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The sun peered over the crescent-shaped bukit, hill that morning as it always did on a cloudless hari and looked down upon the large village that was illuminated oleh its shining face. The trees rustled as the Vigeratii birds took flight with the morning light now leaking in through the branches to beat down on their black feathery bodies and as they tore through the thickets and the fields they let out their morning squawks that shot through every household in the village like a rushing tidal wave. This is the part of the hari when the adults would be unwillingly stirred from their rest so that they could prepare for work while the hard-sleeping adolescents would simply groan and turn over on their side as they shrugged off the birds’ cry and resumed their slumber uninterrupted. Soon, the bel, bell tower at the ornate gothic styled church would begin ringing as soon as its caretaker, a scrawny fellow oleh the name of Link Watkins, was able to force himself from his tempat tidur and up to the tower. He was a young man, still in his early twenties, with jeruk, orange curly hair, pale skin, and a face splashed with freckles. As the Vigeratiis birds’ cry woke him he rose from his tempat tidur with heavy eyelids and put on his warm furry slippers and mantel mandi, jubah mandi before stepping out of his house, which always fell under the shadow of the church every morning, and dragged his feet to that holy place of worship.
He felt his skinny legs wobble on the uneven ground that had already softened oleh the morning dew and he placed a hand on the church’s gray stone walls for support until he arrived at the front steps which were just as grand as the rest of the place. Looking down at him from above the church doors was a stone malaikat with a very pretty young face and a pair of soft looking hands held outstretched in front of her like she was trying to reach down and help some invisible man off the ground. Her bare feet stood on a platform that was carved into the church’s outer wall, and on the platform these words w