What Do anda All Think of This Story?

It's not finished yet but I've got a lot of it down c: I am thinking of making it a creepypasta story, but am not sure c:

Mekashi: The Other Side


The story of how Mekashi became Mekashi. The events that create her, the events that unleash her, the events that drive a girl into becoming a psychotic monster who we know as Mekashi.


The sun had risen out of its slumber, inflicting the world with its powerful light. It was a Wednesday morning, the middle of the week and the middle of the school year. Inside a house, inside a room, a bedroom to be exact, a girl slept soundly in her tempat tidur until an alarm played some sort of a Metal song. Two detik after, she took her iPod which played the alarm and she shut it off. Sitting up and stretching, she yawned softly as she looked out the window, feeling excited.
“Another hari at school, yay I get to see my baby!” She stood up from the warm tempat tidur and started to strip out of her pjs. Starting with her shorts, she pulled them down and threw them onto the bed, she also threw off her tank that also ended up on the bed. She went to her closet and searched through her clothes to find what to wear. She spotted her favorit kemeja which was a kemeja with the image of a zombie and bats on it, saying ‘The Black Dahlia Murder’. She grabbed that then she grabbed a pair of black, skinny jeans. She also grabbed a black sports bra as well. The bra was put on first followed oleh the shirt. She slid on her jeans and zipped them up, then taking a pair of black socks, she put them on along with a pair of skater shoes.
“Ready for the day!” She exclaimed as she walked straight into the kitchen, pulling out two oreos and a can of Coca-Cola. She lifted the tab on puncak, atas of the can then snapped it open and took a long sip before placing the Oreos in her mouth. She grabbed her backpack and headed out the door, shutting and locking it behind her. She headed toward the bus stop where a dirty-blond haired boy stood.