menulis Club
gabung
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
posted by zanhar1
Really old thing I dug up. Because I was reminded of it.

Elise stood before two paths. Upland trail, read the sign, rickety and made of moss eaten and decaying wood. And Downback Thickets, indicated its sister sign.
What a lonely, bleak place, Elise pondered. She looked skyward. The surrounding trees were rather intrusive, blocking her view of the foggy-quartz sky.
She nudged at a rock with her big toe.
Her big toe?!
“Where are my shoes?” She muttered aloud. When had she lost them? How hadn’t she noticed the mud squishing between her toes? She looked over the ground.
No sign of her Uggs anywhere.
All she received was an indication of rain; ground spotted with queer puddles that seemed to ripple in the chilly wind and stand still all at once.
She spotted a backless bench—made from the same semi-rotten wood as the signs. It rest beneath an autumn licked maple tree.
The great maple still had a full crown of leaves.
Deep orange.
Laced with spots of red.
Soon autumn would take a bite.
Strip it bare.
Elise wadded through freshly churned mud. She could still smell the rain on it.
She couldn’t help but to cringe as her foot pulled up with a slurp.
It’s not raining, she noted, and get yet her skin still felt moist. It wasn’t quite a drizzle, what the air was doing, lebih lie a wet mist.
That was it. Her skin was being showered oleh nature’s breathy kiss.
Elise kicked aside some leaves before plopping down on the bench. She lifted her left leg and plucked a leaf from her heel. She tapped her toes on the ground.
She faced skyward again, watching as fall blew another sneeze of leaves to the ground.
A spiraling dance.
How serene. She released a content sigh.

