank puncak, atas goes with my black jean and the new kalung I got from accessorize and my black converse, and I'm all set!
I rushed to my car and forgot to grab a Hershey bar and drove to the mall
While I was driving I checked my watch again and 2:15 I still have 15 mins to the Saturday sale good thing I really want that black bag! Hmmm this is...
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posted by BiteMeCullen107
An jam later they had gone threw what little was left and found four bodies one out of four survived. He was badly hurt and probably wasn’t going to be out of the hospital for a couple weeks possibly months. Vanna wasn’t to hurt she broke her left leg and had to get three stitches. You’d think that because I was closer to the building I would have gotten hurt lebih but no I just sprained my wrist had to get six stitches and had a couple cuts and burses.
“Excuse me sir?”
I walked up to a one of the doctors that was taking care of Vanna at the time. He turned around and it looked like...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 1: the first meeting
I was remembering the first time I was trying to hide from my only enemy…..Damien I was running away from him for 160 years but he never gave up chasing me. My life is a living hell every little thing made me fear for no reason it’s just the part of the curse I can’t control it…….
-Bella
Angela asked worried I looked at her
-yeah?
-Nothing I was just worried, anda were starring there for, I don’t know half an hour!
-oh I'm sorry I was just remembering things
-ok, do anda want to talk about it?
-no I'm fine
-ok so I…um..i mean… we were wondering if anda wanted...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 20
While Alice was dragging me to see her family I was worried what will happen when I see edward I mean after all this years ,we moved on and stuff……..ooh I'm such an idiot what can happen??? Nothing can happed if he remmembers he left ME! I didn’t leave him! So what does he wants now?.....
I was thinking hard not realizing were she was dragging me when someone hugged me
-oh Bella I'm so happy to see anda look at you!!! anda havent changed at all!
Then he laughed his booming laugh,awww I truley miss Emmett he always made me laugh and made fun of me
-Bella honey,how are you?
Esme came...
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posted by Free_Spirit
Me: okay this is a short story i came up with. I know its a little bit drepressing but i was in a really bad mood. PLEASE TELL Me WHAT anda THINK. Sorry i pu that in hadiah cause people will notice it better. Okay enjoy

I start as the rain begins to fall. Great i thought darkly. I didn't like the rain, i always thought it emphasised how bad this world really is. I waited impatiently for class to end. The class was playing sepakbola and the other kids seemed to cinta the rain while playing. I didn't gabung in, i wasn't apart of that group.

I sighed in relief when i heard the bel, bell signal the end of class....
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Please read the other chapters and tell me whether this is any good atau not. And if anda don't like it, please give constructive critisicm.



The last of the makan malam guests poured out of Joseph Warren's house. He didn't have makan malam parties often because they usually resulted in fight's between two different people atau parties with extremely different political views. Fortunately, their was only one, small conflict on whether America should be fighting communism in other coutries atau not. Joeseph of course took the side of fighting communism, and so did a couple of others. But most of the other people...
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posted by Thalia_huntress
please rate and tell me what anda think :)



“Maryann’s pov (the ghost)”
When Kura woke I went back to the underworls to yell at magnolia (her mom) “I hate lying to that poor child! anda left her to become a vamp after anda asked a witch to turn anda back into a human to have her then be turned back into a vamp!” I yelled at her. She was getting ready to go feed on the males that followed her around. “Well anda don’t have to watch after her I was your choice.” she berkata like a snob. “Because her mom didn’t care and I’m beyond younger then anda I was twelve when anda killed me and...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 11
I pulled away and showed matt where I was looking it was a brown serigala staring at us I bet he was stairing the whole time we were there the serigala had intelligent eyes like human then it disappeared and jake came out of the same spot with his bare chest
-jake?
-Bella what are anda doing here? Didn’t anda say anda were living?
He berkata coldly
-you talk like this is your land! I was born here anda cant say were I should go!
-I can Bella I don’t want to kill you!
I laughed kill me! Pfffff
-you cant kill us!
Matt berkata angry
-jake what do anda want anda don’t have powers…………and how did you...
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The guards walked back and forth in their normal sweeping motion that they always used. This made Joseph smile watching them through his hotel window with his state-of-the-art night-vision binoculars. just routine as usual, at least that's what the guards thought. Joseph looked at his watch, 12:23a.m. only seven lebih menit till he had to go. Joseph grabbed his bag of ammunition and various other things. His small, light smg. He also put on his body armor, his cammo, and grabbed his combat knife. And of course his baby, he'd never forget his baby. His baby was a 9.mm beretta. Aims like a dream...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
(end of chapter8)
I was so nerves how charlie was going to react, matt squeezed my hand to comfort me charlie opened the door and gasped he was stairing at me ,not beliving it was me
-Bella?
He wasn’t sure if it was really me and then I heard billys voice from the phone
-charlie charlie are anda ok?
He didn’t respond and turned off the phone
-yeah dad its me
He staired at me again
-you look different!
-yeah two weeks does that to you.
I lied to him
-oh Bella! I missed anda so much I was so worried that I wouldn’t see anda again!
Then I took my hand out of matts and hugged him
-your cold
-yeah its freezing...
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“Damn nobody in sight yet, I hope Marley and Alec are doing ok” berkata Opal. As she jumped from place to place she saw a young girl between the ages of 17-20, Opal didn’t even speak, and she didn’t need too. The girl was alone so Opal jumped behind her and as the girl turned Opal dug her fangs right into the girl’s neck. At first the girl’s eyes lit up with shock but then eased down into a deep sleep. Opal’s eyes turned the rose colour it does and when she was finished she through the girl to the ground, it has been too long since she drank so she didn’t really care about anything...
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posted by Thalia_huntress
plz tell me what anda think.



