menulis Article: Would anda guys read this?

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posted by BURITOES

Ok, so I just want to write a little summary to my story that I want to write called A Place of Our Own I'm basically menulis this to see if people will like it, and if they do, I'll write more. :)

So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 tahun old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 tahun old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 tahun on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave halaman awal and find help herself.

So yeah, if anda liked this, please komentar and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)

Kadaj and writer67 like this

writer67 not bad , the path to find enlightenment or help is always everlasting,groovy title, a place of our own;-]

awesome-ninja sounds good to me :)

BURITOES Thank you guys SO much, I really wanna write more, and I probably will. :)

2dolphn97 sounds pretty good tho its not my type of book i know tons of people who would read it

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Hell's Outlaw--Chapter 2

posted by HouseMindFreak

Again--I'm not the greatest writer nor do I aspire to be a great writer, this story is mainly for my entertainment so be kind with komentar if anda read it.

1st Chapter link

Chapter 2

Koda arrived at his uncle’s shop, parking his dirt bike behind the building and chaining it to the radiator. The sun was already high in the sky; beating down its unforgiving rays of heat down on him but the extreme heat never bothered him as it seemed his body was never affected oleh the sun.
His skin would repel the rays like a duck’s feathers would repel the water.
Inside he could hear his uncle yelling something...

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(Info) I'm Emo, Hot, Pregnant, and anda are...the father of my baby?!

posted by moolah

Lulu

Lulu Terence
Type:Emo
Likes:Neon colors,converse,piercings,kinda Lucas Wriht(sound it out as write)
Hates:Cody Dacars,Preps,cheerleaders,the school slut Molly
-Friendly(sometimes)
-feels happy whenever she's around her best friend,Andria
-Likes to party
-good at history,math,and writing
Doing right now:writing a story(under work)
Parents:Rich,movie stars,her mom's name is Emmalia Drake,and her father's is Joseph Terence,they are working on a movie...so Lulu is alone.

Cody Dacars
Type:Emo
Likes:piercings,neon,converse,kinda Andria LaFeiar
Hates:Lulu Terence,preps,jocks,Molly,cheerleaders
-every girl wants...

Leah's rose (contest entry)

posted by HecateA

-You coming? He asked. I starred at the bunga he'd just tucked behind my ear and that I'd just pulled out. The petals were soft and lucious red, overlapping each other perfectly. Perfect they are. Roses. Gracious, colorful, romantic...
-Sure Dan. I said. I took his hand and let him lead me to his car. He oppened the door of the Ford's shotgun kursi for me and closed it behind me; the perfect gentleman. He turned the old engine on.
-Where do anda want to go eat? He asked me.
-Doesn't matter. I said, stroking the petals.
-What about Chinese? He asked.
-Chinese works.
-The place with the good eggrolls...

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Learning to let go ch. one

posted by Funnygirl77

Leting go of the ones anda cinta is like falling out of an airplane with no para shoot

Leting go of the ones you love is like falling out of an airplane with no para shoot

Nothing is harder then losing the one anda love. The One person who understands anda the most, The one who give anything to keep anda aman, brankas and happy even if that means losing their own life to save yours. I learned this the hard way, When a tahun yang lalu today, I lost my parents, my brother and my sister, in a house fire.

May 19 2010 Monday 12:01 am
It's been a tahun since I lost my family, and it hasn't been any easier. I have nightmares about what happen, ever nightmare is the same. It starts off with me being with my family, Everyone is laughing and having a good time, then out of no where, there faces...

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cinta kills chapter 13

posted by hannah_vampire

I woke up and felt the cold hit me, it was a weird sensation and I felt light headed something was happening but I couldn’t work out what. It was around midday when I had decided to go and visit Blair, When I got out of my car I felt weird once again, there was a darkness around me atau at least some where around here. When I got near the door, I had seen that someone had forced it
Open. I pushed the door open and run inside, ‘No no Blair’ I thought as I saw him on the ground not breathing.

I got to the halaman awal phone but it was hard to dial the number in, I was shaking violently. Oni answered...

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Hate Your Smile, Hate Your Laugh. Hate The Way anda Made Me Fall In cinta With You(2)

posted by lollipopszx3

"Hello." I berkata to a boy sitting selanjutnya to me in English. I was hoping that they would be like Brett. This boy had purple eyes with gray flakes inside. His blonde hair was shoulder length and his bangs were covering his face.

He smiled at me. "Hey..." He berkata and leaned over to me. "What's your name?" He seemed pretty nice right now.