Where am I, how did I get here? She wondered halfheartedly. None of it actually seemed to matter.
She was just there, and that’s all that mattered.
“Mind if I sit?”
It was as if the old man had metralized himself from the mist. Elise didn’t recall seeing him on either path.
She didn’t recall seeing anyone at all, come to think of it.
In fact, she couldn’t even recall walking any trail at all.
“Yes. Please do.”
The bench creaked as her rocked his weight trying to get comfy.
“What I would give for a warm glass of cider.” She laughed.
He returned the chuckle, “Aye, if the trees came with cider dispensers I’d come around here lebih often.”
Elise’s face brightened. He reminded her of her grandpappy.
She missed him dearly.
“Of course I’m here often anyhow.” He tipped his plaid brown-black hat.
“Why is that?”
“I’m a tour guide of sorts, if anda will.”
“Oh! Good thing!” She exclaimed, “I am a bit confused here. Where are my shoes for one thing?”
“That I can’t answer. No, love, that is something only anda know. After all, this forest is as anda want to see it.”
“As I want to see it?” Elise fidgeted her fingers.
“Let’s bac up a little, shall we love?” He stood. “Tell me, do anda have the time?”
“Time? Hmmm.” Elise drummed her pointer against her lips.
Funny, she hadn’t thought about time since arriving in the forest.
It just seemed so trivial.
“I don’t have the time, sir.” She answered apologetically.
He glanced at his own wrist watch, hands Frozen at 12:02. “It would seem that I don’t either.” He chuckled, tapping the broken watch. “Never did get around to fixing this damn thing. In fact, I think it came broken. No matter, I never had time for time anyhow.”
“What do anda mean?”
“Never mind. Time isn’t important. No. Not when there’s something much lebih important for anda to see.”
Strange man, this man.
He knocked his cane upon the maple’s trunk.
A cough of leaves fell at his feet, he walked quickly to pick them up. Elise’s eyes couldn’t leave that cane: a polished wood thing, intricate carvings of birds and spindly human figures, of dead trees and odd symbols etched deep in. Such details were highlighted in gold, it was as if someone took a emas thread and carefully pressed it along each carving.
His nobby fingers curled over the bird skull grip.
“Hold this if anda ill.” He handed Elise a sizable leaf.
She nodded and too hold of it.
“Now focus on that leaf.” He instructed.
Very strange man. And yet something compelled her oblige. She sat quietly on the bench not exactly sure of what she should be seeing in the leaf’s translucent skin.
And then it swirled into view.
On the surface of the leaf, like a projector screen.
Her face.
Lily, her sister Lily!
Right on the skin of the leaf, she watched a very fond childhood memory play out.
It was an August day; mother had finally taken them to the park. On that hari the sun peered over the clouds warm and bright. The sisters could find no better way to spend it than holding hands on the seesaw. Rocking up and down and talking about bright hopes for the coming year.
Elise watched her child self giggle.
And then the leaf crumbled, flaking away as the memory ended.
The old man shuffled though a pile of leaves. “It’s in here somewhere, part two is.” Grumbling to himself he tossed a leaf over his shoulder and another. Leaf after leaf with a “nope” atau a “no that’s not right.”
“It’s alright, I know what happens after that.” Elise spoke. “The two of us get off the seesaw and race to the ayunan set.”
The old man nodded. “Very well then.” He then pointed up to the forest’s canopy. “Each leave holds a single and small snippet of a memory. jeruk, orange are joyful, red are mournful.” He paused. “It would seem that anda own a happy life.” He offered her a warm wrinkly smile.
Elise nodded.
“What is this place?”
“It is a place of decisions.” He strode over to the rotting signs. “You have three paths to take—you can stay here. anda can go Upland atau Downback.”
“Here is nice.” Else mumbled to herself.
“Yes, Here is nice. But here is frozen.” He poked at his watch, “Here is timeless, Here gets lonely after a while.”
Elise looked at her other two options.
Downback.
It had a cold air about it. Dense and dead.
She dared to step meneruskan, ke depan for a closer look. Each pohon stood tall like famine-marred figures, their gangly branches reaching invasively at her as if they’d pluck her right off the trail the menit she ventured onto it. Each knot and ridge in the bark seemed to stir up some sinister image.
She looked then, at her bare feet, and to the thorny thickets littering the path to Downback.
Upland seemed much lebih inviting in comparison to Downback’s gloom. Though it was still dressed in a veil of fog, slithering over the dirt, there were many dancing dsun beams penetrating the grey. Instead of thorns, pine needles, and sharp stones, the path to Upland (though made of dead grass) was dotted with flowers.
Like tiny stars in a dark sky.
A dead semak, bush sporting tiny red barriers seemed to bid her to the path.
She put a foot on the trail.
The rumput was rather rough, but not unpleasant on her feet.
Elise cast a glance over her shoulder—spilling a cascade of auburn hair. The old man smiled and with a tip of his hat said, “I would agree, anda belong to the Upland. He’ll welcome anda home.” With his cane he brused aside some stray brambles.
He tugged at his long brown unta jaket and extended a boney arm.
A skeletal hand.
“Shall we?”
added by sapherequeen
saran to young, beginning writers to Stephen King....
video
menulis
saran
stephen king
posted by SarahCorine
Please read and tell me what anda think of each couple I created. Which one is your favorite? For the pics I decided to use animie pictures. Each picture is actually something that would happen in the story of each couple. The kutipan on the pictures are things that the couple says of course. Please leave a comment.

KATIANA AND DANIEL (WRITTEN ALREADY)
Originally this was not couple was not going to be written in the story, but as I got opinions on the first chapter, everyone thought that Daniel liked Katiana because of the way he acted with her. I thought making them a couple would take away...
continue reading...
added by melikhan
added by sideshowbobbart
If u guys are menulis an adventure with a lot of fights here's something that'll give u inspiration. It helped me a lot in my book.
video
menulis
book
musik
battle
adventure
fight
added by melikhan
Tips on menulis your first novel :) Hope this helps....
video
menulis
penulis
writers
novels
novel
novelist
posted by RanmaRaj
Guess even the sky is lonely
See its crying so bitterly
Its raining here today
Cuz its valentine day

Everyone has a smile on their faces
Either true atau fake
Some have their heart's aces
Others hated even to wake

Now that you're gone
I'm staring at my phone
Hoping anda to make a small call
That anda wanna meet in the mall

There's an empty place in my heart
I'm in agony due to the pain
The hari anda left it broke apart
I cry as much as the rain

Pls come back to me
Pls say anda cinta me
And that I'll never again have to stay
Alone on a valentine's day
added by melikhan
posted by Ms_Dididy
|Life is like a story,both can end badly.It depends on what anda write and what anda do to change them.|

"Love is like a flower,it can only be treated so tenderly."Elisa Reynolds."My beloved,you may have tricked those..little toys but anda forget that I keep no secret,no lies,nor any true clues.But I can say that I loved you."Liam Foyet."My last words to anda be that Doyle is back.Back to kill me.Also that Russian Roulette is not the same without a gun."

