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Im no good at this do anda think anda could help me? i need so much help:(

I have to write two poems, one about cinta the other one about any animal. I CANT DO IT:/// i have tried and tried and nothing is coming out of it. :(( so if anda could please help me and maybe write atau get me started on a poem for cinta atau a animal that would be awesome!

if anda help me i will give anda one prop.

if anda write one for me i will be a fan of you.

if anda write one about cinta and a animal for me i will be a fan, give anda two pujian anddd post a answer on this spot just saying how great anda aree:))

thanks so muchh!

 Team_Edward77 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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TheQuartzKid said:
I really don't think anda should have someone write it for you. That's kind of cheating, in lebih ways than one. However, a good way to get started is to brainstorm. I know it sounds overrated and cheesy, but it does work. Like magic. Trust me.

When menulis about love, anda may want to use some personal connections. Or, if anda prefer not to, there's always the option of using the plotline of a well-known cinta story, such as Romeo and Juliet, Macbeth, etc.

Now for the animal poem! If I were you, I'd probably end up going with a comparison of some sort. anda know, like comparing an animal with events in the world around you, emotions anda have, atau even an experience you've had before. Then again, if anda don't want to go for a comparison, there's always the lebih natural approach. anda could write about an animal's behavior in nature, atau what anda think represents atau symbolizes that animal.

Then again, that's just me. ...Besides, I don't know what the specific requirements are, so I can't really help anda with that.

Oh, and again, because I cannot stress this enough... BRAINSTORM! I'M TELLING YOU!
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amethyst44 said:
Ok let's see...

Animal:Dog
I look up from my chewwy,
With pleading eyes I beg,
In hopes that he will his new buddy,
Instead of sit in his bed.
Rain is lebih entertaining now,
Than to watch and wait for him,
'Cause now he just doesn't see how,
I just stomped my foot in a pin. (random)
So one hari while I try to lick it out,
He comes and inspects it for me,
He calls the vet and takes me to care,
And all the way I had a friend there.
(that wasn't so good but it just came to me. sorry)

Let's try... love:
In desperate times I turn to one
The one that sings before the morning sun
Blossoming light into my lovely day
Because with cinta there is no words to say.
oleh afternoon, I grow wearly weak
For my cinta is shinning to bright for me to see
But if he is happy, then I am happy
Because with cinta there isn't always the sappy.
During night, he prowls oleh my bed
Blocking my dreams from further dread
Sleeping upon his own starlight
Because with cinta there is no strife.
(that's better, I think)

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1-2vampire said:
Love:
The golden glow was bright
The brightest it had ever been
When I was in this world
I can always see him selanjutnya to me
All thoughts of life were foggy
And his cinta made me feel groggy
That golden glow I want so much
to be a part of me
But now as I look into his eyes
I have come to see
That I was always a part of it
For I am a part of him
I cinta him and he loves me
His voice is the sweetest hymn
My hand in his
Is that my hand?
I don't know myself anymore
For I am with the sweetest person
We will last forevermore


Animal: Dolphin
The sleek silver body
Diving with the waves
Swimming playfully
Not far from Saunder's caves
The sun is gleaming
The dolphins are beaming
And the ocean blue is at it's might
Though crash and swirl it may do,
It's nothing compared to the dolphin's delight
In cutting through the ocean blue
It's gleaming body bright,
As it dives and swims
The graceful dolphin's flight


Hope this helps :D
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Snoredom said:
Poets in love:

I've no idea who has wrote it,
Vibrant words like juicy melon.
Could be no one but a poet,
To write stirring words, my jantung to dwell on.

Does his smell taste as well as his words on my tongue?
Would I, but for him, take a breath from my lung?
Will my head pull my jantung out of this foolish caper?
Do I cinta the poet, atau an inky piece of paper?

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Lisne said:
Well.. poems on cinta and animals... hmm. Im sorry but im emo and i would write aboat emo cinta on the cinta poems,and on the animals... Some simple ones like... Oh! I like turtles! example:Turtles are born on eggs near the sea.
the mother is gone near between.
The baby turtles soon will hatch.
Some into the sea,
Some on the birds mouth.
It is true that the mother cant protect them
Still there are many survived turtles,
Connected between,
Hoping tht there mother is soon between.
I hope that helped.
And poems are easy just follow wat ur brain says.
lol not jantung says.^^
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sehdt said:
anda have to do the work yourself but heres some thoughts to help. For the cinta poem think of all the words that mean the same as cinta atau are connected with love. That might help get your mind thinking about what cinta means. Now for the animal one anda first need an animal to write about so make a daftar of as many binatang as anda can try to find strange ones then see if one takes your fancy and write a daftar of words that describe the animal and work from that. Its a long time since I had to do something like that but I do know its not easy. Hope something here helps good luck.
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