"What's wrong with Raphael?" Amena asked confusedly, entering the dapur in which Linda was preparing dinner.
"He's just down about something," Linda said, smiling at Amena. "He'll be out the menit he smells dinner." Amena took the spoon from Linda's hand and smiled.
"Don't worry, I can finish up here," she berkata warmly. "Why don't anda rest for a while outside, maybe get some fresh air?" The detik Linda left Amena began digging for a pot.
Raphael may have stolen my first kiss, she thought bitterly. But that doesn't mean that I shouldn't help him out...
Raphael lay there on the floor, feeling pathetic and worthless. He didn't even have the will power, much less the strength, to pindah a single muscle.
Until he remembered that he had something that would end everything. Raphael immediately merpati for his drawer and unearthed a shiny silver gun.
"Life doesn't need me anymore," he whispered as he pressed the pistol to his temple. "Neither does Amena."
"Raphael, I brought anda some soup," Amena said, pushig open the door to see Raphael with his eyes squeezed shut and his finger about to pull the trigger.
"RAPHAEL!" Amena screeched, throwing herself at him.
A loud and thunderous crack membagi, split through the air like lightning. Linda burst through the doors.
"Amena..." Raphael moaned.
Amena was lying on puncak, atas of Raphael, with the gun lying four feet away and blood pooling out of her arm.
"Raphael... y'kay?" Amena choked, allowing him to buaian, cradle her almost like a baby.
"Amena... don't," Raphael berkata stupidly, speechless with shock, fear and confusion.
"Raphael, 'm fine," Amena gasped, clutching her arm. "It's just my arm." The confusion in Raphael seemed to vanish immediately, to be replaced oleh alarm.
"GET HER TO THE HOSPITAL!" he yelled, picking her up and sprinting past his grandmother.
Raphael ran. He ran past the car, not even bothering to unlock it atau get into it. He ran over the bridge, and onto the sand. He ran for miles across the pantai of the beach. He ran between the apartments, the wind whipping through his hair and his jantung pounding against his ribcage. Finally, he ran through the doors of the hospital, three words repeatedly falling from her lips.
"Somebody help her..."
"He's just down about something," Linda said, smiling at Amena. "He'll be out the menit he smells dinner." Amena took the spoon from Linda's hand and smiled.
"Don't worry, I can finish up here," she berkata warmly. "Why don't anda rest for a while outside, maybe get some fresh air?" The detik Linda left Amena began digging for a pot.
Raphael may have stolen my first kiss, she thought bitterly. But that doesn't mean that I shouldn't help him out...
Raphael lay there on the floor, feeling pathetic and worthless. He didn't even have the will power, much less the strength, to pindah a single muscle.
Until he remembered that he had something that would end everything. Raphael immediately merpati for his drawer and unearthed a shiny silver gun.
"Life doesn't need me anymore," he whispered as he pressed the pistol to his temple. "Neither does Amena."
"Raphael, I brought anda some soup," Amena said, pushig open the door to see Raphael with his eyes squeezed shut and his finger about to pull the trigger.
"RAPHAEL!" Amena screeched, throwing herself at him.
A loud and thunderous crack membagi, split through the air like lightning. Linda burst through the doors.
"Amena..." Raphael moaned.
Amena was lying on puncak, atas of Raphael, with the gun lying four feet away and blood pooling out of her arm.
"Raphael... y'kay?" Amena choked, allowing him to buaian, cradle her almost like a baby.
"Amena... don't," Raphael berkata stupidly, speechless with shock, fear and confusion.
"Raphael, 'm fine," Amena gasped, clutching her arm. "It's just my arm." The confusion in Raphael seemed to vanish immediately, to be replaced oleh alarm.
"GET HER TO THE HOSPITAL!" he yelled, picking her up and sprinting past his grandmother.
Raphael ran. He ran past the car, not even bothering to unlock it atau get into it. He ran over the bridge, and onto the sand. He ran for miles across the pantai of the beach. He ran between the apartments, the wind whipping through his hair and his jantung pounding against his ribcage. Finally, he ran through the doors of the hospital, three words repeatedly falling from her lips.
"Somebody help her..."
She fell to the floor and wept, and the jar shook
The hari ended on a cold note for the cold night
He had her jantung sealed in a jar, fragile and trapped
Until he had his moment and let go
With little strength, she had saved it and ran
She had ran until the darkness was unbearable,
As she wept, the jar shivered in her arms
Her dark blue eyes were drenched
And her mind was a dark, narrow corridor.
Her heat prolonged in entrapment,
Torturing her unknowingly with each eternity-like moment.
Finally, she ceased her overwhelming emotions,
Now silent and pondering
Distracted, the jar fell, and shattered at her feet
He’s gone. He’s gone! The words danced in her mind.
Her jantung was free, and she was free
She got to her feet, no longer stumbling
And the shattered jar crunched under her feet
There was no lebih pain.
~~~~~~~~
...Yeah, I know it kinda sucks. Like I said, first attempt. :/
The hari ended on a cold note for the cold night
He had her jantung sealed in a jar, fragile and trapped
Until he had his moment and let go
With little strength, she had saved it and ran
She had ran until the darkness was unbearable,
As she wept, the jar shivered in her arms
Her dark blue eyes were drenched
And her mind was a dark, narrow corridor.
Her heat prolonged in entrapment,
Torturing her unknowingly with each eternity-like moment.
Finally, she ceased her overwhelming emotions,
Now silent and pondering
Distracted, the jar fell, and shattered at her feet
He’s gone. He’s gone! The words danced in her mind.
Her jantung was free, and she was free
She got to her feet, no longer stumbling
And the shattered jar crunched under her feet
There was no lebih pain.
~~~~~~~~
...Yeah, I know it kinda sucks. Like I said, first attempt. :/
Ok, so I just want to write a little summary to my story that I want to write called A Place of Our Own I'm basically menulis this to see if people will like it, and if they do, I'll write more. :)
So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 tahun old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 tahun old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 tahun on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave halaman awal and find help herself.
So yeah, if anda liked this, please komentar and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)
So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 tahun old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 tahun old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 tahun on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave halaman awal and find help herself.
So yeah, if anda liked this, please komentar and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)