"The danger people see in me,(chuckle) it's amusing."

Elisa~"Im weakened oleh love, but strengthen oleh pain."
Doyle~"Shut up and this will be a short execution."
Russia
added by melikhan
posted by para-scence
I slowly walked down the stairs in my pajamas, trying desperately not to make a sound. I peeked around the dapur corner. Father was sitting at the dapur table, sipping his coffee and membaca the paper. I silently turned around, and tip-toed back to the stairs.

"Cosette," he berkata in a deep voice. I squeezed my eyes shut and cursed quietly. I turned back around, and shuffled my feet into the kitchen.

"Good morning, Daddy," I said, trying to make him forgive me for last night. Even though it wasn't my fault. "How'd anda sleep last night?"

"Fine," he grumbled. "Don't think anda can make me forget...
continue reading...
added by storylover
posted by wantadog
Chapter 2!


Juliet retrieved the papers from the chicken pen, saying hi to a few of them while she was there, and made her way towards the road. She considered going back to ask her mother about dad again, but decided that it could wait. She would talk to her about it when she got back. Jessica reached the gate leading to the road and left, taking care to remember to close it. Her farm was about a mile away from the rest of the town, so it took her about 10 menit of walking to arrive. On the way, Juliet dropped a piece of paper. Her hands were pretty full, so she folded it and put it in her...
continue reading...
added by alicia386
Source: google
added by sapherequeen
Novel-writing and poetry tips :)
video
menulis
penulis
writers
poetry
poets
novels
saran
novelist
saying
added by axemnas
posted by Dudespie
Just to clarify for the others in my group story, this is just a prototype. I may ask anda to rewrite this with your characters in it. I'm just starting with my two.

Pt.1
It was a bright and sunny hari on the coast of Australia. The sun was shining, people speckled the shore, and all was well. "Luna! Stop fooling around in the water! Your burger is going to get cold!" Melody shouted to Luna, the youngest of the group. "Oh relax, sis, it's only water. Besides, I can microwave it when we get home, we're not going to be here all hari long ya know" Luna retorted at her big sister. "You are SO stubborn...
continue reading...
posted by RandomOne
"Where are anda going?" came Mother's soft, but scolding voice.

To hell. Melony thought darkly. "Just to the wood," She answered, not turning around, staring hard at the dusty ground. She heard a deep sigh behind her.

"Melony..." Mother's sad voice made Melony momentarily guilty.

The feeling quickly faded. "No, Mother."Melony snapped, turning around angrily. "I ain't caring what anda say an'more." She swiftly opened the garden gate and ran down the dusty road.

"Melony! Wait! Come back!" Mother called desperately. Melony didn't turn around atau look back.

Melony was half way through the woods before...
continue reading...
so...her it goes:P

Actors:
~Ecem
~Sari
~selen
~sara
~rumeysa
~sevde
~sevde
~dursun
~sufian
~firas
~roberto
~alex
~anthony
...
Scene starts off in class,the first hari at school,everybody looking tired,waiting for they're form teacher to be presented.
(a moment of silence as the door slowly opens...I'll be helping on that one!...and a creepy looking teacher steps inside the class-room)
(ACT 1)
Radu:(low and dark voice) Hello....everybody Im your new teacher as we all~~

Alex: yeah,yeah we know,we know

Radu:(laughs sinisterly)you'd wished anda didnt say that.NOW...you've been..."disrespectful" to the teacher,come outside...
continue reading...
posted by amandaj
Ok, this is my first attempt at menulis a story, if that's what I should call it, I'm not sure. I'm not an experienced writer, and English isn't my mother tongue, so it's not flawless. Please beruang with me a little. But please feel free to give me feedback on this, positive atau negative, either way. :)

---------------------

There was a time, when she felt like she could do anything. A time when the world didn't seem as intimidating. When all her challenges and struggles was small, and forgotten oleh the blink of an eye. She doesn't seem to remember a single time when she was younger, when she found...
continue reading...