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posted by Poppygirl9904
Ok so this is my first Song Fiction so please not so many hate comments, but critscism is respected. This is a story of how i felt after my guy friend got mad at me and berkata that that he hated he. I am making a lot of post about to get my feelings out. So please enjoy! The song is Cold As anda oleh Taylor Swift.


Sydney's P.O.V
hey Sydney...wait up, Alecia yelled while running toward Sydney. When Alecia caught up she asked
"Are anda excited for the performance"
"Yeah", I berkata "We've been working on it and were definitely ready."
Are anda inviting anyone, Alecia asked.
"Um, well i invited Jalyn, Aliyah, and Ben. Aliyah's out of town, Jalyn berkata maybe, and i haven't checked recently with Ben."
"Oh your inviting Ben", Alecia berkata in a lovey dovey voice.
"Yeah so?!"
"So I know anda like him" she said
"Yeah whatever, i got to go i will call anda when i get home."
"ok bye"
"Bye Alecia"
Was it that obvivious that I liked him? Oh well i will call him when i get halaman awal to see if he's still coming.
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You have a way of
coming easily to me
And when anda take anda
take the very best of me
So I start a fight cause
I need to feel something
anda do what anda want
Causes I'm not what anda
wanted

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Sydney's P.O.V.

At Home
I grabbed my phone and i dialed Ben's number. I waited as the phone rang several times. Just then there was a pause and then a hello in a lowish voice, that i knew was Ben's.
"Hey",
"Hey",He answered back.
So ar-I was cut off oleh his voice.
"Hey can anda call back in 20 minutes.
"Um yeah sure, bye.
He had hung up the phone, and left me on the other line just wondering silently to myself what had happened.

20 menit later
I got the phone and called Ben...again. I wonder what was going on because he would ususally answer. I called at least 5 times, but just because the performance was important to me and none of my friends could come. I guess he wasn't coming i had to get ready to perform. I hope everything was ok with him.
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The selanjutnya Day
All i did today was worry about why he didn't come, if he was mad, and was everything ok with his family. Then i got a text from Ben that read:
GOD STOP CALLING ME
I quickly texted back knowing he was mad.
Sorry I had called anda back in 20 menit like anda said. i wasnt trying to annoy you.
He texted back:
[b]Well don't call back, cause i hate talking to you, cause anda never stop talking.

I began to get sad and i could feel tears beginning to form.
Well..whatever I don't need anda and your crap!!!
And with that I began to cry, with big tears were rolling down my face.
_______________________________________________

Oh what a shame what a
rainy ending diberikan to a perfect day
Just walk away, Ain't no use
defending words that anda will
never say

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Sydney's P.O.V

How could he do that to me?!I've known him since 5th grade, and we've been the best of buddies ever since.

I called Alecia and told her about what happened, and she berkata that he had no reason to treat me like that. We continued to talk and tried to make me happy, but there was no use i was really hurt oleh Ben. I thought:
Does he really mean this, atau was it the spur of the moment and what I did? I sure hope it was because i cant afford to lose him, not now!
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But no matter what the excuse was what he did was pretty mean. If it was the worng time for ne reason he could have easily picked up the phone and told me
A- Can't talk now
OR
B- I can't make the performance

If he told me that I would have easily stopped calling him and we wouldnt be in this problem.
All my friends think he's a BIG JERK for doing that, and I guess i agreedbut i feel that there's something else I'm feeling besides hate. Thinking about it now it still doesnt give him the right to treat me like that, that was like the meanest things anyone had done to me!!!
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And know that I'm sitting
here thinking it through
I've never been anywhere
as cold as you
anda put up walls and paint
them all a shade of grey
And i stood there loving anda
and wished them all away

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I went to my room and looked at a picture of me and all my friends, I was standing oleh him smiling my jantung out, i looked at his smile and he looked happy too. Then I thought about the times when
his life was grey and sad and i had told him stuff to cheer him up, atau made jokes atau cards.
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I went down the line of pictures and the smiles seemed bright but the farther i got the lebih they faded and he seemed bored.
Should i have saw this coming
I remember him recently telling me that my dreams were really big, but did he mean it in a bad way??
I was too smitten to even wonder atau realize.

And anda come away
with a great little story
Of the mess of a dreamer with
the nerve to adore you

__________________________________________________

After realizing he could be a big jerk i realized it was not MY loss but HIS own loss, because now he no longer has a great friends who cares, supports, atau is there for him anymore. I'm gonna let him walk out of my life because apparently he doesn't care about my feelings.

Oh what a shame what a
rainy ending diberikan to a perfect day
Just walk away, Ain't no use
defending words that anda will
never say, And know that I here
thinking it through I've never
been anywere as cold as you

__________________________________________________

I thought about the times when i talked to him about series things like family, school, and people being mean. He often gave me saran when i needed it atau cheered me up when i was down...but did he mean it??? And whenever i did something for him he kinda seemed happy, but looking back it seemed like he could have faked it. I was always happy for him no matter what, and i would have done anything to be his girl.

You never did give a
dang thing honey but I
cried, Cried for anda and
I know anda wouldn't have
told nobody if I died,died
Died for you

_________________________________________________

I decide to forget most of the memories we had together, like phone calls, pictures, school classes anything. I thought of when we talked on the phone when he laughes and the pictures we took of us smiling and having a good time was just faking smiles? If he was then its not fair that he played me like that, and smiling and acying like he was having a good time is bogus and wont make up for how he hurt me. I just think its just a shame we had to end our friendship over nonsense

Oh what a shame
what a rainy ending
diberikan to a perfect day
Every smile anda fake
Is so condescending counting
all the scars anda made

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Sydney's P.O.V.

