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Im stuck. Need help please! Any ideas what I can put next?

Here's what I have so far, its nothing and probably sucks, but I need feed back on what to do next...
"Help!" He could hear her voice but he couldn't see her face. He outstretched his hand into the darkness. Trying to find her. All he could see was a glimpse of those icy blue eyes as their fingertips met, then disappeared. He pulled himself up from the limb he grabbed onto as the were falling, but he was the only one to get up. Alone. Up on puncak, atas of the ledge once again, he took a few careful steps back from the edge. Fingertips brushed his cheek. He could smell it. Vanilla and cinnamon. Her scent.
"Samira?" He called her name. No reply. He could hear her laugh, then her scream. "Samira!" He woke up, kicking and scrambling out of his soaked sheets. He tore them off, and lay there, dirty. Coated in dust and sweat. His hands still ached from hanging on the limb, and the scent was still in the air. Out of breath, he remained still. Laying on his tempat tidur in his shorts, staring at the grey ceiling.
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8theGreat said:
(This reminds me of Beautiful Creatures!)
I assume this is the beginning of the story you're working on?

If so, this would be the time to introduce us to the story. What is the setting? Genre? Who are your characters, what do they do with their lives, etc? How old are your characters, and what could a reader come to expect from your story?
The beginning of the story is when anda should introduce your settings/characters/ideas and begin to give your readers an idea of what the story is about. Give us a feel for who your characters are, the world they live in, and what the story may be about.
I suggest anda come up with the best way to provide all this to your readers in a way that is interesting and related to the plot.
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Beautiful Creatures is my favorit book! This is where i got the idea from. Thank anda so much!
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