"yes little girl it is wrong i won't do it again" the man berkata he voice was sweet. my jaw dropped he listened to her. "would anda like to go to a party with me?" he asked. "yes that would be lovely." annabel said. something wasn't right about this man. when they left. i followed them but i stayed in the woods. they made it to the party me and annbel saw when we meet the old woman. they went in. about two hours later they came out. "that was so much fun." annabel said. then some drunk men stumbled out like last night. with girls at their sides. they stumbled away like...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
"My world is devoid of hope. It's a world where all I hear is the sound of outside voices and the screams of those I kill. Where all I see is the black surface of an ocean reflecting a moon that is always a crescent, and the scarlet river that tears me in two, the river filled with the blood I have spilled. The river may not be real, but at some point, reality and imagination merge together, so anda can no longer discern them from one another. At some point, it just won't matter anymore," Taylor whispered, resting her forehead against the spotted mirror that hung in her room.

How strange that...
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posted by dancing_banana
I see everything very clear and I can sense things others cant. My family sees at a great gift sent to me from the senses spirit while I see it as a curse.

For centuries we lived selanjutnya to earth closer to it then the moon living in peace with the humans until they saw us as a threat and started a war against us, at first we fought back but the humans refused to give up their battle. Our kind used to be very peaceful and most of us retreated to Jupiter. But not everyone, a little less then half of our ancestors stayed including my great great grandfather he stayed because he saw it as a right....
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This is gonna be the worst years of my life... With peoples I dont even know, a new school, a new life. I miss being in my old school with natasha and others.
Rukia:Hey Hoshi were here.
Hoshi:Comin
Time to ruin my life.Well my name is Hoshi and that was my cousin Rukia(Hoshi facts:Rukia is a name from bleach that my cousin loved so much she wanted it), shes a little energized but im lebih energized than her but now Im to scared to even run.
While I was on my new class room.
Rosalinda:Hi...
Hoshi:Oh..hi...
There was a girl with long grey hair at my side
Rosalinda:Are anda new?
I was starting to get happy...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
She reached out and made contact with a brick wall.

Careful not to draw attention to herself, she scaled the building and hurled herself over the lip.

Without pausing, she ran across the rooftops, leaping the small gap between them. The pain was worsening oleh the minute.

She froze, hearing two voices coming from the alley below. She crouched low, peering over the edge, her heightened senses zeroing in on the conversation.

She calculated their positions, and leaped down, her figure a blur. She landed, pinning her first victim down. She clapped her hand over his mouth, stifling his scream. With...
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posted by ashesandwine
 The Universaty's perpustakaan (Biblioteca Joanina in portuguese)
The Universaty's Library (Biblioteca Joanina in portuguese)
This one is for just_bella, let go of the bad moments, hon! We need to enjoy the present, look out for the future and let the past in the past... Don't forget, but don't let it control you:D
Thanks to patrisha727, emmett4ever, and everyone for the support:D



"Catherine's POV"

The sun may shine through the day, the moon may light up the night but I'm still in the dark, I'm still looking for my shining light to guide me out of this misery, out of the dark...
Until our selanjutnya rendezvous, I send anda a million kisses... Do not send me any back for they set my blood into flames...
Ever yours...



Three...
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Skiro
As I walked in I noticed everyone knew someone. I also noticed everyone was wearing uniforms-blue atau white shirts and kaky pants. I stood out much lebih than I wanted to. Though I wanted people to see me, and now a lot did, so I smiled and looked for a place to sit. I saw a group of girls, a group of hot guys,a lot of black-wearing people,and some others that I didn't care to know.
Then there was a meja that was mostly empty except for one very cute boy. as I walked toward him I saw lebih of his features: he was pale-I wondered why-,skinny and muscular-did he play a sport?-,and light blond...
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Chapter 1: First hari of school
Skiro
I woke up to my mom's voice saying “get up, Its your first hari of school!”,as she woke me up from a nice dream. I opened my eyes and then waited for for my mom to leave the room. Then I got up in the room that was still new to me. I had only been in Spanish Fort a week so everything still looked strange. Reaching into my suitcase,I got out a berwarna merah muda, merah muda T-shirt and jean shorts. After putting them on I went into the bathroom,peed,and then looked at myself in the full-length mirror. I smiled at the nice tan I got from going to the pantai earlier that week. Seeing...
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