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Erm....help....please? (writing mature rated content...don't know what I'm doing... -_-)

Yeaaaaaahhhhh....um....there's a point in the fiction I'm menulis where two of my characters get to a certain point in there relation ship (hint, hint: its a VERY strong relation ship and it involves...physical contact...nyeh...) and I was about to write this little scene involving that, but right when I started, I realized "Wait...I don't know how to write this kind of stuff...crap...How do I write this stuff?!!!" Then I just slammed my notebook shut, hid it in my desk, left it there for a week, came back to it and realized I STILL don't know what I'm doing...ehhhhhh.
SO...I need help, big time. I don't know whether it should be lightly detailed atau heavily detailed atau if I should just write an "introduction" to it then skip to the scene that comes afterwards. And if I do end up menulis in detail, HOW I even do that to begin with, like how I write this atau how I write that. (I feel so awkward asking this but I can't just quit my story and not continue) .... dang.... I'm seventeen and I don't know how to write a freaking cinta scene.....ugh. So, please, any saran will help. Thanks.
 Spiritwolf1011 posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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MasterRed said:
I would say just write an "introduction". If anda write the scene without knowing how to do it, it's going to be sloppy and lower quality than the rest of your writing.
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EgoMouse said:
Not sure why you're even menulis this but mmm...I'll try to give advice. Not that I'm even an expert, I just wrote like a paragraph of "physical contact" this one time lol.
1. Watch p*rn. Immersive, ja? atau maybe read fan fiction. They have a lot of interesting moments. Keep in mind, realistically people usually don't last that long..
2. Plan ahead. Is it oral, penetrating, kinky, everything? It helps setting the atmosphere. They're all pretty different.
3. Depending on your story, it can be detailed if its important atau just light menulis if its not too important but enough for a mention.
4. Foreplay (talking and oral) comes before penetrating. Put lebih details in foreplay. This includes thoughts. The detik part is pretty much repetition, so only what they feel is important and not so much the action.
5. Ending part needs to be a huge climax. If the scene is intense, the end has to be intense. If its not, its not good contact, huh?
6. Usually people sleep afterwards atau clean up.
7. If all else fails, anda can talk to a pervert. anda can probably message me and I'll think of something to write xDD
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TN3SoulFairy said:
I have read a few of those kind of senses and I have realized that anda don't have to be very descriptive for you're readers to understand how it happened and what is happening. If anda are menulis those kinds of senses, then anda are menulis for a mature, older audience and anda won't have to be descriptive if your readers know what anda are talking about and the point anda are getting to.
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