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a vampire story...

ok i am menulis a vampire story and i wrote the prologue and chapter one, but now i am questioning my plot, witch was that this girl named stacy, is mugged and stabbed. she then gets saved oleh a vampire named james and he trys to change her into a vamp and he ends up tring her into a half vampire. because of her ancestors blood. and she continues her life in high school and continues to fight the earg to feed on humans ...

oh and im on chaper 3 after she just see's james and i am extremely stuck and dont know what to do
 CharmedFan4eva_ posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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sapherequeen said:
Oh! anda already know what I think :D

Good luck, though! I can't wait to read it....


A acak icon. lol =D
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 Oh! anda already know what I think :D Good luck, though! I can't wait to read it.... A acak icon. lol =D
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thx!! yea i added this before i asked u! lol
CharmedFan4eva_ posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Anytime :)
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NewAuthor said:
Have anda considered having James taking her to meet other vampire and then trying to get her to come into the "vampire world"? If anda want to do something with like a war atau something anda could hace a war between like her family and the vampire that want her. Just my suggestion though.
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