New Moon

When anda really think about it, Twilight consists of 50% talk about how hot Edward is. 30% of the word "chagrin" and 20% other. Even my English teacher berkata that it's written at a 5th grade membaca level, to which I completely agree. Bella and Edward aren't "in love" all they're experiencing is lust, obsession, infatuation. What good does Edward do to Bella? The whole time anda hear about how perfect he is. It's easy to make a perfect character, anyone can do it. Besides, according to SMeyer, Bella is an "independent woman." Well, how is she independent? All of her decisions are based on Edward...

Chapter 18
I opened my eyes I was not were I was before I fainted I was somewhere dark I could recognize the scents I was in italy!how did I get here
-oh dear Bella anda finally are awake!we didn’t know if we will see anda vampire alive again!
He came closer looking at my shocked and confused face then alec came in
-oh Bella your awake!
He came closer and hugged me like he was my best friend atau something I didn’t want to offend him so I hugged him back
-what's going on?
I asked as I was pushing alec away
-oh Bella anda were sleeping here for 100 years!and now anda finally woke!
-i fainted for a 100...

Chapter 17
Bella pov
We were playing chess on the sofa and as always I was winning! Hehehe it feels so great every time I beat him
-u lose again!
I berkata and clapped my hands
-yeah your good at this thing
-well what can I say……………
He sttood up and hugged me
-tell me how anda do this?
He whispered
I touched his head and tapped it hard and said
-just think.
-ok
He kissed my forehead and went upstaires to change cause we were going hunting
He came back and we raced deep in the green greeny jungel I always hated that color I like bron ,warm warna like the sun…………………….
I stopped at my...

1. Force him to wear a leash and kerah and tie him to a pole.
2. Put up fliers saying "Lost Dog" with his picture on it.
3. Give him mouthwash for his birthday. Tell him he has dog breath.
4. Constantly remind him that Bella would rather ‘die’ then be with him.
6. When he’s a werewolf steal his pants.
7. Paint his motor bike hot pink.
8. Buy him a cat.
9. Name it Edward.
10. Buy him dog food. Act offended when he won’t eat it.
11. Ask him what he’s getting Edward and Bella for a wedding present.
12. Tell him Bella is allergic to dogs.
14. Call the dog pound on him when he fazes
15. Lock him...

I've got writers block. NO! And the world comes crashing down around me :(

No really I do have writers block. menulis this chapter was hard so, I hope it turned out good!

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When we got into Alice's car she was about to burst. I could just tell that she wanted to know everything that had happened when she was gone. And knowing Alice, she wouldn't be happy until she knew every last detail.

"So tell me, how did it go?" Alice berkata while trying not to sound too anxious.

"AMAZING!" I blurted out before I could contain myself....

The Character

Name: Riley

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: None

About Them: Riley was among the first humans that Victoria changed into a vampire as she formed her army. Victoria convinced Riley that she loved him and convinced him to serve her faithfully. Riley's job consisted of corralling the other new vampires, telling them what their mission was, and what they were supposed to do. It was Riley who came into Bella's room to get her scent in Eclipse and spared Charlie's life because he was mature enough to resist a human's blood. It was Riley that had to face Edward in the clearing. Edward tried...

bellas' pov

"if anda promise to explain yes" i berkata that made him laugh

"yes i promise i have to tell anda even though that will mean i will lose you" edwards berkata and put his hand on my waist and we started to walk into the garden

we walk silently for a while until we arrive to a bench and we sat there

edward look at me and he touch my cheek
"you look extreamly beautiful is not fair" he berkata and i laugh a little

"look whose talking" i berkata while i blush an intense red

he look deeply with intensity my eyes my breathing speed and i was getting light headed i had to look away from his golden eyes...