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Skiro
As I walked in I noticed everyone knew someone. I also noticed everyone was wearing uniforms-blue atau white shirts and kaky pants. I stood out much lebih than I wanted to. Though I wanted people to see me, and now a lot did, so I smiled and looked for a place to sit. I saw a group of girls, a group of hot guys,a lot of black-wearing people,and some others that I didn't care to know.
Then there was a meja that was mostly empty except for one very cute boy. as I walked toward him I saw lebih of his features: he was pale-I wondered why-,skinny and muscular-did he play a sport?-,and light blond...
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Chapter 1: First hari of school
Skiro
I woke up to my mom's voice saying “get up, Its your first hari of school!”,as she woke me up from a nice dream. I opened my eyes and then waited for for my mom to leave the room. Then I got up in the room that was still new to me. I had only been in Spanish Fort a week so everything still looked strange. Reaching into my suitcase,I got out a berwarna merah muda, merah muda T-shirt and jean shorts. After putting them on I went into the bathroom,peed,and then looked at myself in the full-length mirror. I smiled at the nice tan I got from going to the pantai earlier that week. Seeing...
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Chapter Nineteen

Seeing Sean Connors there with a bottle of wine inside the bag he’s carrying, Jamie was about to closed the door and headed up the stairs to sleep but she didn’t. Instead of doing that, Jamie stared at Sean’s eyes and with a questionable tone in her voice and a thin line on her face that resembled her smile, she asked him, “Sean, what are anda doing here?”

Holding the heavy canvas bag in his hand and holding it up to the brunette woman while saying to her, “Hi, Jamie and well, I went over to the liquor store on the way halaman awal to get myself a six-pack of bir because...
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posted by genyva
New Smells


The smell. There was nothing like it the first hari at school. I looked to my brother. This was our first school tahun in Maine. The weather was crappy all the time but it was worth it I am not really a night person. Whose to say I have to do everything like my parents. This is the new millennium not 15 hundreds.

My family is different. Other then the fact that we have lived for hundreds of years, we are also vampire. 40 years ago, the human world found out about our world. Slowly rights were made to fit our needs, and schools were open for the young and unadvised. Humans could fall...
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posted by Ninano1998
Fire, every were ,no escape,so many dead, another
nightmare...
"Liana,Liana wake up!" I opened my eyes ,and groaned. Mami stood over me. "Come on sleep slough" she berkata "or anda will be late for P.C.S" P.C.S is my school . It stands for power control school. I sighed and got up. Still sleepy, I brushed my teeth and got dressed. I grabbed a pisang and ran out the door.Outside sat Hikaru." What took anda so long?" he asked." Sleep.""Ha ha ha!" he laughed. Hikaru is my best friend. He has beautiful green hair with two long stripes of yellow and has big brown eyes that always sparkle.Nothing like my...
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After Patrick left, I had a restless night. I couldn’t sleep feeling that I’m a prisoner in those four walls in my room. I couldn’t sit quietly all night, nor slept for a brief moment. After all, Patrick’s visit was quite unexpected, and I wasn’t ready to see him that day. Also what was weird about his visit, that during all these two weeks he didn’t pay, not even a brief visit, to Robert’s house.
Wandering around my room with my pajama on, didn’t help me to sleep, nor comforted my restless mind. As I didn’t see him during these two weeks, I thought that those feelings I...
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posted by Ms_Montana
Spotlight

1. Cold pizza

It was a cold and rainy hari in November. Some people called this rain even snow, but not thus Helena. It was not the type Person all that varnished.
While she rushed oleh the crowded U platform, it rummaged about him of her pocket for her mobile phone. She tried to type in the scrum the number of her mother, however, without success.
Helena rolled irritated with her eyes. Their mother had berkata her at noon she must fetch her small sister Allison. And here only so she stood.
On the left from her a hard occupied looking man called up his mobile phone and before her there stood...
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posted by JazzLover101
Nicholas suddenly slid down on one knee and asked me at age 13 will anda marry me even with our age and mother and father would be against it I berkata yes. I Elizabeth {or Lizzie for short} Catherine Cromwell will soon be Lizzie Catherine Tucker in a few short months/ There was so much to do so much to plan in fact I will make a daftar of what I already know
Marriage List:
tanggal __
time __
place __
food __
dj __
cake testing __
bridal mandi, shower __
center pieces __
bouquets __
dress shopping __
shoe shopping __
makeup shopping __
posted by Lorelei-Essence
The Pillsbury Doughboy died yesterday of a yeast infection and trauma complications from repeated pokes in the belly. He was 71. Doughboy was buried in a lightly greased coffin. Dozens of artis turned out to pay their respects, including Mrs. Butterworth, Hungry Jack, the California Raisins, Betty Crocker, the Hostess Twinkies, and Captain Crunch. The gravesite was piled high with flours. Aunt Jemima delivered the eulogy and lovingly described Doughboy as a man who never knew how much he was kneaded. Doughboy rose quickly in tampil business, but his later life was filled with turnovers. He was not considered a very smart cookie, wasting much of his dough on half-baked schemes. Despite being a little flaky at times he still was a crusty old man and was considered a positive roll model for millions. Doughboy is survived oleh his wife Play Dough, two children, John Dough and Jane Dough, plus they had one in the oven. He is also survived oleh his elderly father, Pop Tart.
posted by BeSafe
Is it possible to fall in cinta with someone you’ve never met
Your only knowledge stemming from information you’ve seen atau read
Before I knew of his existence I would have stated no
Yet the first time I saw him my jantung begged to never let go
It isn’t rational
atau logical
Though cinta rarely is
I can’t make my jantung stop wishing that I held his
And I know it's stupid and silly to believe
In some kind of fairy tale
The perfect prince for me
But every time I see that smile
I can’t help but feel
That one hari we could share
A cinta that is real
posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

Ashleigh was a little three tahun old, and I could see she'd be really pretty when she was older.