"I'm Leighton. What's yours?" I asked.

"Chase. I like your shirt." I looked down. It did look pretty nice. But I noticed that his eyes stared at my chest area for a little too long. I used my hand to cover it up. I think selanjutnya time I'll wear my kemeja that berkata 'My face...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 2 Hidden Creatures, Hidden friends Part 1

posted by H-A-T-R-M

“Alec, what the hell is a Rokurokubi?” berkata Marley. “I don’t bloody know, maybe some sort of ancient demon” berkata Alec. “We Rokurokubi are creatures like anda from the other realm; we are also seen in Japanese history” berkata Mia who seemed very happy to talk about her race. “So are anda some sort of badass, api breathing, soul sucking, body eating, shapeshifting, winged beast from the depths of the great abyss?” berkata Marley taking a few steps back. “Umm... my race aren’t like that, there are stories of us eating bodies and drinking blood but that is a false accusation, the...

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Who Are The Real Monsters: Chapter 1 Antiworld Part 3

posted by H-A-T-R-M

Some vampire have a certain side effect to when they bite a human. This mostly happens with pure bloods atau half bloods that gained their power from their vampire history. vampire who were bitten and had their blood changed will rarely get this trait because their blood was once human so the DNA does not release this effect in their blood. Marley, Alec and Opal each have a side effect when bitting someone. The People Alec bites start to concentrate a lot on their cinta life, this is because Alec cares a lot about his cinta life (One of the many reasons he does not bite men) The Side effect People...

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missing chapter one

posted by kayleebabee

"Carlisle we're home!" I called out as I raced through the house dragging Edward along with me.
"Carlisle? Esme? Rosalie? Emmet? Jazz? Alice?" I called my voice getting higher and higher out of panic.
"They aren't here Bella come on we'll go and find them." Edward berkata hoarsely taking my hand and tugging me toward the garage.
I flung my ferrari into reverse and screamed out of the garage. I hissed a stream of profanities as I raced toward Denali our first place to search.
"CRAP!" i screamed stomping on the brakes and screeching to a stop in the middle of the highway.
"I think we have been looking...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 37

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

I hated seeing her cry. Knowing it was my fault immediately made me hate myself, not that I didn't already. I needed to hear her voice, know she was really here.

Some part of me registered the fact that I'd sat down, and that I had touched her, if briefly. I had said, "Tell me."

She met my gaze, looking terrified. She closed her eyes firmly, as if she was living a nightmare. Maybe she was.

"I know I hurt you, and I'm sorry," she whispered, looking anywhere but at me. "I thought it would be better that way, anda had your whole life ahead of anda and I couldn't take that away because of my...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 30

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

"You have no idea what I've gone through!" the girl tearfully screams at me.
"You're right. I don't. I have no idea what you've gone through, but that doesn't mean I don't care," I say calmly.
"Why would anda care? anda don't even know me."
"And anda don't know me. How would anda know that I don't?"

Kayla hesitates a little before answering.

"Because sometimes, not even being related to someone is enough to make them want to care. My own goddamned mother didn't even stick around long enough for me to remember what she even looks like!"
"Growing up must have been pretty awkward."
"You have no idea,"...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 5

posted by BellaSwan636

Tia

When it comes to relationships, I'm no idiot. I could totally see what was coming. But come on; who didn't?

The new girl and Shaun. Plus he didn't like attack her atau anything when she sat at his table. What was so special about her, anyway?

Sure she was pretty, but there where way prettier girls, who'd each thrown themselves at him, (he wasn't that bad looking, actually) he'd ignored since freshmen year.

I flicked my hair over my shoulder. I could see she liked him too, she'd looked around the cafeteria yesterday and looked way disappointed when he wasn't there.

So I waited a little after...

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Gods: Chapter 6: Love.....ugh

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Later on that hari when I am in my bedroom and Ethan is downstairs watching the game. I lay on my tempat tidur doing nothing but thinking. I hear my name being called I get up and walk downstairs. Ethan is at the door, someone is asking for me. I start to walk towards the door and see Adam he sees me and smiles I smile back. Ethan turns and sees me his expression is anger, he walks away. I walk up to Adam. “Hey, I didn’t see anda at school today” he said. I wondered how he knew where I lived and why was he here. “Ah yeah I’m a bit sick” I berkata putting on a husky voice. “I see that anyway,...

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The Powerful Word, "Because"

posted by Pushkin319

THE POWER OF BECAUSE

You're standing in a long line to pay for your groceries. Which sentence do anda think will get anda through?

