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i need some serious feedback on my story!please read it and give me some honest feedback,it dosent matter if its harsh atau helpful atau positive, i just need the feedback to keep going on that story atau not.!thx :]

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mental1212 said:
where is it

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Good question.
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dylin1 said:
Already read it. I cinta IT!
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-HuddyLove- said:
Nice beginning! It could use a little touching up as far as grammar goes, but other than that, it's a great start. I loved the first line! Very funny. =)
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