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So it's about a regular 14 tahun old girl. At school on her 15th birthday, her teacher tells her that she is a witch, with powers and magic and such. He tells her that he is a wizard, and that he has to start training her once she turned 15. He also tells her of this evil force (I still need a name for it, so let's call it the Thing) that can shape-shift and that has been behind a lot of the disasters that have happened since humans have walked the Earth, disasters the Thing made to wipe out the Wizarding population. She must unite with other wizards and witches, which have been rare since the Thing has been at work, to help fight it. The thing is, she must find them on her own. She must also learn everything about being a witch, and fast, before the Thing's selanjutnya attack. But can she do it, and do it without her parents and friends noticing?

There's also a twist at the end, but I don't want to give it away yet :)
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call the thing the Darkness ;0 if it hasnt alredy bin taken xD
1-2vampire posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Yeah... the darkness got taken oleh "A Wrinkle in Time" so anda might get in trouble for using that. Here's what I do when I name things in my stories. Think of two adjectives atau a phrase that describes "The Thing" and translate those two things into latin (if anda don't take latin in school, copy and paste this link linkto your browser). Once you've translated the words atau phrase, combine them to try and get one word. Take harry potter for example. J.K Rowling's spells are almost all latin. Expecto Patronum (the spell that fends off dementors) translates as "I will expect the protector". In my story, there is a land that is fabled to literally sing atau make noises so it is called the land of Sonaterra. Sonna in latin means to sing and Terra means land. Combine them and what do anda get? Sonaterra
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i think i'm gonna do olbrisatus. i got it oleh mistake after trying to pronouce "isilolbrisatsas", which means I Say I'm Laughing Out Loud, But Really I'm Staring At The Screen And Smirking (xneville_rocksx made it up), and it sounded perfect to me :)
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robothor1111 said:
Interesting premise...not the biggest witch/wizard person but I'd read that.
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thanks :)
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Aisuanime said:
Its soundz very interesting X)

Im not much of a fan of magic but thiz iz goodz

U should write it *gives a thumbz up*

~Amor Aisu anime
(Triple A) XD X) XP
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thanks, i'm gonna write it as soon as i think it through a bit more. i don't like to write until i know pretty much exactly wut i'm writing, then some extra stuff just comes to me while i write
BellaCullen96 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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lol me too, high five! XD
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okz well good luckz X)
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trailofexcuses said:
Honestly, I don't like how she finds out on her 15th birthday. That sounds too Harry Potter for me, and I'm sure I'm not the only one who thought that. I like the evil force idea. Why does her teacher tell her she's a witch? anda need to really really dig and use your creativity. What if she was born a witch and she knew but didnt tell her parents? Then one hari she was out in a forest and maybe some cop came and arrested her. However when she got to the station, the cop told her that he's a wizard and that there are evil forces at work. And that he desperately needs her help. He makes it seem like she goes to jail (they go to court and everything) then she goes off with him to unite with the other wizards. I think it sounds more...realistic. But that's just me of course.
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lol
1-2vampire posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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yeah, i know wut u mean about the harry potter thing. i am membaca harry potter again right now and i am trying to finish it up before menulis because that's the problem i am likely to have, to write another harry potter book. i'll try menulis it as her b-day, but if it is too much like hp, i'll change it.
BellaCullen96 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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yeah I thought harry potter too...
emmett posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
1-2vampire said:
very good, is it gonna b a trilogy atau a singular book?
i think that it shuld b a trilogy, if i must say so.
anyway i wuld deffo read that, tho i wuld read a lot of fantasy. but dont go straight into "i just found out i was a witch" for the beginning she can like wake up on her 15th birthday, but it's school, and at the end of the hari her teacher can hold her back and talk to her. say "you're a witch" and then CUT, end of chapter. anda dont have to, but this is just my advise, because a lot of ppl ino that writ stories go straight into things, so that the whole book is shorter and some details yu may need wuld hav been cut out.
nywaay i think yu shuld call the Thing thing the....
The Darkness ;0 lol

-- August Parle xx
^^ a name i hope to be remembered. :)
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yeah, i was thinking of making it a trilology. and yeah, i was actually planning on the beginning to be her at school and tampil her life how it normally is, then how it changes once she finds out the truth, but i am trying to do it in a non-harry potter-ish sorta way. anda know wut i mean?
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bookworm12345 said:
sounds great id difinatly read it for the thing im using this in time travlers(im some wat obbsed with time travel books)i made up time travlers the dark one atau nebula atau google names that mean evil
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