1. "May I go ahead of anda please?" Put on a really sincere face.

2. "May I step ahead of anda please, because I'm really late for my doctor's appointment?"

Using the word "because" will get anda closer to 'yes' in almost any circumstance. Why? Because your request is followed oleh a reason, an explanation for the request. If the request is reasonable, then why not say yes?

The word refers the listener to some background, some circumstances, a framework related to the request....

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The Devil

posted by Drxmarxma_101

The doors have opened for all to come
The stage is darkened, all anda hear is a distant hum
When all have seated the center light turns on
There stood a man in a long over-sized robe
His hat, his beard, his tiny eyes
Scan the room as the back people rise
With a smirk, a loud pop is heard
A dark gray awan of smoke fills the room

In the center of the ring five people align
One's bearded, one's horned
Another is broken, and the last two conjoined
Gasps and widened eyes light the room
Each unique human just stand there tampilkan no fear
A little child begins to clap
Followed oleh others when the five creatures...

disney Females as Real Humans

posted by DisneyGirlFan0

Ever wonder what the disney princesses look like in real life? Well, now anda can! I looked through many pictures of women emulating disney princesses atau just disney females in general and found many that looked almost real! I picked from the ones I thought looked most like the character, and I was astonished at how well these people made themselves resemble those characters. So, be amazed at how much these women look like the character they are portraying and enjoy!

Ariel from The Little Mermaid

Aurora from Sleeping Beauty

Belle from The Beauty And The Beast

Cinderella from Cinderella

Esmeralda from The Hunchback Of Notre Dame

Jane from Tarzan

Jasmine from Aladdin

Kida from Atlantis: The Lost Empire

Megara from Hercules

Merida from Brave

Mulan from Mulan

Mulan as a Male

Nala from The Lion King

Pocahontas from Pocahontas

Rapunzel from Rapunzel

Snow White from Snow White And The Seven Dwarves

Tiana from The Princess And The Frog

Tinkerbell from Peter Pan

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Do We See What We Are Doing?- Poem

posted by Firewriter

People down every turn
Pain inside their hearts
A girl with scars on her wrists
A boy with a pisau in his chest
She hides in the dark
Wondering when the pain with end
He stands up to fight in defense
Only to get knocked back down again
She fights with her parents
They don't wanna support the child
She's left to fend for herself in the cold
Alone with the child
Do we see what we are doing when we say the things we say?
Do we see who we are hurting with the actions that we're taking?
What we need
Are broken families reconciled
We need hearts to mend, scars to heal and battles to end
We. Need. Love
To stand up for the broken
We. Need. Hope
To give a hand to the hopeless
We need the world to care.
What are we doing with the words we are saying?
Who are we changing
And what effects are they having?
Lets be the change.

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How I Feel About Stefan, Elena and Damon

posted by daisymae1

Disclaimer: *I'm only on Season 3 Episode 16 & I have not read the books!*

The Vampire Diaries is my guilty pleasure. It's painfully corny, overly cliche and not to mention has some less than perfect akting but for some reason; I'm addicted. I have all this pent up frustration about the situation between the three main characters so I've finally broke down and decided I need to talk about it. This is a little overview as to how I feel about each character.

Let's start with Elena:

I can't stand Elena, no matter how hard I try, I just can't. I have sympathy for her because she has suffered...

menulis a story and hope that anda like the start

posted by Jinx_Strangeman

The lingering light was obliterated oleh the rapidly falling night. The once ikan salmon, salmon and purple sky transformed into a vast expanse of jet-black that engulfed the town. A canopy of luminous stars materialized amongst the ocean of blackness. Some were dull, merely flickering into existence every now and then, but there was an adequate amount of shimmering stars to illuminate the dark, moonless night. The lake glistened, mirroring the dazzling assemblage of glittering stars and the luminescence from the moon. The faint wind brushed against the water's surface, the ripples ruffled the stillness of...

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So Sad :'(

posted by CupcakeMal714

I read this and had to pass it on.
my name is sarah
i am three
my eyes are swollen
i cannot see
i must be stupid
i must be bad
what else could have made
my daddy so mad
i wish i were better
i wish i werent ugly
then maybe my mommy
would still wanna hug me
i cant do a wrong
i can't speak at all
or else i locked up
all hari long
when i wake up
im all alone
the house is dark
my folks arent home
when my mommy does come home
i try to be nice
so maybe i'll just get
one wipping tonight
i just heard a car
my daddy is back
from charlie's bar
i heard him curse
my name is called
i press myself
against the wall
i try to hide
from his evil...