As much as I hate him being out of my life its an opportunity to put the past behind me and pindah on. But if he wants to appologize I'm lebih than fine with that, but i don't think that our friendship will be the same because we hit a COLD spot that changed our lives and relationship.

[i]Now that I'm sitting
here thinking it through
I've never been anywhere
As Cold As You
Ooooooooooo
Wooooahhhhh
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Hey how did anda guys like it, leave me a komentar on how i can improve cuz i would be happy to now so i could do better. This was my first and definitly not my last SongFiction. If anda like my menulis let me know if there's aong anda want me to do! I will be glad to try and attempt it. Thanks For Reading!!!!!!!!
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posted by GreenLight24
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Author's Note: Well hello faithful readers and pasangan of menulis alike! This is the sequel to the story "Blacktie." on this club. So, if u haven't read it, go ahead a check it out, as this requires some prior knowledge. If u have read it, then awesome! Revenge is a dish best served in a tuxedo! lol.

The nighttime air was calm and the sky was dyed with a deep and reflective blue-black shade. Blacktie was still giddy over the successful trial run of his mental recall technology. He brushed himself off lightly and straightened his bow tie as he began to walk down Meredith jalan, street towards his final...
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posted by whitelion
love, a word that can bring much joy atau much pain
it can put the jantung at ease atau under strain
and as that word to each other we spoke
it made our hearts complete and not broke

a feeling unlike any other i felt
as anda heavenly eyes made my jantung melt
anda were always the one, i could tell
cause from the moment i saw anda in cinta i fell

the words to describe anda a poet can never posses
anda were always the one that was hard to impress
anda wanted lebih than poetry and bunga could give
because only on true cinta your jantung could live

to capture my jantung for anda it only took
one moment one smile and one unforgettable look
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posted by KatiiCullen94
my thoughts at the moment..

1.
i dont know what people see anymore.
i think lebih people decide what it is they really saw, jsut to make them feel better.
Because anything can be anything anda want it to be.

2.
i dont think anda relize it when your changing, because your always feeling normal, its takes someone to look at you, that someone doesn't have to know you, to tell anda your wrong about self.

3.
The biggest mistake anda can make it letting someone too close, because like newtons first law, one will continue to do whatever it is doing unless a force interuppts. That force can be anything....
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 Edgar Allen Poe - #1
Edgar Allen Poe - #1
Okay, so this is a countdown of my most favorit authors of all time. It goes from igood #10 to magnficient #1.

I am also so happy for myself because this is technically my first work of menulis that I will soon publish.....

Alright, here it is;

1. Edgar Allen Poe - He has had a rough life filled with death, grief, abandonment, and misery, and his ways to cope with these difficult emotions were his magnificent stories and peoms that we enjoy to this day. Also, he and I can relate...
2. Stephen King - He has this enigmatic personality that makes anda wonder and puzzle, and he's a bit of an oddball...
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Source: not mine
posted by June4
A family who lives on a boat
Doesn’t want land but water to float.
Sometimes afraid to sink down
Of many holes they have around.
All what’s left is hope and faith.
A girl on the perahu is very sick,
But the thoughtless father’s brain never gave a kick.
Never thought about what would happen,
That’s why they’re lost with a big reason.
All what’s left is 35 feet of rope and faith.
Believing in your heart,
There is a big feeling where to start
Never give it up nor never have enough.
anda know what anda want,
anda know some things that anda can’t have.
All what’s left is hope and faith.
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posted by Cries_Bloodlova
Chapter 1
The party
“Eliza come on down its time to get ready!” my dad yelled from down stairs. Today was some sort of party and my dad was dragging me into it. To be honest I rather stay halaman awal and read I ran down stairs in my underwear. My dad dressed me in a poofy baby blue dress with tights underneath. He put black shoes that where shiny and open at the puncak, atas with a strap that went an across and a small heel on my feet. He did my bronze colored hair so that it was no longer flat; it had some poofy volume to it. Then he walks to a mirror.
“Look at this eye candy.” I berkata my father laughs....
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The bel, bell rang, Elizabeth, and Wyatt had to go to class. They had every class together except for first period. Elizabeth went to art class while Wyatt went to music.
All through art Elizabeth drew out a sketch of her left wrist. This piece of artwork would be hanging on the dinding outside the art room. She was glad people would see it. She was going to be curious to see how many people she could piss off.
* * *
During musik Wyatt stared out the window, thinking. Thinking of the best time to tell Elizabeth. He figured he would do it during Algebra two. It would be one of the easiest classes to...
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posted by Phoenix_Stone
Instead of hating your life, anda should be thankful that anda have one.

If anda ignore everything anda find horrible in your life and focus on the blessings anda have, then I feel that anda will become a better person.

At least anda have eyes to see with, while others see nothing.
At least anda have ears to hear with, while others hear nothing.

Think about all the blessings anda have.
I have seen one of the poorest people in the world.
I have seen them suffer.
A charity team started to offer them help but they berkata no. They told them, "There are others who are worse than us. Help them. We are fine."...
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posted by NekoTheif
It's soft like a blanket
It's cold like ice
We can't help but gravitate towards it
Even though it's not always nice
It gives us scaly pets
And sharp toothed nightmares
atau clucking little friends
It cools us off during the summer
Let's us sepatu luncur, skate on it during winter
Makes anda laugh with your friends
atau steals your breath
When it covers you
It refreshs anda
It cools you
Warms your toes
Tickles you
Freezes anda
Unforgiving ocean
Deep dark lake
Roaring river
Stale creek
Please with all ado
Let me thank anda too