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Im stuck. Need help please! Any ideas what I can put next?
Here's what I have so far, its nothing and probably sucks, but I need feed back on what to do next...
"Help!" He could hear her voice but he couldn't see her face. He outstretched his hand into the darkness. Trying to find her. All he could see was a glimpse of those icy blue eyes as their fingertips met, then disappeared. He pulled himself up from the limb he grabbed onto as the were falling, but he was the only one to get up. Alone. Up on puncak, atas of the ledge once again, he took a few careful steps back from the edge. Fingertips brushed his cheek. He could smell it. Vanilla and cinnamon. Her scent.
"Samira?" He called her name. No reply. He could hear her laugh, then her scream. "Samira!" He woke up, kicking and scrambling out of his soaked sheets. He tore them off, and lay there, dirty. Coated in dust and sweat. His hands still ached from hanging on the limb, and the scent was still in the air. Out of breath, he remained still. Laying on his tempat tidur in his shorts, staring at the grey ceiling.
"Help!" He could hear her voice but he couldn't see her face. He outstretched his hand into the darkness. Trying to find her. All he could see was a glimpse of those icy blue eyes as their fingertips met, then disappeared. He pulled himself up from the limb he grabbed onto as the were falling, but he was the only one to get up. Alone. Up on puncak, atas of the ledge once again, he took a few careful steps back from the edge. Fingertips brushed his cheek. He could smell it. Vanilla and cinnamon. Her scent.
"Samira?" He called her name. No reply. He could hear her laugh, then her scream. "Samira!" He woke up, kicking and scrambling out of his soaked sheets. He tore them off, and lay there, dirty. Coated in dust and sweat. His hands still ached from hanging on the limb, and the scent was still in the air. Out of breath, he remained still. Laying on his tempat tidur in his shorts, staring at the grey ceiling.
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