I wasn't sure how how, but becoming a mother just let me see clearly. About so many things. What was important and what wasn't worth it.

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I'd picked her up from the daycare and took her to the playground, where we were supposed to meet Jamie, the little girl who was Ashleigh's best friend, and her mother, Jenna. Jenna was a single mother, like myself, but two years older. We'd become best friends as our children had.

It was Friday, and Jamie...
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posted by ihavOTD
I breathed in and out slowly. This was horrid. Running. I spat at the word. I despised running.

Joseph jogged up to me. "You okay Kristen?"
"Yeah, just give me a minute."
"Hah! anda always end up like this. Maybe anda should quit track?"
"You know I can't! If I do, then I have to do Trigonometry. Ugh. That's worse."
"Right..."
I stood up and we walked in silence. His lithe step did not match mine. I had a clumsy, trip over step. I needed somebody to teach me how to walk right.
"Oof." I had tripped, and landed on my side. How? I have no idea. Normal people land on their face atau back. Not me!

Please e-mail me atau comment. Tell me if anda like this segment atau not, if I get enought votes, I will continue my writing.
Goodnight and Goodbye

He shut the door silently behind him, but not enough for her to hear his fragile jantung breaking.

When he re-entered the hotel room from the balcony, a sea of faces greeted him. "Do anda wanna drink?" Simon gargled, as soon as he saw Niles' worn face.

He embarked to his room, without another word to Simon atau any other members of Daphnes family. As soon as he stepped through the frame, he saw Mel in bed, waiting for him. She put down the book she was reading, on the side meja and elegantly unblanketed herself from under the covers.
She embraced him and a warm smile spread...
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i was a normal 18 tahun old colledge student until that night that horid night the night that all saftyein my life died it was a cold winters night and me and my friend trent were going to stay the night at the most haunted hospital in the world ( lebih like most haunted place of death and despair)waverly hlls sanitoryoum. "come on tristen were going to be laughing stocks of the city if we dont go" "trent." i berkata " i dont think we should go" " are u chicening out." he berkata " no" i snapped " but its not right" i argued to him "its these millions of death beads and u have famly that died there and so do i" " he looked mad at me mentioning his uncle who died there but i had to make him stop. "no" he berkata " we are going." to hell i thought if only i new
posted by twilight0girl
this bulan is going to be terrible.
i live in barrow alaska.this is thier bulan of complete,totall darkness.also,this is when the vampire come out to feed on the helpless men,women,and children.but instead of shaking in pure fear,i'll go out and see how they act.but i'm also going out because my two brothers,isaac and marcus,are vampire too.

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4 days later

i've never walked around outside during this time of month.i can hear the screaming coming from every direction.i havent seen any va,pires nor my two brothers.when i started to walke away...
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The snow is falling on this cold blistery afternoon.
    Just up ahead, in the clearing I could see a young woman gloriously and delicately skating. Skating, as if she had skated her entire life.
Suddenly, I began remembering an adventure that seemed so many moons ago.
Beyond the horizon I could see myself walking briskly toward the solid, cold ice that kept me Frozen in silence.
I could hear the ice crackling, like jagung meletus, popcorn being popped, beneath my shaking feet.
As I adventured onto to the ice, I felt a cold chill creep up my back that seemingly felt like a warning sign to...
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posted by Cutebutcrazy--
anda couldn't and wouldn't,
ask for anything more.
Now all anda want,
is to be able to rest.
For your famliy to be happy.
anda wish anda could help them,
through the pain,
but anda can't,
anda can only watch,
from the sky.
anda can only watch them cry.
Hearts are now broken.
But your love,
is forever out spoken.
For twith out you,
there'd be no hope,
for those to come.
anda put the doctors one step closer,
to finding the cure.
anda may be just another person to them,
but to me your so much more.
Your one in a million,
your unequie.
I have just one lebih thing to say.
Plaese rest now.
Rest now and sleep.
May heven bring anda happiness and peace.
posted by Rockster
I'm menulis two novels, I know what most people think (WHY!) but i've decided to do one hand written and work upon it at school, where one of my teachers is happy to look at and talk to me about the errors that I've done. Whereas the other novel I'm working on the computer which i would like people to read it and discuss whats good and bad about it. Anyway, I've copied and pasted this novel that I've begun from an animal crossing forum and here it is.


Chapter 1: The Frowning Mirror

The heat swarmed around me, wrapping me with comfort and content. I knew that this feeling that conflicted with...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
He smirked. “Hello Sadie” he sang, I closed my eyes and then opened them again, hoping I was going blind. I heard footsteps behind me and then a loud scoff. “What’re anda doing here?” Ethan asked, I opened my mouth to answer for Adam but was interrupted. “I came here to see Sadie” he said, I sighed. Ethan looked to me and gave me a look, one I noticed he used to give to me when we were kids and I had stolen his toy. “Is this true did anda ask him to come?” Ethan asked me, I shrugged. “I don’t think so” I told him, I heard Adam laugh. “I’m so glad this amuses you!”...
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"Okay Starr your message has been put through. The council and your parents will get it in time when anda get back," Whitney says on the phone.
I sigh in relief "That's good. Thanks whitney. oleh the way how do anda like your new job? Councilman and messenger!" I gush
Whitney has been my friend since forever when we both finished college eight months yang lalu we both got different jobs. I work as a time traveller recording things from the past.
"It's great Starr! I get paid a lot. How bout you?" she asks
"Well going back is great but some of the people back then are annoying. Well I got to get to...
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